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-Saumya- IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 29 May 2012 at 1:28am | IP Logged

Hey there,

 

I just read your FF last night and to start with, I must say it's awesome :) This was the story which I probably wanted to read! The story revolving around three people, the love triangle and the problems arising due to it. This might not be the most unique plot in the world but the way you've treated this story.. This has made all the difference <3

 

Arnav.. He's the exact from the show. The one who doesn't want to admit his feelings, who mistakedly hurts people who love him the most and the one who is helplessly in love with Khushi despite knowing that they may never end up together. Khushi also loves Arnav just the way he does, but owes her life to someone else. The one who is torn between love and duty and yet loves Arnav despite all his flaws, the mistakes he has done and will probably continue to do so till the end of her life. Aryan.. Well, he's the perfect guy a girl may dream to have. Just like Khushi, he loves her with all her flaws and knowing that his love may never be reciprocated at all! But that doesn't make him stop loving her, he's the moral upright guy and would never stop Khushi from going back to Arnav.

 

Have I mentioned that I adore your writing skills? You are so damn good.. I read the whole story without a break :P Seriously, you gotta continue this ASAP. Can't wait to read what happens next especially after Shyaam's entrance in the story.

 

xoxo

Saumya



Edited by -Saumya- - 29 May 2012 at 1:28am

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Posted: 09 June 2012 at 5:39am | IP Logged
hey... Dude I just read the prologue and I want to know more..!! you've written it soo beautifully... I am completely hooked!! Waiting to read more!! I need to catch up real soon.. I am sure its going to be an amazing ride!! pls PM with the updates.. looking forward to it...Smile

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Posted: 11 June 2012 at 9:14am | IP Logged
ur the world's best writer n my first frd n india forums,i love you n will love you and about ur ff its great the best piece of ur work even when u mentioned shyam didnt raped khushi i smiled cuz this iz shyam the unique villian

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Posted: 24 August 2012 at 2:55pm | IP Logged
lovely and different start...khushi with someone else 
love to know what's gonna happen nxt...going through ur pages to find the lovers arnav and khushi...:-)

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Posted: 17 October 2012 at 2:46am | IP Logged

I realised this is much easier than spamming you with every chapter review scraps...

Chapter 2:

W*F Arnav?


Chapter 3:

Oh Lyra and khushi, come here


Arnav's being an Ass, f**k him


Chapter 4:

Oh Khushi you poor baby


Chapter 5:

Shyam did WHAT!!!


((bitch here is an exclamation not a personal insult))

Chapter 6:

I have no hope for Arnav, can Khushi please get married to Aryan instead? I'm so excited he's coming...


Chapter 7:

Are you kidding about the chapter being crap? 

I loved their face-off, Arnav needed a harsh slap of reality, he shouldn't build a world of whims and fancies just because he couldn't face certain relics of his past, I'm so glad Arnav got proverbially bitch-slapped by Aryan.


Chapter 8:

What the bloody hell?!


Khushi woman stop kissing the enemy, the dude is a douche! LOL!

Chapter 9:

Aaaww this chapter is making me all kinds of sad


Chapter 10:


Chapter 11:


Chapter 12:


Chapter 13:

Loved the song..


Chapter 14:

If something happens to Aryan, Shyam Manohar Jha is going to regret the day he was born.


Very good decision Khushi! You go girl!


Chapter 15:

Oh No He Didn't

Seriously? that Shyam dude needs medical help!

Chapter 16: 

Oh what a chapter Lyra!! So proud of you!! Brilliant writing sweetheart!


Chapter17:

Oh man, look at Arnav and Aryan, bonding and bromancing, eh!


I'm not completely heartless, I'm feeling quite bad for Aryan, but I guess for him, this was the right decision, he was the better choice but not the right one...

Chapter 18:


~New thread, New comment~

~sri




Edited by sri_ffn - 18 October 2012 at 6:17am

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Posted: 17 October 2012 at 2:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sri_ffn


I realised this is much easier than spamming you with every chapter review scraps...

Chapter 2:

W*F Arnav?



Chapter 3:

Oh Lyra and khushi, come here



Arnav's being an Ass, f**k him



Chapter 4:

Oh Khushi you poor baby



Chapter 5:

Shyam did WHAT!!!



((bitch here is an exclamation not a personal insult))



5 chapters done.. u r fast

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Posted: 17 October 2012 at 3:06am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Lyraa99

Originally posted by sri_ffn


I realised this is much easier than spamming you with every chapter review scraps...

Chapter 2:

W*F Arnav?

Chapter 3:

Oh Lyra and khushi, come here

Arnav's being an Ass, f**k him

Chapter 4:

Oh Khushi you poor baby

Chapter 5:

Shyam did WHAT!!!

((bitch here is an exclamation not a personal insult))



5 chapters done.. u r fast

6 actually.. Big smile

~sri

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Posted: 19 October 2012 at 2:35pm | IP Logged

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