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SS upd8 PG 10 khushi's engagement revealed to ASR (Page 6)

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Posted: 09 November 2011 at 5:47am | IP Logged
Nice update! It makes it all the more interesting to read and looking forward to the next part.Thanks for the PM.Hug

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Posted: 09 November 2011 at 8:58am | IP Logged
nice update..please continue...

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Posted: 09 November 2011 at 9:54am | IP Logged
Just read your OS..! It was fantastic!! Love the way you are taking...

Please me when you update next.. Thanks!

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Posted: 09 November 2011 at 10:01am | IP Logged
U have done full score justice to both Arnav and Khushi.Kya bandha hai yaar...sagai mein bhi jabardasthi.But loved it.Smile

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Posted: 09 November 2011 at 6:14pm | IP Logged
I am thinking where to take it from here.. anguthi to pehnwadi, coz i wanted to see this happening ab aage kya hoga soch rahi hun..., i update as soon as i get something logically illogical and update

thanks yaar sab ko...i never thought i could write anything which would be appreciated so well... thanks :) you guys have shown you confidence through your comments and liking...

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Posted: 09 November 2011 at 8:09pm | IP Logged
really enjoyed the post...plz continue it and do PM me even for next update Smile

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Posted: 09 November 2011 at 8:25pm | IP Logged

that was awesome!!

read all the parts in one go and they were all brilliant!
plzz plzz add me to your pm list!!
 

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Posted: 10 November 2011 at 3:43am | IP Logged
Part 4

Khushi glared at the ring...she couldn't understand what was arnav up too.. this wasn't her ring! her ring was simple...and this was very elegant and looked very expensive!!... she looked back at arnav and at anjali who was already calling out for lavanya to see the ring " dekho lavanya kitni pyari ring hai" lavanya looks at her ring and says "wow khushi its amazing... ASR hamari engagement ring lene ke time we'll definitely to go this jeweler from where khushi's would be has bought her this ring!"

             
             Khushi looks at arnav who has a straight face...no expression to read..she tried to figure out what he did and why but his eyes would just not give it away except for the fact that he kept looking at her every now and then...she decided to tell anjali and lavanya that this is not her ring " anjaliji darasal ye anguthi hamari nahi..." arnav cuts her mid sentence and says "Khushi kumari gupta tum har din agar late tak rukogi to ye mat sochna is ghar se tumhe har baar koi drop karne jaega... time dekho kitna hua hai..tumhe ab jaana chahiye aur humein kuch der akele chod dena chahiye..." khushi looks at time and so does anjali.. anjali says " are khushiji ye to bahut late ho gaya aapko.. 8:45pm ho gaye..pata hi nahi chala"

         
                                   khushi says "ji anjaliji lekin hum..."anjali says" khushiji abhi bhi aapki zarurat hai humein, aap aati rahiyega.. hum baki baat kal karenge thik hai?!" and smiles.. la interupts her and says " tum itni raat ko tumhe hum akela nahi bhej sakte haina di.. aur wo bhi ab tumhari engagement ho gayi hai... tumhe kuch ho gaya to tumhare would be to humein nahi chodenge!" and they share a laugh, whereas khushi and arnav share glances at each other. " arnav aaj khushiji ko ghar chod aao.. na please.. hamare liye dekho bahut late ho gaya hai" ... khushi suddenly jumps and says " nahi anjali ji hum.." no ways chamkili..asr please ... chamikili jao.." and they see her off in the car


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               its a calm drive on a calm and empty road...khushi breaks the silence " aap ye kya kar rahe hai..?! humein hamari anguthi wapas dijiye... aap bhi jante hain ye hamari anguthi nahi hai" and she starts taking the ring off...Arnav brakes the car real hard "aisa karne ki sochna bhi mat.. isse tumse alag karne ke liye nahi pehnaya hai KKG.. aur us dusri anguthi ka na pehle ko matlab tha na aage koi hoga... don't you dare" khushi gets scared of his anger at this point and sits calm and at some point of the drive arnav turns to look at her and sees that she's crying...

            he brings the car to a halt on the highway...khushi immediately gets down..and starts walking, arnav follows her pulls her to himself... khushi breaks down but makes a point not to give up to his ever changing moods and asks him emotionally.." aap chahte kya hai arnavji? aap kyun aisa kar rahe hai humein nahi samajh aa raha.. aapki kuch dino main sagyi hai...fir shaadi hai..aur aap aise mujhse..(she cuts her sentence between and says )hum apne aama babuji ko kya jawab denge hamari anguthi ke baare main?!


                    he brings a crying khushi back in to the car and drops her home.. while she's getting down she turns to look back at him.. they look at each other till payal comes and finds khushi staring at a pair of eyes looking at her with lot of passionate love...she taps her shoulder lightly and says" andar chale" and arnav drives back home...

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Arnav takes his own time to drive back home... he comes late and as he enters his room..he sees anjali at poolside " di aap yahan .. itni de hogayi aap soi nahi?!"... " nahi chote.. wo humein tumse baat karni thi..lavanya ke baare main!"

         "ab kya hua di?"... "tum  batao chote, tumhi bata sakte ho...hum to pooch rahe hai..! arnav frowns at this sudden change in her talk...

        anjali changes the topic and says " acha chalo chodo.. hum na wo ring ke samples dekh rahe the jo humnein mangwaye the lekin un main se ek ring missing hai?. are wahi jo tumhe pasand thi!...tumnein kisi ko pehnai kya?!... arnav gets shocked on hearing this and says kya?! to this anjali says " are hum bhi na... jisse pyar karoge usse hi pehnaoge na?! jisse dur nahi jaa paoge usse hi pehnaoge na?! lavanya ko hi to pehnai hogi tumne.. main bhi na...good night chote" and she just goes off from there...

 arnav follows her calls "di.. di .. meri baat suno..."anjali turns and says " abhi nahi chote.. tum sochlo.. samajhlo..tab humein batana..aur hum jante hai tum humein kya batana chahte ho..lekin sach kahen to batana to hum tumhe  chate hai.."
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what's is your opinion guys... am i getting lost in the bushes now?! hehe



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