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Posted: 05 November 2011 at 3:21pm | IP Logged

Nice update intreasting too cant wait for the next one.

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Posted: 05 November 2011 at 7:26pm | IP Logged
wondaful update
feel so sowii 4 khushi
fanx 4 da pm plzz cont soon x Smile

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Posted: 05 November 2011 at 9:46pm | IP Logged
hey  nice  update  yaar...
arnav  need  khushi  helpWink...interesting...
looking   fwd...

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Posted: 05 November 2011 at 10:51pm | IP Logged
Classic Naddie
So very good..loved how Khusi stood up for her self!
thanks for the pm!

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Posted: 06 November 2011 at 1:54am | IP Logged
nyc update... arnie saved kkg .. loved it !!

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Arnav : look at her face her eyes has so much pain  . he drop idea to fight with her just said " tell me what you want"

Khushi: you write

Arnav: i am listening

Khushi: she look at his face he was close to her hardly any distance between them , opening the car pocket and taking out first aid box

Arnav:" bolo"he hold her tight and started wiping the wound

Khushi: just took a deep breath as she was feeling his touch and was not able to talk to him .

Arnav:was busy , he just turn her around and taken her other arm ." you need a injection "

Khushi: kya

Arnav: the cuts are deep and you might get infection .

Khushi:Hum thek ha

Arnav: i know you are , i gave you time to say what you want but you didnt .

Khushi: woh hum

Arnav: Khushi we both are in same position ,we are in struggling in quicksand and going in slowly , to come out of it we both need each other hand . i cannot do any thing with out your help nor you can do without mine.

 Khushi: look at him he was  resting his head with the back of the seat and had closed his eyes .

Arnav: you want that your family does not loss its respect in society, and i want  secure my  Di marriage . lets do a sauda

Khushi: sauda

Arnav : as i am a business man

Khushi : hmmm shakes her head.

Arnav::so lets do a contract

Khushi : ok

Arnav:i wlll save your family you save ..paused

Khushi: hold his wrist  as it was her property ... look at the time " uff mine engagement is at 6"

Anrav: hmmm

Khushi: you have 1 hour find a guy for me .

Arnav: what

Khushi: find a guy so i can get engage to him  not ...she paused ..

Arnav: how i will find a guy ?

Khushi: koi bhi

Arnav: are you crazy ?

Khushi: i dont want to wear ring from Shyam ji ... bus ...

Arnav: i have a idea i will come with you to your engagement  , if he will see me there he will him self go away Khushi: good idea she just pat his shoulder .

Arnav: started car .

Khushi: took a deep breath . as she was relax now .


at khushi place

Buaji: i know she will do some thing .

amma: where is she ?

Payal" i dont know we went in to the shop she just vanished ?

Shayam: i am trying her number but it is going switch off.

Shashi: smiled and thank GOD.

buaji: i will not leave her today.

they heard a car stop at their door.

Payal : aaray yeh tou arnav ji ha

Shayam : just turn pale...

Buaji: dekho titilya ha ka nahi

Payal ha  ..


Arnav: : wait

Khushi: kya:

Arnav: act that you are hurt , i will pick you up

Khushi: hum

Arnav: look at her in anger ,

Khushi: just sit  he walk to her side  and pick her up care fully

Arnav walk in with her

Payal: kya huwa Khushi

Arnav: she met an accident.

buaji: kab

Khushi hum woh

Arnav: pressed his hand on her waist to tell him where to make her sit

Khushi: kya with eyes

Arnav: whisper "you want me to stand like this "

Khushi: oh ..please aap hum ko seat per betha da.

amma beta take her to room .. she asked Arnav

Arnav: look at her "where is he ?"

Khushi: must be in his room

Arnav: hmmm he made her sit on the bed .

everyone enter room .

buaji: get up and changed your clothes , you have only 10 mins

Khushi: look at Arnav

Arnav: stand with his arm wrap around his chest.

buaji: look at him

Khushi: buaji hum iss tarah thek ha

Buaji:  this girl will not listen any one ..

Khushi: ignored

amma: beta you stay and attend her engagement 

Arnav: sure 

Aama: why not beta you come and sit with Khushi babuji ...

Arnav: look at her and walk out

Khushi: is he the same guy who was shouting at me last night ,she had a self thought

Payal: khushi: yeh kya huwa

Khushi: kuch nahi  jiji

Buaji: chalo .hum shyam betwa ko bolata ha 

Khushi:smiled 

Payal:why are you smiling ?

Khushi: kuch nahi ji ji

Payal: quickly change this .

they heard buaji shouting on top of her voice 

Payal ran out 

Buaji: was crying and shouting,

Payal "kya huwa "

Khushi: smiled at Arnav

Buaji: yeh dekho , yeh larki pata nahi hum sub ko izaat se zinda rahna dagi bhi ka nahi  

Payal read the letter " buaji i respect you alot ,but today i feel ashame to see Khushi with Arnav Sing Raizada ,yesterday people were pointing at mine and Khushi ji relation tomorrow they will taunt me , my family has a respect in the society they will never like people talk ill about there bahu , i think i cannot marry Khushi"

Buaji: just boiled she just came to hit Khushi 

Arnav in time stand in between her and Khushi. 

Buaji: hato tum last time it happen because of you and this time again it happen because of you.

Arnav: please listen to me 

Khushi just hold his hand and pull him behind her ."buaji iss mein in ki koi galti nahi ha "

Buaji: wah wah titliya , pata nahi kyun babua na tum ko apna ghar lakar aaya .hum sub kai izaat tumhari wajha  se Lucknow mein mitti mein mile , ab yeh per bhi"

Khushi: buaji  woh bhi galat fameehi thi aur yeh bhi.

Bauji: ha ha tum tou parsa ho... log asie he bolta ha 

Khushi : felt Arnav just pressed her hand ..

Arnav: i will find a better guy for her .

Buaji: find had a laughter , kon karaga iss se shadi , kal raat sub humara mazaq urra kar gai ha aur aaj .

babuji cough.. as he wanted to say something ...

Buaji: dekho iss ko ...

Khushi : aaj jai Arnav ji . as now he was not needed .as she was sure shyam will not come back.

Arnav:turn back and look at her . "are you sure" as he got scared of buaji anger.

Khushi: ji.

Arnav was about to walk out  

buaji roko

Arnav: stopped 

buaji: she cannot stay here anymore .take her with you.

Khushi: buaji 

Buaji: Get out of my house i am not Shashi who tolerate all this, if you will do like this who will marry payal . she push her she just bang into Arnav.

Khushi: amma ,

amma: try to say some thing but bujai stop her.

Buaji: get out or i will kill my self , i cannot take this insult.

babuji started coughing he wanted to stop khushi but could not ... 

Arnav; chalo tum mera saath .

Khushi look at him

Arnav: come with me .

Khushi;per.

Arnav: take your things and come i am waiting. 

Khushi: hum na kya lana ha ,just devi maiya ... she walk in and  picked it up

(i cannot find the lyrics but it goes with Khushi condition )

buaji: look at her shouted "Get out of my house "

Khushi: quickly walk out 

Arnav was standing with waiting for her with front door open

she walk and seated he closed and walk to driver seat and drive away ...

Shyam : saw them going "yeh kya " he just got shocked of his life .


to be cont if you guys want more quickly comment or i will have eid break ...me waiting 



Edited by naddiya26 - 06 November 2011 at 7:25am

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Posted: 06 November 2011 at 7:28am | IP Logged
loved it.  continue soon.realy nice idea of getting arhi together.


Edited by ArshForEver - 06 November 2011 at 7:29am

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liked so much pls continue soon

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