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uniquebluerose

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Posted: 07 November 2011 at 3:37am | IP Logged
Hey well one thing thats special in your writing is your description of the features of the both hero and heroine...the hazel eyes and the lips and well comparision to Greek god...everything is supereb...romance is off course mind blowing and leaves me numbe with no words and unable to move, heaving and breathing heavily (with rapidly raising falling chest ) ...I guess you must surely start writing some novel not just fan fiction (don't ge me wrong off course you can write fan fictions but also full feldged indiviodual works with uniques characters)
And then whole readaing world will have M&B Indian style stories with bold themes which have slendid narration...I assure you you are beeter that even some actual writers I have come across!!!!
 
You one shot which had KS mehandi design made me look into KS in a new light and Holi and Fetivities night was just great and i kept wishing why did it stop without going on  and on and o till I can tak eno more like Khushi and even then i fell your writing capabilites will make me want more...
 
I guess the last  couple of lines are stolen from your untitled OS
 
Well as for that OS what do i say...A romance which starts with cooking esp with something as lovable as kneading dough and ending up in bedroom is almost like dream coem ture for me...
 
No no it did not happen in my real life...but it has been fantasy for long and the way you have beautifully put it makes me feel as i Have relived the whole scene being the beautiful girl!!!!
 
 
As for my comments being so far and few in between hope you would forgive me for that as i have mentioned earlier after reading your work i feel my  whole body on fire for sometime and too dazed to react moreover my writing skill is not even one percent that even my appreciaton sounds hollow in front your hising...
Apart form the fact i was also  ties with some personal issues because of which i couldn't take my time to read FFs/OS buy just went through the and replied to them!!!1

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