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Arhi FF: The Reason I Breathe COMPLETE (Page 145)

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Posted: 23 March 2012 at 2:39am | IP Logged
Love your writing... Awesome!!!!Star Star I'm hooked to your FFs... Sooo curious to know what would happen in last letter... Absolutely curious about Promise me sunshine... This one...no words to say...it's so heart wrenching...Cry Especially when I imagine Mohit (Samrat) in the place of Aryan...my heart breaks...coz I just love him...Cry. But Arnav Khushi jodi toh hamesha salaamat rahe... Heart I'm practically living on FFs now...as I wrote in another thread too... And it's really difficult wairing for the next part to come, u know... I wanna read everything in one breath...LOL Too much...I know... but It's worth waiting for your updates... U never let us down... Embarrassed So...Good Luck with your studies!!!! And update soon... Bear Hug Hug

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Posted: 24 April 2012 at 7:52am | IP Logged
oh Lyra, this is gud:)

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Posted: 28 April 2012 at 3:22pm | IP Logged
i started reading your thread one this afternoon and just finished it.
no words to describe what \a talented &  realistic writer you are.
loved loved loved all of it.
now i m going to read thread 2.

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Posted: 07 May 2012 at 10:50am | IP Logged
Read all the 12 parts and its got me hooked.. You write amazingly well.. 

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Posted: 23 May 2012 at 11:54am | IP Logged

I was gone out of your lives a long time ago." she had said "I was just passing by' I never meant to stay."


I so felt like crying when she said those lines...beautiiifully depicted, thought and expressed too...


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Posted: 29 May 2012 at 1:28am | IP Logged

Hey there,

 

I just read your FF last night and to start with, I must say it's awesome :) This was the story which I probably wanted to read! The story revolving around three people, the love triangle and the problems arising due to it. This might not be the most unique plot in the world but the way you've treated this story.. This has made all the difference <3

 

Arnav.. He's the exact from the show. The one who doesn't want to admit his feelings, who mistakedly hurts people who love him the most and the one who is helplessly in love with Khushi despite knowing that they may never end up together. Khushi also loves Arnav just the way he does, but owes her life to someone else. The one who is torn between love and duty and yet loves Arnav despite all his flaws, the mistakes he has done and will probably continue to do so till the end of her life. Aryan.. Well, he's the perfect guy a girl may dream to have. Just like Khushi, he loves her with all her flaws and knowing that his love may never be reciprocated at all! But that doesn't make him stop loving her, he's the moral upright guy and would never stop Khushi from going back to Arnav.

 

Have I mentioned that I adore your writing skills? You are so damn good.. I read the whole story without a break :P Seriously, you gotta continue this ASAP. Can't wait to read what happens next especially after Shyaam's entrance in the story.

 

xoxo

Saumya



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Posted: 09 June 2012 at 5:39am | IP Logged
hey... Dude I just read the prologue and I want to know more..!! you've written it soo beautifully... I am completely hooked!! Waiting to read more!! I need to catch up real soon.. I am sure its going to be an amazing ride!! pls PM with the updates.. looking forward to it...Smile

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Posted: 11 June 2012 at 9:14am | IP Logged
ur the world's best writer n my first frd n india forums,i love you n will love you and about ur ff its great the best piece of ur work even when u mentioned shyam didnt raped khushi i smiled cuz this iz shyam the unique villian

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