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 Thank you for those lovely comments, here the part 2, hope you like itTongue

Part 2

At office

Khushi was working on her new project

Khushi : Ok, acha iski report bana key meri email par send karna, aur yeh report Arohi ko please dedena.

Worker : Ok miss Gupta, aur hai  kal ek new client nai phone kiya tha, wo hamare saath ek contact sign karna chahte, and i think it's a good opportunity for us, market mein hamara statut ko bhi acha effect mile gha

Khushi : great, to tum sarre details

Ring, rong

Khushi : o one minute

At raizada mansion :

Nani was coming downstrair  with laxmi in her arms, a delicious smell was attracting her toward the kitchen.

Nani ji : waah, kya baat hai, aaj ghar mah bohat achi khusbo arahee hai

Anjali : nani ji, woh apka potaa araha hai , is liye mein apne pyare bhai ke liye kheer banarahi hoon

Mami ji  coming from her room : Anjali beetiya, hamara little bird Ameerica se wappis arahai, uske liye hum kheer nahi , ek achaa sa item banagee, ek dum tip top, who kya kehte usko ?  hain chacalaaate mousse

Nani gave her a furious look

Nani ji : manorama ! Is ghar ma, jab kuch acha hota hai, to kheer banti ha

Mami ji : paar sassou maa.

                 

 

He was standing near the french window, Staring the wall in front of him .  It was a habit now . His garden was not as before, indeed his favourite  red flower had disappeared : khushi the unique flower of his garden. Her particular smell was haunting him every day. He wanted to feel her, oh God why someone called him when he was about to kiss her. He was cursing the bloody man who created phone.                                                                                                                                                                                                                           

:What are you thinking about ?

Arnav, backed to reality : huh, nothing, go to your room

Lavanya : O please ASR, tum ko kya hogaya hai, aur is wall mein kya itna special hai ke tum is ko dekh ra ho

Arnav : nothing                                                                                                           

Lavanya : ASR, muje tumhare liye bohat tension hothi hai, look at yourself baby, you'

Arnav  getting angry, : just stop it !! And please don't call me baby ok !!  kya  tum ko ek baat samaj mein nahi aati damn it, mujhai kuch bhi nahee hai, tum weird behave karrahee ho, jo me kehta usko follow karo na.

Lavanya was choked, was it the same ASR who was standing in front of her, the same person who took her hand , and announced their marriage in front of all the world

No it couldn't be ASR

Lavanya crying :  tum ko pata bhi hai ke mein kis dard se guzaar rahee hoon, everyday my parents call me and ask me about the marriage !  what i am suppose to say, tell me nah !

Arnav annoyed : live me alone, Damn it !

Lavanya : do you really love me ? please ASR, tell me the trust, i can't stand it anymore

Arnav was annoyed by her silly questions, it was one thing that he actually hates from her side, everyday keep asking if he has true feelings for her.

Arnav : agar, pyaar na karta to is ghar mein tum na hoti

Lavanya was not satisfied by his reply  , she held his hand and came close to him

Lavanya : so prove it

Arnav  didn't understand what she meant, he raized his eyebrow

Lavanya : kiss me

Arnav : o come on, don't be

Anjali : chote, Lavanya

She was standing near the door

Lavanya looked at Arnav and left the room in hurry

Anjali upset : chote, lavanya ko kya hua ?

Anjali put her hand on his shoulders

Arnav  removed her hand: o please di, aap maat churu ho na

Anjali : theek hai baba, hum to bas yeh kehna aye thai key Druv ata ki hoga, to tum neeche ajao, aur Lavanya se achi tara baat karna, dekh rahi hoon  key in dino  tum dono jaghra bohat karte ho, aur yeh sab Druv nai dekh liya to  kya sochai ga

Arnav looked back at Anjali

Arnav : ok, i will try

Anjali left the room

Ring ring

Arnav : hello... , ok... sure..  great... bye

 

Living room

Mami ji : Om prakask, flower le ke oi jaldi, humara bitwa araha hai

Akash laughing : mom, apka beta ara hai, apki bahu nahi

Mami ji : chup karo, do saal hogaye hai usko deke bina, hello hey'

: Mom !

Mami ji : my son !

 

Gupta's house

Payal was making tea

Payal : khushi kal  babuji ka operation hai, tum ko yaad hai na

khushi : ha jiji, is liye hum kal office mein nahi jae gai

Payal : leckeen tumharre kal ek important meeting thi na, uska kya karogee

Khushi  smiling : ha, wo Arohi manage kar lege, aur Aman bee hai na

Payal gave a cup of tea to khushi, and sat on the sofa next to her

Payal : Khushi tum hum sab key liye itna karti hoo, leckin is hassi ke piche kitna dard hai, wo hum deekh sakte hai, khushi aisa kya tha delhi mein jisne tum ko itna badal dala

Khushi : jiji, yeh aap kya bol rahe ho, aisa khuch bhi nahi hai, aur waisa bhi humara purra pariwar humare pass hai, to hum kyu na khush hoge ? aap bhi na

Payal : to tum khush ho ?

 

Raizada's mansion

Druv : yes, i am really happy to be back at home, apko  itna miss kiya hai, vaise yeh tea bohat achi banne hai, kisne banayee ?

Lavanya : maine, achi hai, chamkili ne muje sikhaya hai

Arnav closed his eyes, trying to control himself, why everbody  was so fond of her.

Druv : chamkili ?

Anjali with a big smile : wo Lavanya kee teacher thi, humara matlab hai keh wo Lavanya ji ko sanskari bahu kaise bante hai, who sikhatee tee

Druv smiling : o i see, you mean a guru

Arnav couldn't take it anymore and finally  stood up : di mujhe lucknow jana hai, kal, ek deal sign karne key liye

Anjali nodded : theek hai, chota

Druv : bhai, kya hum sab lucknow kuch dino keh liye nahi jaa sakte, it will be fun, waha key log, waha ka khana, waha ki laarkyian...

Anjali pulling his  ear : baadmash !

Druv : di please choro dard horaha hai, bhai mera idea kaisa hai, great na ?

Arnav : rubbish, mein kuch gentho ke liye ja ra rahoo, na ke vacation key liye

Druv : oh please, bhai mere liye, hum saab bohot enjoy karegai , haina Dadi ji ?

Nani ji : vaisan, druv bitwa theek reh rahat hai, humaare bhi lucknow jane ka bohat maan kar raha hai, waha ka chain, aram, abho hawa, humare parivaar key liye acha hogha

Druv with  broad smile :  Dadi ji, ap kitni sweet hai, yeh baat aap apne  naati ko kyu nahi samjhati

Nani : arnav bitwa, sach ma, druv bitwa theek kehrahai

Arnav : i said no

Druv : bhai please

Anjali : chote maan jao na, mera bhi bohot dil karra hai

Arnav couldn't say no to his sister

Arnav : ok, aap log rukna waha, mein chalajao ga

Druv : yes !

 

Late at night

Arnav was on the road alone,  he tried to move but he couldn't

Arnav : yeh kaun si jagai hai

He looked around him, evething was dark

there was nothing, not even a single sign of life,  as if he was in a black hole

he tried to move, but he couldn't, he tried to breeath , but his lungs refused, he felt that his hearth would brust

 

Chim chim

 

He turned:  Who's there?

 

Chim, Chim

 

Arnav: mein Arnav Singh Raizadai, mein sab ko dekh lo ga, yeh kya mazzak hai ?  Who's there ?

 

Chim, Chim

 

Arnav: Khushi... tum?

 

A silhouette appeared in front of him, it was khushi with open hair, she was wearing the same red saree, she was lookind at him, her eyes full of reproch

Arnav: khushi tum ,kaha thee tum ? tum ko malum hai, kei meine tumhara kitna wait kiya hai

 

He tried to touch her, but couldn't

                                                                                                                                       

Khushi: aap ko koi farahk nahi partha, it doesn't mean nothing, koi ahmeet nahi hai

 

She looked at him with teary eyes, Arnav tried to weep it, but she was like a spirit, it was like catching smoke with hands

 

Arnav crying : paar Khushi, us waqt mai bohat gussa mai tha, aur tumne kaha tha ne kai ghussay mein mera dimmag nahi chalte, please wappas a jao na, mein tumare bina jee nahi pao ga

 

Khushi: nahee, Arnav ji, ab hum bohat door hai, hume jannaa hoga, app apni zindagi jeai, mera bare  sochna chor dijie

 

She was disappearing in front of him, and he could not do anything to stop her

 

Arnav: khushi , please... Khushiii !

 

Arnav opened his eyes, sweat beaded from his forehead

                     

 

On the other hand, Khushi woke up

Khushi: arnav ji...

 

 

Precap

Sheesh Mahal

Arohi : arreh tum ? peecha karte karte yaha pounch gaye

Druv : woo, mein toh

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Arnav : ha di mein hospital mein hoon, donation dene key liye

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Khushi : jiji, mein hospital mein hoon, babu ji ka operation complete ho chuka hai, mein arahee hou

Voila

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Posted: 06 November 2011 at 10:12am | IP Logged
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plz change anji's dialogue colour plz,
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