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ArHi Tere Liye Pg29 Ch6: Rasam, Shaadi, Suhag Raat (Page 6)

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Posted: 06 November 2011 at 8:38pm | IP Logged
Good FF
 
The creep Shyam. Just hate the sight of him.  Because of the CVs we have to watch him on screen manhandling Shashi and his evil eyes on Khushi.
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Posted: 06 November 2011 at 8:40pm | IP Logged
Loved ur new fresh idea !! :D and Gre Shyam makes me puke ! Thanxx for the pm =] and can't wait for the next part !!
Chimpsy Goldie
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Posted: 06 November 2011 at 9:41pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by TheNikil1

hmmm...your writing is faultless but I don't like the idea of Khushi being raped by the creep Shyam...UUURGH!! just want his dirty filthy hands off our innocent and most pure Khushi!! She belongs to only Arnav and ONLY he should be her first!! PLEASE!! Hope you don't take it the wrong way...do continue with ur writing though..


Hv to agree with TheNikil1, Shyam raping Kushi is like so yucky and gross and disgusting and &@$#!!! Shyam is just so yucky, yucky, yucks!!!! Dead

Edited by Chimpsy - 06 November 2011 at 9:43pm

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TheNikil1

Chimpsy Goldie
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Posted: 06 November 2011 at 9:49pm | IP Logged
Nevertheless, I am a sucker for a sob story and lots and lots of romance, so do go on... Give Shyam a horrible grissly ending is all I humbly ask... Thank you... Wink
keenu_kk IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 06 November 2011 at 10:41pm | IP Logged
HOW CAN SHYAM DO LIKE THAT DEAR
I CANT THINK ABOUT THAT
SO WHAT NEXT 
MsCeylon IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 06 November 2011 at 11:02pm | IP Logged
Thanks for the PM
Loved the track dear Update soon.. Wink
Pls update ur other FF also...
HappyMelody IF-Stunnerz
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Posted: 06 November 2011 at 11:26pm | IP Logged
im falling for u FF... Day Dreaming

gosh i wanna kill off that jerk!! is khushi gonna raise this child of pervert's?!? god plsss dont let her... urghhh i dont want any of that snake's parts growing in herself nooo...

pls pm me when u update this hon!
zee10 IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 06 November 2011 at 11:44pm | IP Logged
aww..awesome story.. Like it. Continue it soon

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