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Posted: 18 November 2011 at 2:30am | IP Logged
awesome...
it was soo nice to see khushi supporting arnav...and i loved the way u ended it

thanks for the pm...continue soon..:)

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Posted: 18 November 2011 at 2:58am | IP Logged
nice

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Posted: 18 November 2011 at 10:08am | IP Logged
loved the updates...arnav and khushi's fights are adorable.ASR brought food for Khushi
Shayam died felt sad but he asked for forgiveness before dying.
 
UPDATE SOON
 
Pooja 

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Posted: 18 November 2011 at 10:23am | IP Logged
wonderful updateSmile

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Posted: 18 November 2011 at 4:44pm | IP Logged
super duper update
love it core
craving more
thnx
bless yu

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Posted: 18 November 2011 at 7:33pm | IP Logged
Your story is absolutely awesome.ClapClapClapClap The Hate doesn't have to carry on forever like in the serial, you showed those CV's there is another way to deal with this story. Let Arnav and Khushi get married and then together deal with Shyam and everyone else. Exellent work.ClapClapClap Keep it coming. Love it.StarStarStar Please add me to your PM list.Big smile Thanks for the Story.Wink

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Posted: 18 November 2011 at 9:37pm | IP Logged
i loved the update!!!!
i liked how khushinsupported arnav
please update soon

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After a week

At RM life was not same ,Anjali was very down everyone was trying to cheer her up.khushi was in a fix as Arnav was getting very possessive he was behaving like a a spoiled kid who want mom attention 24 /7.and if child mom is busy the baby do crazy things to attract her  . it was 9 they were having dinner .

Mami ji:khushi betaya kya kara koi iss ghar mein baat nahi karta

Khushi:look at Arnav who was having long face as he was asking her to come with him,and  she was with anjali he was not talking to her ,she was trying to address him but he was behaving like he was not listening her.

Mami: made a face with air in her mouth... and pointed at Arnav

Khushi shyly smiled ...

Mami: pinch her

Khushi: ouch shouted ...Arnav look at her as she was sitting in front of him.

LA: kya huwa chamkali... la was back to RM after hearing the death news of Shaym and mami was the one who just explain her why Arnav and Khushi got married..

Arnav: you can never behave..he just push his plate and walk away

Khushi: showed him eyes ... "mami ji"

Mami: had a laughter ... jao jao maanao

Khushi: chora acha ha naraz raha waran jaan nahi chora ga

Arnav heard her "acha abhi bata hoon"

LA and mami had a laughter ..."chamkali tum kitan darti hoon ASR se"

Khushi: shyly smiled...

Anjali just look at her she knew because of her they are suffering , as daily khushi is with her like her  shadow and she is not giving time to his chota which is making him irritated."  i think they should go on a honey moon"

everyone look at her

Arnav who was pretending he was reading paper look at them.

Khushi: please nahi

LA: she is sacred of him everyone pull her leg .

Khushi nahi hum darta nahi ha bus just collected plates from the table.

Anjali: phir aap karna lagi abhi chota na dekhe leya he will shout on OP..

Khushi kept the plates back. she look towards hall side saw Arnav looking at her she just hold her breath" he is here"and closed her eyes

Anjali:look at khushi and then she saw Arnav . "kya huwa Khushi"

Khushi: just picked up glass of water and started drinking it.

Arnav: just walk  to LA we have a meet in nitaral tomorrow i think we should leave right a way..

Khushi: knew he was planing to go but she didnot expected he will ask La to accompany him.

LA me she saw Arnav winked at her

Aranv: yes he walk up stairs  ,as he knew she will come and fight for her right.

khushi: just sank on chair.

Mami ji daal mein kuch kala ha

LA: ha mami ji ...ASR ko chamkli ko la kar jana chaiya per woh ...

Anajali: chota ko tou hum dekhe la ga Khushi will go with him

LA: aur kya Di mein kyun jao ...

Khushi hum nahi jai ga ... jai woh akeela

Mami: agar wahan per koi larki achi lagai tou

Khushi: hum chora ga nahi...she just walk up stairs

LA : who was controlling her laughter started laughing ."phaas gai chamkli aaj ... she just hug mami " koi meeting nahi ha , ASR was just joking ..."

Anjali: chota bhi na ,meri bechari bhabhi sara din iss ko tang karta rahta ha


Khushi : walk in in anger she just shut the door " ja kar dekhai"

she saw Arnav packing his clothes ...he didnot pay attention as if he had not heard her ...

Khushi: knock his shoulder " hum aap se baat kar raha ha "

Arnav: "hato" move her and placed few more clothes from cupboard..

Khushi:  just came in between bag and Arnav." sina nahi aap na "

Arnav: "kya problem he "

Khushi: hum aap ko jana nahi da ga.

Arnav: oh really

Khushi: ji really started taking out clothes for back she say her clothes few bed sheets  was in bag with his only few  things"yeh kya ha "

Arnav: look at the clothes ... "woh"

Khushi: tou aap hum ko tang kar raha tha .

Arnav : hold her from her waist "ya"

Khushi: aap tou bacho se bhi do haath aaga ha.

Arnav: acha

Khushi: hata

Arnav : why?

Khushi: just started keeping back the things he was just moving with her ..." koi nahi keh sakta aap iss tarah ka ha "

Arnav: ab mein na kya kiya .

Khushi: sub kya socha ga .

Aranv: kon sub

Khushi: ghar wala

Arnav: kissed her neck..."mujhe ko kya pata "

Khushi: bola kya problem ha aap ko she just left everything and turn around towards him.

Arnav: you know my problem dont you.kissed her

Khushi: just could not stop him as his love was very strong to handle ... 

Arnav:look at her as she hold his hand "bolo"

Khushi: if i ask you something will you agree without making it a issue 

Arnav : what ,you dont want to go on honey moon

Khushi: smiled..pat his for head 

Arnav: phir

Khushi: promise me 

Arnav: promise .

Khushi: i want to give something to Di 

Arnav: what ?

Khushi: was lost thinking i am sure that will bring joy to her life and she will aging start living .. 

Arnav: kya bolo na

Khushi: you remember the day we got married Di told us her wish ..

Arnav: just started thinking .."yaad nahi aa raha as at that time my mind was shell"

Khushi: whisper in his ear "Baby

Arnav: ha tou ...look at her in surprise ..

Khushi:  if we give her ..

Arnav:look at her in surprise ..what she was thinking and how far her mind was going , he look at her she was thinking ..."you are unbelievable"

Khushi: ab kya kiya 

Arnav: you think alot Khushi i never thought of it ... 

Khushi: i just want her to come back to life and for her we should .paused ..we cannot buy happiness for her can we ..

Aranv: shake his head 

Khushi: i know you don't like kids but that will be hope for her ...she was saying today to adopt one but she is scared of you if we ..she look at him he was into tears ..

Arnav: you are really gem of a person . he just hug her tightly in his arms . "we will " kissed her 

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