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Posted: 07 November 2011 at 6:45pm | IP Logged
This thought just crossed my mind last night about how ASR would come to know about our Khushi's engagement and this is how he would react being  ASR! so the scene goes like khushi has gone to RM for some work (i dont really care what work, just go there when ASR is there :))

       This is after her engagement is done...next morning

Anjali sends khushi to ASR's room (as OP JP, DAYA and any other person is not avl) to give some of his official papers which he left in the study last night...she hesitates but then goes to his room thinking that she'll just give and come back, so she proceeds and knocks the door, ASR asks her to come in.. she goes in and as she is giving him the papers a paper or two fall below his work table, she apologizes and bends to get the papers. the hand in which she's wearing ring is up on the table holding it and she bends below the table to get the paper with other hand, ASR is busy working and trying hard not to concentrate on her.. but then in one glance he notices her ring, and frowns...

      He stand and comes near to her hand (to the side where she's bent).. and touches her ring..khushi frowns and instantly stands up to notice ASR staring her engagement ring... she swallow's a lump in her throat...and tries to go.. but ASR is holding her hand and he ask's her  " yeh kya hai" she remains calm doesn't respond, he gets furious and shouts at her then she angrily looks up to him and tells him when they don't have anything to do with each other why is he bothered about it and starts to walk away...


ASR pulls her back (like he did when she told him charecter dheela) and asks her again..they both share the pain in their heart through their eyes... khushi closes her eyes and remembers him telling "tumhari ya tumahre payal ki koi ehmiyat nahi hai meri zindagi main" she opens her eyes looks straight in to his and  says " hamari sagai ho gayi hai"  and notices the moment she says this his eyes are furiously looking at her and he grips her arm even more tightly...she expects him to say something.. something which can tell her whats going on in his mind..  but the only words he utters is " tumhari himmat" and with his other free hand forcefully pulls the ring out of her finger and throws it and says "kisi aur ki nahi"...releasing her from his grip he utters his golden words


" get out"



kaisa the yaar...?Smile

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Edited by arshi1 - 14 November 2011 at 5:07am

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Posted: 07 November 2011 at 7:03pm | IP Logged
Gud one.i lykd d way asr reactd,it ws quite dffrnt frm many of d ffs postd here..

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Posted: 07 November 2011 at 7:49pm | IP Logged
Super! Pls make him throw that rotten ring into the pool n I will be satisfied. After all, he paid for it. How ironic, isn't it? Arnav pays for Khushi's & Shyam's sagai ring!Wink

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Posted: 07 November 2011 at 7:57pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Dew_drops

Gud one.i lykd d way asr reactd,it ws quite dffrnt frm many of d ffs postd here..


thank you yaar...kaal raat ka episode dekh kar mere man mein ye khayaal aaya..
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Posted: 07 November 2011 at 7:58pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by smitar

Super! Pls make him throw that rotten ring into the pool n I will be satisfied. After all, he paid for it. How ironic, isn't it? Arnav pays for Khushi's & Shyam's sagai ring!Wink


it should be lost to be never found...

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Posted: 07 November 2011 at 8:07pm | IP Logged
nice
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Posted: 07 November 2011 at 8:30pm | IP Logged
ASR might be all macho,arrogant tycoon,but yaar if he behave like that with khushi,i guess then Khushi's character is mercilessly killed.She will be just another rona dhona dram queen.I very much want to see the spirited khushi standing up for herself till the end of this play.

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Posted: 07 November 2011 at 8:34pm | IP Logged
ASR has to suffer the pangs of jealousy for all that he made Khushi go through! I love that Khushi gives it back to him.

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