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Heyy guys m ready with the next part.Smile and its longer this time..Hope you guys like it.Please leave ur comments.Tongue
                                                            Chapter 2

Maanvi stepped in the room.She just stared at her sisters beauty.Her sister looked like a princess.She could stand there for hours and admire her  in the beautiful red bridal outfit.

                       
" Jijiii, she jumped in excitement, " Aap bhout sunder lag rahi hoon.Agar mein ladka hoti na toh abhi apse shaadi kar leti.Aapse sunder koi ho hi nahi sakta hai.Ur the best!"

"Thank you mannu, aur tu bhi bhout sundar lag rahi hai.Kahi tujhe meri nazaar na lag jaye.Tu meri sabsi pyaari behen hai" , Jeevika said with a smile.

"Kya aap bhi jiji.Mujhe kya kabhi bhi aap nazar lag sakti hai kya? Acchaa jiji, ek baat batao, aap mujhe bhool toh nhi jaogena chandigarh jakar", asked maanvi innocently.

"Pagal hai mannu!kya mein tujhe kabhi bhool saakti hoon kya?Wapas aisi baat sochna bhi baat! ", replied jeevika.

Both of them wiped each other tears reviewing their old memories.And then suddenly the door opened.BANGG!!

"Barat aageyii didi! Jaldi chalo neeche.beeji aapko bola rahi hai! ", said dabbu.

" Haan tu ja mein aa rahi hoon." , said Maanvi


Maanvi hugged Jeevika tightly and touched up her makeup and then went down to welcome vadera family.It was a small function.Only few family members and relatives were present. The vaderas were going to have a big reception party in Amritsar.

After all the welcoming and greetings. The wedding ceremony was taking place and at the corner maanvi was scheming with dabbu and her lil friends about stealing her jijus shoes.

"Dekh dabbu tu jagar us Virat ke seat ke neeche se shoes utha lena aur mein uska dhyaan divert kar dogi."

" Ji Didi! Par is baar aap koi galti mat kardena firse,nahi toh beeji firse daate gi."

"Oye chup kar!Koi galti nahi hogi.Aur bacho tum dekhna ki kuch problem na ho. Kuch bhi problem lage toh alert kardena.!!

"Haan didi, mission start kiya jaaye"

All of them hugged each other and went on the Joota Churaing mission.

Maanvi went to the drinks counter and picked up the drinks tray and went to Virat.

"Viratji! Yeh kya baat hui.Ladke wale hokar apne kuch liya nahi hai ab tak.Aise nahi chalta hai.Kya lege aap?" asked Maanvi with a huge fake smile.

Ise bandariya ko kya hogaya?Aaj itna sweet hai mujhse.Agar yeh aise hi rahi toh mujhe diabetics hojayegi, thought Virat  

"Kya baat hai, Aaj tum itne pyaar se mujhse baat kar rahi hoon.Mere ko bhout ajeeb lag raha hai" , asked Virat with a grin.

Uff..Yeh ladka bhi sweet bano toh problem nah bano toh problem.Pagal!

"Ab bolo bhi kya loge tum?"

"Itna pyaar se pooch rahi hoon toh orange juice dedo" Said Virat

"Haan yeh lo," said Maanvi but as she was giving him the drink.She purposely slipped herself and the drink fell on Virat sherwani.

"Ohh..m sooo sorryyy.Galti hogai,Tum jaldi mere saath upar chalo mein tumhari sherwani saaf kar deti hoon", said maanvi

Virat followed Maanvi and they went in upstairs.

 

 


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