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hey  nice  yaar...
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nyc start... shyam ki sachchai out... !! do continue !

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Hey Naddiya I am tears in after reading this...Brilliant portrayal of Arnav and Khushi's dilemma and their helplessness...

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Arnav : was all lost he saw a guy coming running toward him

Guy"roko us  ko ".

Arnav: just turn back and saw Khushi walking on the track .he heard a train horn. "OMG" he just ran at fast as he could  . she was walking to wards the train . thou train was bit far but in a min it would be there . "KHUSHI" he shouted but she was all lost she didnot heard him in the noise . he just reached

Khushi:" Arnav ji " she look at the train and turn back to see him last time ... at the same time he grab her from her waist his feet lost balance and and they both roll down the steep side of the track .the train passed .

Arnav was holding her so tight next to him that it was hard for her to breath .she was on him with closed eyes .he took few mins as he was still in shocked , she was crying in his arms . he could feel her tears rolling down his neck .. he closed his eyes composed him self  remove her from him self with a jerk she was now on the ground he got up  without looking at her started walking .he saw man asking from hand are you ok . Arnav shakes his head. he look back she was sitting her both  elbows were bleeding she was just looking at the sky.

Arnav:  walk back  " Why you did that ?" he just shouted on top of his voice .

Khushi: didnot reply.

Arnav: kneel down and shakes her shoulder ." i am asking you something"

Khushi: why you saved me ?

Arnav:  he had no answer 

Khushi: maarna diya hota 

Arnav: raised his hand to slap her but stopped.

Khushi: why you stop hit me she hold his hand and hit on her face .

Arnav: free his hand ..

Khushi: maara na , hum na aap ki DI ka ghar 

Arnav: look at her

Khushi: hum ko nahi bpata hum kis tarah Anjali ji ko face kara ga , hum ko apna aap se ghin aarahi ha . 

Arnav: try to avoid eye contact with her .

Khushi: aap ko nahi aarahi hum se, bola.

Arnav: since when you know Jiju ?

Khushi: he saved me in Lucknow when you throw dirt on me .he then started staying in Buaji house like a paying guest . 

Arnav: do you love him?

Khushi: smiled or had a laughter 

Arnav: are you crazy

Khushi:  look in his eyes "love " paused " what is that?"

Arnav: you are out of your mind right now and i think it is use less to talk to you.. get up

Khushi: i dont want to come with you?

Arnav: ok sit here and if you want to commit suicide go ahead , it is just showing that you are guilty .

Khushi: jump up to her feet" yes i am guilt you know of what ?"

Arnav: look at her at this time her eyes was full of sorrow it has so much pain in it  that he was not able to look at her. 

Khushi: guilty of facing Anjali di , a sis who had always with me when i needed help, i guilty of facing babuji as       it was his wish that i get married ,so he can keep the promise to his friend , with what face i go in front , and how to tell him he has been betrayed again , his other daughter has same fate as her elder sis. he will die.  the last guilt is someone i loved does not trust me   , for all those guilt i prefer to DIE" she started running towards the car 

Arnav: look at her she was going far from him he just ran behind her .. "khushi"

Khushi: turn back " please hum ko humari aukat na yaad dilya ga hum ko pata ha hum kya ha ,hum ko aaj bhi yaad ha aap ka sab shabd "she turn around and started walking . she just walk to the road

Arnav: walk to car and drive to her " sit in"

Khushi: i can go my self 

Arnav: you are hurt 

Khushi: smiled  , this will be healed .

Arnav: Khushi dont created scene 

Khushi: please you go 

Arnav just got out. he just walk to her  " what you think of your self  ha  tell me'

Khushi: do kauri kai larki jo 

Arnav: shut up just shut up.

Khushi: why ? aap he tou bolta ha .she walk back and bag with the car 

Arnav: walk to her there was no space between them . their body was touching each other .he just hold her arm open the door and push her in .she didnot moved he just pick her up and made her sit .bang the door.

walk back to his side ." i need your help"

Khushi: smiled "Arnav singh Raizada need Khushi's help, he need Khushi"

Arnav : recollected  his words which he in anger said to her .

Khushi: where  is that proud Arnav Singh Raizada ?

ARnav: Khushi

Khushi: shhh dont shout you need me .she look in to his eyes 

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hey the first one to comment.. love it..

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read both the parts...awesomeSmileloved it to the do continueSmile

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