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sarah_zeen

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Posted: 05 November 2011 at 2:23pm | IP Logged
Guys Hello! I really adore Virman like the way you do.. So thought of coming up with a creation dedicating to them.. Thats a part of the story coming up.. I will not be stretching it as a fiction.. But will complete the story in several updates.. Will continue with it depending on your feedback.. Heres a part.. Hope you guys enjoy reading it..
                  
A midnight party on the shore.. Hearts dancing on the rythm of life,, no holding back.. Cry out your pain amidst crowd yet no one listens.. The volume of the beats is so high that yorr scream loses its way before it can reach the ears.. I have known this for quite a long time now-- He muttered standing near the window which has been kept wide open to witness the holy matrimony of the handsome night and the moon who's shining off in her beautiful silver attire.. The waves playing the favourite melody of the bride..

His eyes on the lookout of someone he has desired.. Someone who seems to be his forever wish..

Virat!-- A voice called out..
What!? I have a sound pair of ears .. You need not shout out as if your girlfriend just jumped off the Eiffel tower..

Yeah right! Thats why you took more than twenty minutes now to response my voice-- Kabir told with clear offence in his voice..

Virat:: What! You got to be kidding me man..

Kabir:: unfortunately its a NO.

Virat:: Achcha chal aab sorry bol raha hoon.. Toh tu mamla rafa dafa kar ( ok since now I am apologizing to you, cut off the arguement)

Kabir:: look pal, its not about apology.. You have been stressing yorself for quite a long time now..

Virat:: Arre nehi reh baba.. I was just painting a wild imagination on the canvas of my mind..

Kabir:: And what's that?

Virat:: Soch ' One cool happening club in LA!' who on earth would mind owning a night club in the city of Angels?!

Kabir:: I definately won't..

Virat:: Exactly.. I'll talk to Viren vai.. Why not launch a venture which actually includes fun!

Kabir:: cast aside the business.. And lets set the floor on fire.. Bauhat der se hum upar hain.. Party toh shuru bhi ho gayi hogi..

Virat:: Mujhe kyun bol raha hain.. Conversation toh tune hi shuru ki thi..

Kabir:: Aab chal..

He followed his (Kabir) way keeping the fear unanswered and unmet..







<font size="5">New update: Conflict -on page 2</font>


Edited by sarah_zeen - 08 November 2011 at 9:03am

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Posted: 05 November 2011 at 3:14pm | IP Logged
Nice start, really like it, and i like how you included the bit where Virat wants to open a club in LA, at least there's something similar between the character and Kushal himselfLOL

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Posted: 05 November 2011 at 7:47pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Kokila11

Nice start, really like it, and i like how you included the bit where Virat wants to open a club in LA, at least there's something similar between the character and Kushal himselfLOL



thank you.. Your appreciation will help me to progress with the story.. Thanks..

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Posted: 05 November 2011 at 8:32pm | IP Logged
I really loved it.!!Day Dreaming

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Posted: 05 November 2011 at 9:02pm | IP Logged
Hey sejal! You did? Thank you very much.. Please continue posting your feedback.. Your appreciation will be my driving force..

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Posted: 06 November 2011 at 12:02am | IP Logged
Hey i loved itSmile
write more nd pls PM me nxt time!

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Posted: 06 November 2011 at 12:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by lazzz

Hey i loved itSmile
<div></div>write more nd pls PM me nxt time!


heii sure lazz.. Thanks a lot.. Your appreciation means to me more than I can ever express.. I'll pm you for sure.. Smile

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Posted: 06 November 2011 at 1:56am | IP Logged
hey hun awesome start
do pm me

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