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SS "Sorrow"(ARHI) epilogue 52(21/11)updated (Page 32)

Kritianya IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 14 November 2011 at 5:47am | IP Logged
Nice updates
but dear u forget 2 pm me from last some updates
plz next time se bhulna mat
cont soon

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paulomi_taAnu IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 14 November 2011 at 8:41am | IP Logged
very very shweet part.,. u always make me smile wid cute arHi scenes.. love u !!
naddiya26 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 14 November 2011 at 9:51am | IP Logged

Khushi : just try to move him but his grip was to tight on her arm." yeh bhi na sona mein bhi  paused and smiled at his innocent face..

Anjali: why chota and Khushi are not coming ?

Nani: ask OP to call them

Anjali: nahi nani hum jata ha ...she walk up and knocked at the door.

Khushi: kon

Anjali: Khushi

Khushi: DI aa jai she just tried to free her hand but could not..

Anjali: why it is so dark?

Khushi: whisper  Di he is sleeping?

Anjali:look at Arnav he was keeping his head in Khushi lap and was fast a sleep ."kya huwa"

Khushi: headache

Anjali oh he has allergy of agarbatti  (Incense stick)

Khushi: mujhe ko nahi pata tha

Anjali: smiled the way he was sleeping ."tum aa jati "

Khushi : showed her  her hand which was tightly grip in his 

Anjali: chota bhi na pagal ha 24/7 acha rule banya ha 

Khushi: aap ko pata ha 

Anjali: yes i heard him saying to you 

Khushi: shyly smiled ...

Anjali:ok carry on your pati sawa i am going, she walk out

Khushi: zara utha tou batai hoon mein...softly kissed his cheek 

time flies he woke up him self . 

Khushi: good evening 

Arnav: evening 

Khushi : jee  how is your headache?

Arnav: hmmm i am fine ,why you didn't woke me i said for sleeping for few min's

Khushi: you slept for hours 

Arnav: damit ...i had to go to office.

Khushi: it is not my mistake ok 

Arnav: you are sitting like this 

Khushi: hmmm aap nahi tou bola tha 24/7

Arnav: pagal ho

Khushi: showed her hand which he was still holding , i tried and even Di tried but you were not leaving 

Arnav: shit...he just left her hand it was all red and his finger marks was there..

Khushi: chal freshup ho we will have tea 

Arnav: you didnot have lunch?

Khushi: bhook nahi thi

Arnav: Khushi tum sach mein pagal ho.

Khushi: acha thanks for the information. she try to get up but her legs were stiff ."ouch"

Arnav: wait he just hold her leg

Khushi : hum thek ha 

Arnav: just look at her ...and pull it straight ." sorry "

Khushi: kya 

Arnav: Sorry 

Khushi : aap hum ko sorry bol raha ha 

Arnav: hmmm

Khushi: smiled 

Arnav: thori dair iss tarah beto thek hojai ga .. he just got up

Khushi: aik baat pocha 

Arnav: hmmm

Khushi: kya aap ko hum se pyar ha 

Arnav: look at her in fake anger

Khushi: acha acha na jawab da hum ko nahi jana 

Arnav: just turn and smiled .

Khushi: sota woh acha lag raha tha jaise he aankh khul ghusa karna laga 

Arnav: just walk to washroom " pagal tum ko bhi to ha jo iss tarah wait karti rahi"

Khushi was waiting for him to come ,

Aranv: thek huwa 

Khushi: hmm

Arnav: gave her  his hand 

Khushi : took it and stand  

Arnav: next time dont try to be such a obedient wife please

Khushi: smiled

Arnav: but i think you were staring at me while i was sleeping that why you didnot notice how time flies

Khushi: shyly look at him" jee nahi hum sar daba raha tha

Arnav:smiled  aur kya kar rahi thi

Khushi : kuch nahi

Arnav : jhoot 

Khushi sach

Arnav: yeh kya ha showed her  his cheek were he had his lipstick mark 

Khushi: oh ,she quickly rub it from her hadn

Aranv: smiled  please aik yahan ... forward his other cheek

Khushi: jee nahi

Arnav: "ok then stand like this "placed his both hand on her side.

Khushi: knew he is zaddi he will not let her go, she just softly kissed his cheek, he just smiled 

Arnav: quickly kissed her and walk ahead not to see her reaction .

Khushi : just in shocked stand still

Arnav: knocked at door Chalo blush baad mein hona 

Khushi walk to him both went down 

Anjali aagai aap dono

Arnav: Di yeh itni pagal ha muhje ko nahi pata tha , i asked her to wake me after 1/2 hour and she 

Anjali:  you both are luck

Arnav: why? you are too lucky Di

Anjali: hum  lucky 

Arnav: yes your are not kya ?

Anaji chora chota 

Arnav: with eyes asked Khushi talk"kya baat ha"

Anjali kuch nahi

Khushi : just walk to her "Kya huwa Di"

Anjali: koi baat nahi

Khushi: DI chala aap inn se na share kara per mera se tou kara na 

Anjali: aara aap dono bhi na 

Arnav: di Jiju nahi aai

Anjali: nahi aur aap hum se un ka bara mein baat bhi na kara 

Aranv: why?

Anjali: bus she just got up and walk 

Khushi: aram se 

Arnav: i swear i will kill him

Khushi doesn't knew how to calm down him as his anger was visible from his face. she was not at all getting how to safe her family from Shyam evil plans ,

OP: bhabi ji aap ka letter.

Khushi just didnot taken it from OP  she just look at Arnav.

Arnav: tell everyone when ever it come you all should give it to me.

OP: jee

Arnav: just walk to kitchen and burn it on the stove.

Khushi: just feel like banging her head " kya kara hum". she felt someone placed hand on her shoulder. she look back 

AKash: smiled " i know bhabi i am with you "

Khushi: kaise 

Akash : i use to visit your place 

Khushi: kyun

Akash : woh shyly 

Khushi: kya

Akash: i like payal ji i saw jiju there and today when i went to drop her she told me everything,

Khushi: took a deep breath .

to be cont .. today's updated is also like a filler ... loving your comments dont forget to leave one 

Edited by naddiya26 - 14 November 2011 at 10:57am

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Alyaa_27 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 14 November 2011 at 10:31am | IP Logged
i'm first!!! sooo happyDancing
its gting interesting nad... nw even akash know..
btw,arhi scene was super cute!!!

Edited by Alyaa_27 - 14 November 2011 at 10:32am

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FebruaryFlower IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 14 November 2011 at 10:35am | IP Logged
Nice one Naddiya!
The first part was really sweet.
Looking forward to the next update.
Thanks for the PM!

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sarunlicious.. IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 14 November 2011 at 10:36am | IP Logged
Awesome Part . Embarrassed I'm Liking, Don't Say It's Filler Hug

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naddiya26 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 14 November 2011 at 10:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ..-Sanzz-..

Awesome Part . Embarrassed I'm Liking, Don't Say It's Filler Hug
i dont know what i want from myself never satisfied,,thx for support  
.Saraa. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 14 November 2011 at 10:51am | IP Logged
good one.liked it..

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