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Arhi FF: The Reason I Breathe COMPLETE (Page 142)

meluhan Senior Member

Joined: 14 March 2010
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Posted: 26 January 2012 at 3:00am | IP Logged

You got me crying Lyraa!Cry

I cried for both Khushi and Arnav. For Khushi because she went throught hell and now though she still loves Arnav, she can not marry him. And for Arnav, for being late, a tad too late in expressing his love for Khushi.
I still think Arnav and Khushi should be together inspite of all they have been through. I keep telling myself Aryan is the good guy and deserves Khushi but my heart denies this and wants her to be with Arnav.
The snake is back and is dangerous, waiting for your next update. Thanks for the PM.

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ipkkndank IF-Dazzler

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Posts: 2507

Posted: 26 January 2012 at 7:52am | IP Logged
I'm truly speechless =D
Extremly superb hon, Fantabulous AWESOME
actually i felt the pain of Arnav , you have written the emotions very well, Superb
Update soon =D

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.Nightingale... IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 28 November 2011
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Posted: 26 January 2012 at 11:05am | IP Logged
aryan needs someone who can love lot more khushi loves arnav and shd never be able to love him so much
feel sad for arnav though he  truely regrets his actions
anyway continue soon
cant w8 to read more

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nature-lover IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 26 January 2012 at 12:12pm | IP Logged
Really felt sorry for both Arnav and Khushi for the amount of emotional and physical pain they had hone through

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prettyasjen IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 26 January 2012 at 7:23pm | IP Logged
Update please!

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monkeydog18 Goldie

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Posted: 26 January 2012 at 10:11pm | IP Logged
Awh poor arhi!! I hope it all works out

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SmileyStar IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 27 January 2012 at 1:55am | IP Logged
There hasn't been a single update of this FF i haven't Loved!! :D

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KaushalyaFan Goldie

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Posted: 27 January 2012 at 5:09am | IP Logged
Great update Lyraa. I see this chapter focused a lot more on how Arnav feels. Your writing is wonderful as always. As a reader I still can't seem to sympathize with Arnav yet at the same time you make me feel sorry for him too.

A complex character that can't be simplified or explained and you have done a brilliant job with his emotions. I like how you made him slowly but surely realize that he can't change the past and neither can he have the future he would now like to have with Khushi. Loved Shyam's bit too. Very dramatic.

Almost as if, "never the twain shall meet". Well done! Loved it. Tried to press the like button but was unsuccessful. Kept getting an error message. Just know I love it.



Edited by KaushalyaFan - 27 January 2012 at 5:12am

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