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Hey Guys! It's Ashree! thanks for commenting and liking! okay, here is chapter 1! hope you guys like it! Enjoy! Smile

Dil To Pagal Hai

September 7, 2013

Mumbai, India

Kriya wore a huge smile as she took out her key to her boyfriend, Rey's, house. Rey had given her a key to his house only a couple of days after they had started dating, and she had given him one in return. This only showed how much they trusted each other.

Kriya had been gone for two weeks to Delhi for an internship at a very prestigious dance school there. Today was her and Rey's third anniversary since they started dating and Kriya wanted to surprise Rey with her return.

She finally opened the door and quietly walked up his staircase to his room. She slowly turned the knob on his door and yelled, "Surprise!"

But the smile on Kriya's face quickly disappeared in less than a second when she saw what was going on in the room. Rey was with another girl. He pulled away from the girl's face quickly when he saw Kriya.


She only looked at him, the sadness and pain clear in the tears that were running down her cheeks. She turned away, walking quickly. "Kriya, wait!" Rey called from behind her, now chasing her down the stairs. But she broke out into a run when she heard his voice and out his front door.

The two never saw each other again.

<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3

Present Day - March 15, 2018

New York City, New York, America

"5, 6, 7,8!" The music blasted in the spacious dance studio, 15 girls moving in perfect synchronization to the music. They kicked their legs, threw their hands in the air, did perfect pirouettes, and finally ended on the floor, breathing deeply.

The woman in the front of the group looked up, smiling at her students. "That was great girls!" She got up and faced them. "That's all we're going to do today. Try to remember this all by next week, okay?"

"Okay," they all said, leaving.

The woman wore the smile she always wore at the end of her classes, walking to the office in the back.

"How was class?" her co-worker, Aarju, the hip hop dance instructor asked.

"Great, as always," Kriya Ghai responded, sitting down next to Aarju on the beanbags they had placed in the office. "What about you?"

Aarju sighed. "It was good."

Then Kriya's phone started ringing. "Hold on a sec."

"Mhm," Aarju said, taking a sip from her water bottle

"Hello?" Kriya said in to the phone.

"Hi, beta. You called earlier?" Smriti Ghai said from the other end of the phone.

"Yeah, I did. I wanted to tell you something," Kriya said.

"What is it?"

"Ma, I'm ready to get married." As soon as she said that, Aarju did a spit take. 

Edited by ashree45 - 07 November 2011 at 4:37pm

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Lovely guys. 
woah! 2013. dang

Rey!! How can he? Ouch

Holy moly!!!!

You both are in which world gurls? 

loved the starting

haha esp when aarju spilled it all out. 
cant wait for more

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