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Asalam alikum Guys Hope u all are fine

Thank u so much for liking my new concept

So sorry For late update actually I was busy In eid.

Here is the First part

Happy reading

Sorry for all mistakes.

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 PART 1

 

 

Lots of hustle bustle were going on in Ahmad house .whole house was decorated with beautiful lights which are shining like stars. Every one was so happy and busy in preparations for the marriage ceremony of the elder daughter of Ahmad's House Gunjan Khan.

 

In Gunjan Room:

 

Gunjan was sitting on dressing chair front of mirror and combing her hairs.

 

Nupur entered in the room was wearing jeans and a tight shirt her hairs were tight in pony tail.

 

Nupur(in jolly mood): O ho to dulhan sahiba apna dolha ka lia tayar ho rhai ha .Kasam sa gunjan agar samrat bhai na tumhari in lehrati balkhati nagan jasi zulfo ko khula dekh lia na to wo aja abhi shadi sa sirf do din pwehla hi tumha bahaga kar la jay ga.

 

Gunjan(shyly): nupur tum bhi na.

 

Nupur: Oy hoy kya bat ha tumhara cheeks to ekdam temator ki tarha lala ho gay.

 

Gunjan .Shut up Nupur or acha ye sab choro tum ye batao ka aj mehdi ma tum kya pehan rahi ho.

 

Nupur: Ma soch rahi thi kun a ma aj party gown pehno ya phir skirt.

 

Gunjan(with shocked expressions) : Tumhara demagh to thekanay per ha larki tum meri shadi ma ye American dressing karo thek to ho na .tumha pata ha na ka is shadi ma tumhara susral wala bhi ay ga .wo tumhara bara ma kya sochay ga.

 

Nupur: Kya Gujan tum bhi na fizol ki tension lati ho per tumhara bhi kasor nahi ha akhir tumha kya pata Love marriage ka benefits tumhari to arrange marriage ha na.My dear Adi ko pata ha ka ma asa hi dressing karti ho or usa is sa koi problem nahi ha or rahi bat us ka parents ki to un ka mujha kya karna ha unha jo sochna ha sochta raha.

 

Gunjan: U are really Impossible Nupur per ye sab choro sab sa bari bat to ye ha ka waha Mayank bhaia bhi ho ga or tumha to pata ha ka unha asa kapro sa kitni chir ha.

 

Nupur: Oh shit Gujan itna acha din pa tum na kis ka nam la lia pata nahi aj kya hoga.

 

Gunjan passed her angry glare.

 

Nupur: Ok ok Gusa ku karti ho .Frankly speaking Gunjan Tumhara bhai ko na mujha sa kuch personal problem ha .her wakt na mujha ma koi na koi burai hi dhondta rehta ha .Sadu kahi ka .Her wakt khamosh rehta ha sirf or sirf kam karta rehta ha ghar sa office office say ghar.no party no friends no enjoyment .Gunjan tumhara bhai dunia ka sab sa boring insane ha. Is lia wo jo kehta ha kehna do I don't care.

 

Gunjan : Per Nupur.

 

Nupur: Bas ab koi per ver nahi .Nechay meri ami or tumhari ami kab sa tumha haldi lagana ka lia bola rahi ha .Chalo.

 

Gunjan: Nupur tum bhi na dunia bhar ki batay kar dati hio or kam ki bat sab sa akhir ma karti ho dekhna ab dant para gi,

 

Nupur: Chalo kuch nahi hoga wasa bhi tum dulhan ho is lia tumahar her gunha maaf ha.

 

Gunjan: Shukria.

 

Nupur : Aray array koi bat nahi asa chota mota ehsan to hum akrta rehta ha.

 

Both giggled.

 

Nupur and Gunjan came in hall and sit with other women.

 

Nupur Mom (NM): array wha hamari guria agai .Kisi ki nazar na laga kitni pyari lag rahi ha.

 

She took blessings of Gunjan.

 

Nupur(pouted): ha ha bus wo hi ap ki bati ha na hum to kuch bhi nahi.

 

Gunjan Mom: Aray kis na kaha tum to meri sab sa achhi beti ho ao mera pas a jao.

 

NM: ji ha or chara la ap is ko dekh la ap ki batik o ubtan lana ka lia kab sa kaha hoa tha abhi tak nahi lai.

 

Nupur: Oops sorry sorry bhol gai abhi lati ho .

 

She got up from there and run from there in hurry .She take ubtan from kitchen and coming back in hurry .Suddenly bumped to some one .whole ubtan was spread on that person dress and face.

 

Nupur saw the person and start laughing that person face.

 

Nupur(giggling): O My God maynak jaldi sa ja kar apna mo dekho kya hal ho gaya ha.Bilkul cartoon lag raha ho.

 

Mayank(saw her angrily): Nupur tum kabhi bhi dekh akr nahi chal sakti.

 

Nupur: to kya hao Myaank  lo ma na to tumhara kam asan kar dia .kehta ha ka agar dulhan ya dulha ka ubtan kisi ko lag jay na.to us banda ki shadi foran ho jati ha lo Ma na to tumha pora ubtan ma nehla dia mera ehsan mano.

 

Mayank: Mujha tum sa koi behas nahi karni ha hato mera rasta sa.

 

Nupur: Kya Mayank tum kasa larka ho tum .tumhara samna ek itni khobsurat larki khari hoi ha or tum phir bhi nukhra dikha raha ho.

 

Mayank: tumha sharam nahi ati tumhari engagement hio chuki ha.

 

Nupur: Wo kehta ha an ka jis na ki sharam us ka photay karam .or was bhi abhi shadi nahi hoi ha .

 

Mayank:: U are impossible.

 

Nupur: and u are little baby. Kabhi kuch karo gab hi ya asa hi raho ga humesa .mamas boy.

 

Mayank: Shut up Nupur  and he goes from there.

 

Nupur (Giggled): mama's boy.

 

Mayank came in his room angrily.

 

Mayank's provision:

 

Had hoti ha besharmi ki pata nahi khud ko kya samajhti ha sirf or sirf Ahmad uncle ki wajha sa isa bardasht kar raha ho warna kab ka thek kar deta.Pata nahi koi is ku kuch nahi kehta sab na mil kar isa sar pa chara lia ha . na kapray pehna ka tareka na kisi sa bat karna ka tareka ata ha .

Bus her wakt apna ap ma hi gum rehti ha .Najanay adhiraj isa kesa bardasht kara ga.

 

He took a deep breath.

 

Mayank: calm down Mayank .aj tumhari behan ki ubtan ceremony ha sab kuch bhol ka us ki khushi ma shamil ho or wasa bhi to Gunjan ki shadi ka bad yaha sa alag ghar ma shift hona ka lia ma sa bat karna wala ha na to bus relax sab thek ho jay ga.

 

Hr goes to bath room to freshen up.

 

IN Hall:

 

All women start to applied ubtan on Gunjan .Every one was enjoying it fully .Then Gunjan take bath an wearied yellow color Lehanga with Green color embroidery and green Dupatta  .she was also wearing flower jewelry. Perfectly ready for her Mehndi ceremony. Nupur bring gunjan the place where ceremony will going to be started. She was wearing   jeans and sleeveless yellow color Kurti .her hairs were open was looking so cute.

 

Gunjan Sit on stage .After some time samrat and his family also arrived there.

 

Every one greeted them.

 

Ceremony started all girls applied mehndi on Bride and groom hand.

 

After applying little mehndi Nupur hold samrat hand.

 

Nupur: To Mr dulha sahib nikaliye hamara paisay.

 

Samrat : pasay kasa pasay.

 

Nupur: hamara naig or kya or ha jab taka p huma nrg nahi da ga hum ap ka hath nahi chora ga.

 

Samrat(play fully): ye to achi bat ha na ap humara hath mat choriya ga or hum ap ki behan ka nahi chora ga To huma ek ka sath ek free mil jay gi or wasa bhi Sali to hoti hi adhi ghar wali ha ku.

 

Nupur: oh God gunjan dekh rahi jot um abhi sa apna hubby ka irada very bad very bad or ha zayada nakhray na kara jaldi sa paisa nikala . waena hun abhi  gunjan ko ap ka baraber sa utha kar la jay ga.

 

Samrat : nahi bhai ye zulm mat karna ye lo jitna paisay lena ha la lo

 

And he gave them their neg.

 

Nupur (in excitement): wha bhai wha kya bata ha abhi sa apni biwi ki itni fikar ha . good going bhai.

 

Samrat: ab kya kara ap jasi zalim saliyo ki wajha sa itna fast to hona hi para ga.

 

Nupur : Oh Oh kuch sabak sikho Gunjan.

 

Gunjan blushed .samrat smiled.

 

Nupur's mom called her.

Nupur: Yes Mom.

 

NM: Nupur adhiraj or us ka parents agay ha or us ki mom tumha bola rahi ha.

 

Nupur: Oh God.

 

Nupur: Behave your self or ye tum na kya pehan rakha ha ,akhir tumha akal kab ay gi asa tight kapra pehan ka apni sass ka samna jao gi kitna bura laga ga na .

 

Nupur(in irritating tone): Mom ids sa zayada behtar kapra mera pas or nahi tha wasa bhi u know na ka ma asa hi dressing karti ho or ye bat unha bhi pata ha or pl zap us sadu Mayank ki tarha sa batay karna band kara.

 

NM: to wo galat to nahi kehta .Tum apna ap ko durust karo Nupur ye sab acha nhai ha.

 

Nupur: Oh pzl Mom us sadu ki saide lena band kara and don't spoil My mood plz

She goes from there.

 

NM: Pata nahi is larki ka kya hoga.

 

Nupur goes to adhiraj and his parents.

 

Nupur (excitingly): Hi Adi.

 

She hugged him .he hugged her back.

 

Adi: o hy Nupus kasi ho.

 

Nupur: Kya adi itni dar laga di u know how much I miss U yar.

 

Adi: kya karo sweet heart wo mama ko kuch dair ho gai wasa tum Mama  sa mili kab sa tumhara wait kar rahi thhi.

 

Nupur: Oops sorry bhol gai abhi mil lati ho wasa adi tum na mujha bataya hnahi ma kasi lag rahi.

 

Adi: as usual Hot and sexy.

 

Nupur: Thank god Kisi na to tareef ki warna subha sa sab na paka kar rakh dia ha chalo ab tumhari mom sa bhi mil lata ha.

 

Nupur mate adi Mom who see her top to bottom.

 

 

Nupur(in mind): Oh God asa gjhor rahi ha jasa abhi kacha chaba jay gi In logo ki soch pa to bus arghh.

 

After some time music started and some girls and bys start dancing.

 

Nupur was leading the stage.

 

Suddenly her leg misbalanced and she about to fall from stage but caught by two strong arms. She opened her eyes and start steering pair of brown eyes.

 

 

PRECAPE:

 

Nupur: oh plz mayank don't gave me lectures was abhi tum khud to bilkul useless ho kuch kar nahi sakta or dosro ko bhi un ki life enjoy nahi karna data .

 

Mayank stare her angrily

 

 

Hope u liked it

Waiting for your response

WITH LOVE

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Edited by DhanakZ - 12 November 2011 at 2:58pm

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nice nupur has a lot of bachpana 
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continue soon

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As-slamu ALaikum Gul
kaise ho??

i read ur update
it was beautiful as usual
but ye nups ki saath adhiraj kikya chakkar laagarakhi ho??
i m hating this
plz no nups-adhi shaadi
hehehehehe nups kuch jaida he modern hai
loved her fight with maynk
fabulous update
keep updating

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