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Posted: 06 November 2011 at 6:09pm | IP Logged
OO nice...continu soon...and PM me 

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Posted: 08 November 2011 at 7:26am | IP Logged
hey...awesome post...plz pm me for ur next update...:)

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Posted: 08 November 2011 at 7:43am | IP Logged

hey great ff... n plus u added karanika in dis... i loved it!!! plz do pm me wen u update!!! cnt w8 fr d next part

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Posted: 08 November 2011 at 11:41pm | IP Logged
So nice... Just eager to c them meeting at the hospital (may be)... Do update soon and Pls add me 2 ur PM list

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Hello my friends ! I am back with a new part hihi !
First of all, thank you for your comments, it's a great support !

Hope you like it
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Early morning at RM

Anjali : chotey, Akash, Druv jalldi karo !

Mami jee : Anjali betiya hum kaisa lag rahai hai ?

Anjali : bohat achi, yeh sab kaha hai, itna time kyu laga rahai hai ?

Druv : hum yaha hai

Anjali : jaldi karo, aur Chote aur Akash kaha hai

Druv : wo actualy, arnav bhai ko or akash bhai dono kab se chalegey hai

Anjali : kya, per kaise

Druv : kuch zarori kaam tha unkho is liye, peir mein hoon na

Anjali with a sad face : chotey bhi na, chalo chaltey hai

 

Lucknow in a hospital

Khushi was waiting outside the operation theater, praying to god to save her father, her bauji.                                                                                                                                                                    Her baju means everything for her, he was the one who  said her to call him bauji, the first one who kissed her palms which get badly burned after working in a pataka's factory.                                                                                                                                                                                   Suddenly, the door opened and the doctor came in front of khushi                                                                          

Doctor : Miss Gupta                                                                                                                                                                                 Khushi : doctor, ab mere babuji kaise hai ?                                                                                                                                                                                                             Doctor : miss gupta, your father is very strong, wo ab bilkul theek hai

Khushi  tears in her eyes : thank you doctor

Rin ring

Khushi : ha jiji

Payal : khushi sab kuch teek hai

Khushi : jiji, mein hospital mein hon, babu jee ka operation complete ho chuka hai, mein arahee hou

Payal : theek, mein bhi pach minute tak hospital ponch rahi hoon

Khushi : theek hai, bye

 Khushi :  Doctor kya mein apne bauji ko dekh sakti hoo

Doctor : sure, agar kuch sawal hain operation ke bare to mere cabin mein aap muje mil sakti hai

Khushi smiled

Arnav was very late, he has a meeting with  Doctor Khan

Rin ring

Arnav : ha di' mein hospital mein hoon, donation key liye , mein apko pick  karna ajouga , bye

Someone tapped his shoulder

Doctor  khan : oh mr Raizada, muje laga key aap nahi age gai

Arnav : nahi aisi  bath nahi, wo trafic

Doctor : it's ok mr raizada, i can understand, aap mere sath mere cabin mein aye

?: doctor !

Doctor khan  turned : yes

Nurse : mr Gupta ko kush complication hai

Doctor : ok, i am  coming, mr Raizada i will be back

Arnav was not listening to him, the only thing which was in his mind was this name : Gupta, could be ?

No it was impossible

On the other hand, khushi was crying badly

Khushi : bauji !

Doctor : miss Gupta, please aap bahar wait kijiye, don't worry i will handle it

Khushi went outside the room

Arnav was waiting in the cabin, thinking about khushi'

On the other hand arohi came

Arohi : khushi ? babuji'

Khushi : kuch nahi hoga unko

Arohi : wo mein kam key liye

Khushi looked at her, took her hands and said

Khushi : roro, i trust you, mujhe malum hai key tum sab sabhallogi

Arohi : wo aaj tum office mein nahi ho, to bohat ajeeb lag raha hai

Khushi : aaj muje bhi sab ajjeb lag raha hai, babuji ko khona ka dar

Arohi : chuut ! Bas kuch nahi hoga

She hugged her

Arohi : anyway, muje ab jana hoga, jab babuji ko hosh ajaye to mujhe call karna ok

Khushi : theek hai

Evening in SM

Everyone was having tea

Anjali : kitna ajjeb lag raha, itne saloon bad is ghar mein aye hai, maa ki aaj bohat yaad arahee hai

Nani ji : ha bitiya

Mami jee : anjali betiya, sasouma, aap itni sad sad face mat kijiyai

Druv : waisa jijajee kaha hai

Anjali : unhai kuch kam tha, to wo nahi asakhe

Ring rong

Anjali : is waqt kaun hai,,chotey aur akash abhi ghai hai , OP dekhe kaun hai

OP opened the door

Arohi : nameste, mein  ASR se milne ayee hoon

OP : woo ghar pein nahi hai

Arohi : o to yeh unko dedena, mein phir chalti hoon

Anjali : ek minute, aap kaun hai ?

Arohi : ji mein chammak challo company sey hoon, who ASR ney hamare compagny se kal raat kuch select kyat ha

Anjali : o acha, aap please andar aye

Arohi : leckin

Anjali with a big smile : leckin vekin kuch nahi, aap chai to pee key jao

Arohi : wo.. theek hai

Arohi followed anjali

Anjali : hum aap ko sab se milate hai

Arohi thinking : yeh itni sweet kyu bol rahe hai

When she came in front the dining table, she was shocked

Arohi : arreh tum ? peecha karte karte yaha pounch gaye

Druv : woo, mein toh

Anjali : kya aap dono apne aap ko pehley se jante ho

Arohi not listening to anjali

Arohi : mujhe to pehle se malum hona chahiye tha key wo tum thai

Druv : kya ? tum ho kaun ?

Arohi : oye, ghar walon key samne inta shareef baneye ki koshih mat karo

Nani ji : Nameste, aap kaun hai

Arohi : Nameste, hum'

Druv : ha tum ho kaun

Arohi : mein, woo

Druv winked at her

Arohi : woo kuch nahi

She looked at anjali : mujhe lagta hai key mujhe chalna chahiye

She turned and looked to Druv with an angry look

Mami jee : are waah, yek kaun thi, phatee saree part 2

Druv : Chammak challo compagny, interesting

 

 

Precap :

At SM

Druv : bhai kal aap ki cocktail party hai

Arnav : ya tho

Druv : i know key yeh ek business deal key liye hai, but may  i come ?

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In khushi's room 

Tok tok tok

Khushi : yeh khirki se kaun see awaaz hai

She opened the window

Khushi : Aman tum, is waqt ?


comment please Tongue





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Posted: 24 December 2011 at 3:02pm | IP Logged
Ahhh j'aime trop
Dhruv et Arohi <3 <3 <3 <3
 
Update quickly loving it


Edited by SiRul - 24 December 2011 at 3:35pm

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Posted: 24 December 2011 at 3:14pm | IP Logged
that was awesome!!!

can't wait for the next part!! thanks for the PM

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Posted: 24 December 2011 at 3:30pm | IP Logged
Wow what an amazing update!!


Can't wait for them 2 to meet up

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