Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain

   

SS: Forever Yours (VirMan) Note Pg.11 SSCOMPLETED (Page 9)

Post Reply New Post

Page 9 of 15

butterfly_16

Senior Member

butterfly_16

Joined: 28 December 2008

Posts: 244

Posted: 13 November 2011 at 3:35pm | IP Logged
This is the last part in this SS. Enjoy!Big smile

I'm having trouble with posting Virat's sherwani in hyperlink, so here's the link: http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_c72S5c4jUbM/TDskAnASoxI/AAABDU/82C4V7VLoBQ/s320/pakistani-bridal-sherwani-suits.jpg

Part 5:

Manvi shot Virat a look that said 'Shut up NOW'. Virat shut up alright, but didn't give up his pouting while Viren teased him.

"Getting romantic are we, lil brother?"

"If anybody'd let me", Virat muttered under his breath.

Jeevika decided to ignore her devar's momentarily kiddish behaviour and instead walked over to Manvi with the bags in her hand.

"I did say 20 mins - no more, no less. Besides, it's almost 3:40...I have to get Manvi ready..", her tone became serious then,"and you have to pack her medicines. Don't forget"

Virat give up his pouting, nodding seriously then. Her medicines. He'd forget his own things before he forgot that. His memory shortly visited a time that had past - when he'd had to rush Manvi to the hospital on the day of the wedding - the lonely wait, the doctors cryptic answers, the test reports, the beeping machines, the cold blanched hospital walls staring back at him as the hours passed by...it was a nightmare he hated reliving.

Manvi watched Virat in silence then as he packed her medicines and then didn't even protest when Di proceeded to kick him out as 'the bride needs to change'. She knew he still wasn't over that incident. It worried him to no end, not knowing where tomorrow might just possibly lead them...

He could fool the world with his poker face, but not her. She always knew what was stirring beneath the surface. Just like how he always knew that about her, she thought with a smile.

"Mannu!", Jeevika hugged her once the two sisters had privacy.

"So, how'd my devar do?", she knew Virat was perfect for Manvi.

Manvi raised her left hand to show her sister the ring.

"How do you think he did?"

"Quite well, if I do say so myself", Jeevika said, unable to conceal the grin on her face now.

"Okay, let's get to work", Jeevika placed most of the bags on the side except for one. It was quite heavy and Manvi was sure this one was the one with the lehenga in it. She couldn't help, but be a little excited now. Come on, which girl doesn't love getting new clothes?

Her sister placed her in front of the dresser table, ordering her to close her eyes first. Then slowly and carefully, Jeevika took out the material, holding it behind her in the mirror.

"Look now"

Manvi's breath stopped as she took in the Lehenga. Pretty was an understatement. It didn't do the lehenga any justice at all. It was every bride's dream dress.

"It's perfect", Manvi whispered.

Jeevika grinned at the look on Manvi's face. Virat was going to be absolutely blown away when he saw his Mannu in this, she thought with a smug satisfaction.

The next 15 mins slipped away quickly, while Jeevika went to work on her lil sister.

*********
Meanwhile, the three guys had gotten into Viren's car and were listening to music to while away their time when Viren suddenly remembered what he had to do.

"Ouch!", Virat pretended to be hurt, when Viren chucked a box at him from the driver's seat.

"Change", Viren commanded with a smile.

"What?"

"You didn't actually believe I didn't get anything for you on your wedding day, did you?"
Though I did almost forget about, Viren thought to himself silently. Idiot. Jeevika would have killed him.

Virat stared at his brother, then at the box, which had now landed on the empty seat beside him.

"C'mon, Open it!"

Virat carefully slid open the cover to reveal a grey sherwani. Nice, he couldn't help thinking.

"Thanx, bro!"

"No problem. Now, hurry up and change!", Viren exclaimed, catching sight of the time. It was almost 4 am.

*********

Manvi's hair was down, parted through the middle for the mang tikka. She had minimum jewellery on, but it suited her perfectly.

"There", Jeevika exhaled, looking on in satisfaction. Manvi was literally glowing with happiness and Jeevika couldn't wish for more. Manvi hugged her sister on impulse, crying suddenly.

"I'm going to miss you, Di"

"Me too", Jeevika tried saying through her sobs, forbidding Manvi to cry though in case she wrecked herself.

They stayed like that, hugging for a while when there was a knock on the door and Virat's desperate voice could be heard saying,"Aren't you guys done yet? How come they're not saying anything? Do we have to break the door? It's almost 4!"

Jeevika smiled, shaking her head at her devar's impatience.

"C'mon, let's go before they decide to break the door!", Jeevika said helping Manvi up, laughing at Virat's antics.

"How long does it take to chan", Virat stopped in mid-sentence as the door opened.

His jaw dropped open at the vision walking toward him. Was that Mannu? Woah.

Manvi tried to stiffle her giggling at the sight of Virat's open mouth. As she took in the sight of Virat though, she couldn't help but appreciate her jiju's choice. Her Mr. Chep was looking...sexy, she thought naughtily.

Viren stepped on his lil bro's toe so as to break his trance.

"As much as we know you'd love to stand here staring at her, you have to marry her first...so let's go", Viren chipped in, unable to help teasing his brother.

That brought Virat back to earth. Marriage, right. Well, he was definitely ready.

"Uhhh, Jeevika, we have to go back home", Viren started off nervously. He knew this was important, but they had to get back to the house in order to maintain some appearances so that the marriage could be done successfully. Otherwise the two households might put two and two together and...

Jeevika nodded placing
Manvi's hand in Virat's.

"I'm trusting you, Virat. Don't ever break my trust", she said, a serious edge to her tone.

Virat nodded.

Jeevika ran inside to get the clothes bags and handing them to their uncle she said, "These are her clothes. Put them away with everything else. Please take care of them", she said, her eyes betraying her cheerful face as a couple tears streaked down.

"Their my children as well", chachu said with a smile,"Don't worry. I'll take care of everything."

Jeevika and Viren hugged their siblings one last time as they departed for home. Whatever was to happen now, would happen.

Only chachu was left with them now.

"Could you give us a minute, Chachu?", Virat asked, studying Manvi's apprehensive face.

Chachu took a look at Virat and then said,"I'll meet the two of you at the bottom, just hurry."
Dawn was threatening to break within a couple mins.

Virat waited until his chachu had climbed down and then turned to face Manvi.

"Are you ready?", he asked.

Manvi looked up at him and as she did, she smiled, all signs of her hesitation gone as she held his hand tightly.

"Forever"

Virat smiled, knowing everything was alright then. They walked towards the edge, him helping her down then as he remembered his chachu's words of leaving no evidence. He didn't have to worry though, as his chachu had his back. They'd no sooner reached the ground then that Chachu took it out and walked ahead of them to the car. He'd taken his place in the driver's seat as Virat opened the back door for Manvi. The first streak of sunlight danced across the sky just then, causing dawn to break. Virat and Manvi turned to look at the sky then. It was in hues of reddish orange and birds were chirping as everything seemed to magically come to life.

It was a new beginning.

Star Done! What do you think about their wedding clothes? I googled LOL

How was it? Thanx for readingEmbarrassed

EDIT: I wrote an OS on Manvi's Illness which is what Virat remembers when he thinks about the hospital: Never Letting You Go


Edited by butterfly_16 - 25 February 2012 at 9:46pm

The following 71 member(s) liked the above post:

pinklilliessimron...laila889Mahnoor5671lakhanikomalAkashaaMissKhushi123mizznaSheIsTheOnemayur247amee1lemymoonstruckluv angelbollyrockstarkelowna16cookies10screen22christmasjayprabuSapphire~sweet Ash~mahak221arri-spy06--Preeti--lov_in_d_airSaj110MsFuzzybear69cukkyVirManandJeeVimisaki2cute4u_22luvlife84Anu101niayadavvamps1996kusharberryPiya.DABCDesiGirl93nrithyaoRuchi-interestqueenofhearts01madhu_sridharaysha1989JULIELcoolmimzstarasdfneha fan1duskAdorableTrouble-_-harsh42love_u_Sarunsnehalovegurtihooriia_xBrunoMarsmoksha89JESNIA-BaRul-ParAz--GayathriK-soni4evapreethisRach-dcashred12-Yuks-..luv_shahid..Kalpana_WriterLumzzlove_never_diespreity_d__Sneha__Nikki_Titli

Dear Guest, Being an unregistered member you are missing out on participating in the lively discussions happening on the topic "SS: Forever Yours (VirMan) Note Pg.11 SSCOMPLETED (Page 9)" in Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain forum. In addition you lose out on the fun interactions with fellow members and other member exclusive features that India-Forums has to offer. Join India's most popular discussion portal on Indian Entertainment. It's FREE and registration is effortless so JOIN NOW!

moonstruck

Senior Member

moonstruck

Joined: 27 July 2007

Posts: 774

Posted: 13 November 2011 at 5:13pm | IP Logged
shouldn;t have ended, want more :)

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

butterfly_16

luvlife84

Senior Member

luvlife84

Joined: 15 August 2011

Posts: 279

Posted: 13 November 2011 at 5:17pm | IP Logged
yeah we want more :)

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

butterfly_16

ashred12

IF-Rockerz

ashred12

Joined: 26 July 2006

Posts: 6968

Posted: 13 November 2011 at 6:45pm | IP Logged
loved it...thanx for d pm...
wish u had included the marriage n reaction of d families.. *sigh*

The following 2 member(s) liked the above post:

virman2012butterfly_16

moksha89

IF-Dazzler

moksha89

Joined: 26 October 2011

Posts: 2583

Posted: 13 November 2011 at 7:24pm | IP Logged
your ss was great to read! & as for the lehenga - it was beautiful Big smile it would suit manvi so well!  please continue the creative process & entertain us with another lovely piece soon! Clap

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

butterfly_16

shalini_s

IF-Sizzlerz

shalini_s

Joined: 05 November 2009

Posts: 17482

Posted: 13 November 2011 at 7:56pm | IP Logged
cute...

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

butterfly_16

__Sneha__

IF-Stunnerz

__Sneha__

Joined: 22 December 2010

Posts: 25660

Posted: 13 November 2011 at 9:29pm | IP Logged
Loved it.Thumbs Up.Very well writtenClap
Love VirManHeart

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

butterfly_16

vishisweet

Newbie

vishisweet

Joined: 24 July 2011

Posts: 4

Posted: 13 November 2011 at 10:01pm | IP Logged
nice one..Clap

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

butterfly_16

Post Reply New Post

Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Topic Starter Replies Views Last Post
Megz's VirMan Fantasy: Soumini gets VirMan married

2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9

IndigoBlues 68 28602 01 October 2013 at 12:36am
By hemameenu
Kuch meethe pal (VirMan OS-Collection, pg17/18)

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 26 27

Hesperus 208 41660 03 May 2013 at 8:59am
By JESNIA
OS: Never Letting You Go (VirMan)

2 3 4 5 6 7

butterfly_16 54 12614 12 January 2013 at 12:57am
By Jannat94
VIRMAN SS 23/10/2011 Note page 28

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 29 30

mohseena 239 42033 11 June 2012 at 7:10am
By Roses-khushi
VirMan SS- tere ishq mein..(part 3 updt/ PG 09)

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 12 13

sweetshab 100 21305 13 May 2012 at 2:17pm
By misaki

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category

Active Forums

Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain Topic Index

Limit search to this Forum only.

 

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.