FF:Hatke Pyar(Unexplained Emotion) Part4-Pg11 Updt - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: amee1

very  funny, loved it,  please  PM me when u update!!


Thank you sooo muchh πŸ˜ƒ and will surely pm u πŸ˜Š
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: --Preeti--

Great update πŸ‘ But why so short ? πŸ˜• Thank you for the pm and continue soon πŸ˜ƒ


thankss...will update really long one next time πŸ˜Š and will continue soon πŸ˜Š
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet1210

Nice ff
maanvi virat are soo sweet
pls.pm me


Thanks youu and will pm u πŸ˜Š
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice story, continue soon and pm please..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey guys sorry for a late update.Have exams coming up. Here is the next part.Enjoy :D                                   

CHAPTER 4      

"Toh meri bhabhi ki behna, ab kaise logi tum jhoote mere pair se?" Asked Virat sarcastically and proceeded to leave the room before giving a look to Maanvi

Umm..kya karo?? Kyaa karoo?? Kaise cheeno virat se jhoote? Bhagwanji please meri help karo, thought maanvi

"Idea !!", Exclaimed Maanvi. "Now mission 2 starts." 

Maanvi went down and gathered all her gang and discussed her plan and the proceeded towards their next mission.

"Aap Virat hai na?" Asked a beautiful young lady which was set by Maanvi.

"Ji haan, nahi toh hota toh bhi banjata",flirted Virat. 

 The girl laughed and continued her talk, " Woh actually mein woh room dhood rahi thi jaha sare shagun ka saman padta hai.Kuch saman chahiyeh".

"Ohh accha! Chali mein aapko le chalta hoon", Virat replied.


Both went to the room where all the shagun items were kept. 

"Yeh upar jo thaal padi hai cupboard ke please nikal dejiye", said the beautiful girl. 

Virat not knowing Maanvi wicked plan removes the shoes and climb on the stool to give the thaal.The girl takes Virats shoes and passes it to Maanvi, who was behind the door witnessing everything. 

"Yeh rahi aapki thaal", said Virat as passing over the thaal to the girl.

The girl said thank you and left the room quickly.Virat stepped down and was horrified when he couldn't locate his brother's jhooti.Maanvi comes forward from the door and laughs at Virat's stupidity. 

"Tumne poucha tha na kaise logi jhooti? Hahaha Aise le hai meine jhooti" said Maanvi winking at Virat.

Virat now knowing that he has been very carefully cheated, runs behind Maanvi. 
 Maanvi too run from there and hide behind a small wall which couldn't be seen to anyone.

Thank god! Mujhe kisine ne bhi nahi dekha, thought Maanvi while looking at the other side from the walls edge.

When suddenly she then felt some warmth on her neck.She turned to see Virat in front of her with his hands on the wall, not allowing her to escape anywhere. 

Shit! I am soo stupid.I must have known he will come from the other side, Maanvi thought.


Maanvi stretched her arms with shoes to the other side of the wall.

Virat leaned more towards Maanvi and stretched his arms same way as Maanvi to take the jhooti, making the distance between him and Maanvi even lesser.

Virat was constantly staring at Maanvi, making Maanvi uncomfortable and dropping the jhooti.Virat still leaned more towards Maanvi, making Maanvi fumble and pushing him slightly.This make Virat smirk in a wicked way and he let go Maanvi. 

As Maanvi tried to leave her blouse dori got stuck in a nail and if she moved forward her blouse would open.


Uff! Ab kya karo, Yeh bhi abhi hona tha, thought Maanvi.

With this Virat again leaned towards Maanvi and slid her hand on Maanvi visible waist and moving it up at her back. Maanvi was confused why Virat was doing this.It made her uncomfortable. She kept looking here and there in attempt to avoid his gaze. 

Virat moved his hand on Maanvi's back slowly feeling her full back and freed her dori from the nail and slowly slid his hands from her back to make way for Maanvi to leave.As soon as Virat removed his hands from her back, Maanvi left from there.

Virat smiled as Maanvi left.He loved to see Maanvi uncomfortable with his touch.He loved Maanvi this way, confused and uncomfortable.

Here Maanvi was thinking about what happened few minutes ago. She was experiencing a unexplained emotion. This feeling between her and Virat was something different. She was confused over Virat's action of coming close to her physically. She never had a guy so close to her. And she never thought Virat to be that guy who could make a fumble with his touch. She knew Virat was a big time flirt but she never thought if he flirted with her she would react this way.


Hope you guys like it.Please leave ur comments.😊

Edited by Toshibest - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for the PM, really like it. Aww the dori scene was so cute☺️

Please continue and let me know when you update
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Posted: 12 years ago

Joote part was too funny and  the dori part is so😳

Nice update, thanks for the PM and continue soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow super duper amazing lobed the dhori scene plz update soon nd do pm meEdited by Brklyn_gal - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
very nice i lovd it plz pm me the nxt part
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Posted: 12 years ago
It was really good...loved it
Plz update sooner next time