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Posted: 27 January 2012 at 1:55am | IP Logged

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There hasn't been a single update of this FF i haven't Loved!! :D

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Posted: 27 January 2012 at 5:09am | IP Logged

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Great update Lyraa. I see this chapter focused a lot more on how Arnav feels. Your writing is wonderful as always. As a reader I still can't seem to sympathize with Arnav yet at the same time you make me feel sorry for him too.

A complex character that can't be simplified or explained and you have done a brilliant job with his emotions. I like how you made him slowly but surely realize that he can't change the past and neither can he have the future he would now like to have with Khushi. Loved Shyam's bit too. Very dramatic.

Almost as if, "never the twain shall meet". Well done! Loved it. Tried to press the like button but was unsuccessful. Kept getting an error message. Just know I love it.

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KF

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with every update u make me cry! u write beautifully

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awesome update please continue. thanks

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Wow this update was so good and emotional...i am crying my eyes out

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oh girl it was superb and a bit emotional. i love ur song collection for last part as well, plz update soon

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Eagerly waiting for the update

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Hey Lyraa,

Just thought I'd let you know:

There are 2 forum codes, you could use on your forum work (especially pics/FFs) which are [MEMBERSONLY/] and [NOCOPY/] without the /

These forum codes unable members who are not registered to see your posts and also whoever tries to copy your work can't with the no copy feature

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