IPKKND SS: Curse of Ugliness(Last part Pg 47) - Page 42

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Posted: 12 years ago
interesting SS!!! Was a nice reading !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
every thing was great๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ. akash trying to juggle all problems. blossoming love story of payash๐Ÿ˜. hope of arhi reunion. lavanya being un-lavanya(finally talking sensible(and using her brain))๐Ÿคช. anjali's courage. there was one or two problems like no hello hi bye bye and most of all no RABBA VE. yaar atleast there should be one rabba ve. any way's i liked the ending. ASR being is usual self๐Ÿ˜† and anjali reading the news nonchalantly took the cake. damn i loved itโค๏ธ
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG this is emotional and so damn well written! Xx
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved it!!!!! glad that shyam died, and arnav survived! you should write an epilogue about the relationship bet ween arnav and khushi!!! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
You are great ๐Ÿ‘ 
You just have perfection whatever you write it just perfect!!!!!!!
And i just the love the Arhi happy ending ๐Ÿ˜
Shyam's death , Yipeee 

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Posted: 11 years ago
This is amazing !
You showed Arnav and Khushi's difficulties immaculately, and even added in the reactions of their family. Ive always disliked Buaji when she kept on forcing Khushi to gets married, and you have no idea how many times Ive screamed out at her : well why don't you marry him then?!
Anyways loved it, and please keep on writing more
Celiza xox
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Posted: 11 years ago
๐Ÿ‘aawww...loved the cute ending with ASR n khushi (also shyam's end ๐Ÿ˜†)


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Posted: 11 years ago
nice story

Thank you for not killing Arnav off, because you probably would have a 
miserable, broken or dead Khushi.

Then that would have been a tragedy.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Review for part 1:

I love the way you have portrayed the thoughts of Arnav when he announced his engagement to Lavanya...

And that shyam ๐Ÿ˜ก He is such a creepwa!!


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Posted: 11 years ago
Review for part 2


๐Ÿ˜ก  Shyam is so manipulative... 

And it was easy for him to brainwash Arnav that Khushi was also not innocent coz Arnav's weak point is his Di and Shyam knows how to use this advantage...

Poor Khushi... She's always the punchbag! ๐Ÿ˜ญ

Loving the story so far... Love the way you write!!