FF:- Saathi Re(updated) part-15- page 79 9th feb - Page 4

Posted: 12 years ago
Shaina ... this story line is very good indeed.
 
Your style 'Yash Raj' style of introducing the characters awards umpteen superlatives. Simply love the high and mighty Ahem Modi who he has skeletons in his closet. That has to be Gopi whom he saw and that is when he will be expected to crash back to earth. Just what was it that happened between them that leaves a grey cloud hanging over his head?
 
The most unappealing part is the developing relationship between Rashi and him.
 
Looking forward to the next update.
 
 
Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Shaina, what a twist in each of the characters apart from Koki, Urmi, Hetal the rest are slightly different, different concept but I'm really missing Gopi but I'm curious how she comes in to the story, so looking forward to you next update. 
Posted: 12 years ago
hmmm interesting...loved ur plot and the character loved ahem n even rashi...hope the new girl is gopi n plzzz let her b ahems long lost love... wud njoyyy that... i jus hate anita for creating rifts between gohem... Edited by avi_12 - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
Aham and Anita wow😲
I wonder whats Aham past?
eager to read more
Posted: 12 years ago
realy very intrstng yaar...enjoyng t to d core... continue soon...
Posted: 12 years ago
wow!!! love the new rashi... great starting... please update soon... will u get rashi married to jigar??? if not for god's sake please tell me..
Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for the pm shaina.
Fantastic start Very intresting.
Can't wait to read the next part!
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by arul01


definitely looking forward to what this FF's storyline is going to be! very excited... do update soon...

thanks a lot arul..i wil try to keep it as exciting as it can be


Originally posted by angelina_angel


nice start

thanks angelina

Edited by shaina.sharma - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by CHIKA784


Hai hai where's my Gopi dikra!?
loool haha it was good,pm me when u update plz
                 
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ha ha dont worry gopi dikra..wil come along soon.. thanks chika

yup i wil pm u as soon i update.

Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by sam990


welcum back shainashaina  miss u  where gopie and thank for doing another ff story

hi sam...yup i am back..i agree its a long week..dont worry gopi darling wil come fast..

pleasure is all mine darling...i love to eat ur brains.

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