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IPKKND SS: Curse of Ugliness(Last part Pg 47) (Page 60)

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Posted: 20 August 2012 at 7:52am | IP Logged
Review for part 1:

I love the way you have portrayed the thoughts of Arnav when he announced his engagement to Lavanya...

And that shyam Angry He is such a creepwa!!


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Posted: 20 August 2012 at 7:54am | IP Logged
Review for part 2


Angry  Shyam is so manipulative... 

And it was easy for him to brainwash Arnav that Khushi was also not innocent coz Arnav's weak point is his Di and Shyam knows how to use this advantage...

Poor Khushi... She's always the punchbag! Cry

Loving the story so far... Love the way you write!!

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Posted: 20 August 2012 at 8:05am | IP Logged
Review to part 3:

Garima's reaction to Buaji's rant was amazing

I loved the way Arnav pointed out that Payal did nothing to save her babuji...

I loved the way Khushi first uttered Arnav's name when she became a bit conscious... So much love and trust.. Poor girl must have been hurt badly... 

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Posted: 30 August 2012 at 9:32pm | IP Logged
Wow...Clap one simple word to explain you Fics... Big smile

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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 2:30am | IP Logged
awesome story

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 3:17pm | IP Logged
it was good!!!!!!!

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Posted: 18 November 2012 at 5:03pm | IP Logged
Brilliant story! My heart totally went out to Khushi. And you nearly had me believing that Arnav was going to die. You're a truly brilliant writer.

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Posted: 18 November 2012 at 6:24pm | IP Logged
Nice story, you had me on the edge of my seat till the end, oh how I love love stories with happy endings,...please please update HGHJ soon



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