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ITS REALLY GUD PLZ DO CONTUNIE IT AND IF U DO PLZ PM ME

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Aww, it seems nice. Please do continue soon and PM me when you update. Great job! =)))

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hey loving the story so far!!! continue sooN!PM me if you send out messages!! thanks!
 
Heyy will surely pm you and thanks...:)

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Heyy guyss...i know its been a long time since i have updated my ff. I have been burderned with lots of work.Neways here is the next update.Hope u guys like it Smile and sorry i couldnt reply to anyone but thank you so mch for ur appreciation.Big smile                                                                 

CHAPTER 3

Maanvi and Virat went to the empty room upstairs.

"Chalo ab apne kapde kholo" , Maanvi said casually.

"Kya?? Sharam nahi aati ek naujawaan ladke se aise baat karte hue.Beeji ko bolo tum kya baatein kar rahi hoon mere saath.", said Virat smirking at Manvi

"Oye mister chep! Zaada faltu baatein mat karo.Mujhe tumse baat karne mein koi interest nahi hai.Sherwani saaf karvani hai ya nahi? " Said Maanvi after making a hopeless face.

"Ji nahi, agar tumse sherwani saaf karai toh abhi jo hai use bhi zaada gandi hojayegi. Aur waise bhi mujhe tumse meri izzat ka khatra hai toh mein khud saaf kar loga."

Yeh samajta kya hai apne aap ko.Mein isme interested? YUCKK!!


"Apne aap ko hero samajte hoon?  jo mein tumari izzat mein haath dalogi?Itni gandi choice nahi hai mere.Jake khud saaf karlo apni sherawani.Kisne rooka hai tumhe?"

"Hero toh mein hoon.Tum mano ya na mano.Ab zara batane ka kasht karegi ki bathroom kaha hai?" ,countered back Virat

"Saamne hai.Tumhe itna bhi nhi dekhta hai.Andha Bandar!" said Maanvi in return on his comeback.And then murmured to herself ,"Alag hi apneaap ko hero bolta hai."

"Ji kuch kaha apne?" Asked Virat purposely.

"Ji kuch nahi." Said Maanvi with a big forced smile and folded her arms.

Virat went inside the washroom while maanvi was waiting for him outside taking care of his stuff.

Itni der hogai hai yeh ab tak bahar kyu nahi aaya. Chep ko kapde saaf karna bhi nahi aata kya, Bandar! Thought Maanvi.


"Arey so gaye kya aandar. Itni der lagti hai kya? Sherwani saaf karni hai, banani nahi hai. " , asked Maanvi impatiently.

"Ek second andar aana.Kuch Problem hai." , replied Virat

Uffoo..ab kya problem hogai.Maanvi went inside the washroom.

"Kya hua Mr.zaroorat se zaada smart.nahi saaf kiya ab tak? Nahi aata kya saaf karna." Said Maanvi mockingly.

"Ummm saaf toh meine kar diya.Bas tumhe batane ke liye andar bolaya tha ki tum bilkul bhu smart nahi hoon." Said Virat with a grin.

"Kya matab hai tumhara?" replied Maanvi.

"Arey meri bhabhi ki behna. Tumhe kya laga ki tum itni easily joote chura logi aur mujhe pata bhi nahi chalega?" Asked Virat to shocked Maanvi.

"Umm...kya? Nahi? Umm mein wohh" replied Maanvi stammering.
"Woh jo seat ke neech jhoote the.Woh nakli hai.Asli jhoote maine pehne.Dekho", Virat said pointing at his shoes.

Accha toh jhoote yaha hai.Inhe toh mein haasil kar hi logi.Par bechara Virat! Use jhooto se haath dhona padega.Woh jaanta nahi hai mein kya cheez hoon, thought Maanvi.
 

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its really nice 
plzz  PM me as sooon as u update!!

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Nice ff... Continue soon!

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Awww, cute part! I love their Nok Jhok :D

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