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SS "Sorrow"(ARHI) epilogue 52(21/11)updated (Page 28)

HaRul-lover IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 11 November 2011 at 1:02am | IP Logged
U didnt pm me :(
Loved it

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loved it... loved it ... loved it... Hug 
pls update next part sooonnn... Big smile 
waiting to read it...

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awesum update ! loved it so much !!

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nice updateSmile

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its jst mind blowing!update soon..

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awsum updat eluv it
cnt w8 2 read more
fanx 4 da pm plzz cont soon x

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read it from the begining! awesome! add me to your pm list!

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Khushi: hum nahi raha ga iss ghar mein . she just walk to washroom and splash water on her face . she look at her fore head , try to remove it" you hate me right , i hate you too"she was about to remove  but her hand shiver , she stop , she had a flash bag of night when he was sleeping peacefully on her holding shoulder her tight .

(use your imagination ).  she just close her eyes and placed her hand on her chest felt him .. a shy smiled appear on her face .. she just look her self in mirror ."hum ko kya horaha ha " pat her head .. she heard someone knocking at the door . quickly open "kon"

OP: chota shaib bolraha ha aap ko 

Khushi: acha she just walk out ..

OP:" shaib ka bag hum ko da."

Khushi: kyun

OP" woh office jaraha ha.

Khushi: acha she gave him the bag. and walk down,

Arnav: aagai you are late , i cannot wait for you daily . 

Khushi: look at him he was standing at the door with car keys .

Anjali: chota hum dono ko mandir jana tha ?

Arnav: but it is her office hour 

Anjali: bus karo ,na uss na breakfast kiya ha aur tum.

Arnav: "i have her breakfast with me" he showed her few sandwich in tissue paper.

Anajli: mandir?

Arnav: di 

Anajli: you drop us and go and send driver 

Arnav: no you come with me . 

Anjali kya aap darta ha Khushi ko akela chorna se 

Arnav just look at her he didnot reply . the train incident flash in front of his eyes . he just walk out.

Anjali: pata nahi kya hogaya ha chota ko .

Khushi walk behind him .

Arnav was sitting in car he was waiting for them , he was just controlling his emotions .  they both seated .he gave placed the sandwich in her lap .

Anjali: kam ka bhoot sawar ha chota ka sar per na khud kiya ha na aap  ko karna diya .

Khushi who just wanted to throw the sandwich look at him 

Anjali:" phir tabiyat kharb ho gai  nahi tou kya hoga , bola khushi "

Khushi: just open one and  turn to fed him "yeh la "

Arnav : look at her .

Anajli: chota khalo waran hum aap se naraz hojai ga , haar waqt aap ki marzi nahi chal gai ab.

Arnav ; took a bit . khushi just waited till he chew and swallow in , she just  brought the sandwich close to his mouth again he took a bit .

Anjali: Khushi aap ko kya maana ha khana .

Khushi: hum

Anjali: kya aap ka dil charaha ha ky chota aap ko , she just smiled

Khushi: just quickly took the left piece .

Anjali smiled " zadii ha aap dono aap dono ka bacha tou pata nahi kya hoga " 

Arnav just look at khushi who just shocked at Anjali comment .  just look at Khushi who was ignoring him 

Arnav: bacha i hate kids 

Anjali: chota if you remember you hated marriage too .

Arnav: Di

Anjali: chota bus aap chup raha hum Khushi se baat kar raha ha . 

Arnav: look at Khushi who was just playing with her duppata .

Anjali: hum ko tou itna acha lagta ha per aap ka jiju always say he cannot take responsibility ..

Arnav hit brake  he just started coughing .. 

Khushi  :just started rubbing his chest "Di please give me water "

Anjali" kya huwa chota "

Khushi:"choke " give him water he just took few sips .

Arnav: i am fine.. he was feeling suffocated .his eyes was all red with pain , khushi wanted to console him but she could not , she just open window so some fresh air enter , placed her hand on his as he change gear.

Anajli just didnot notice as she was her self lost ,in Shyam morning words  he had told Anjali if Khushi will be in this house he will not enter as he think she had married Arnav for money and she has setup all this for  his Lucknow visit.

Arnav: DI 

Anjali: look at him

Khushi: offer her her hand  she look at them they both were standing to help her in getting down . she hold their hand and got down in her heart Anjali just said to herself" i cannot apart them."

Anjali walk with them to the mandir , Arnav just let them go and he stand out side ... 

Khushi: babuji she just look at a guy on wheelchair .. she just shake his arm

Arnav: where ?

Khushi: pointed 

Arnav: come with me .hold her hand in his 

Khushi: di

Anjali: hum bhi aarah ha chal aap

Arnav walk ahead .

Payal saw them coming she just whisper in babuji ear .

Babuji ask her to turn his wheel chair. 

Khushi : just left  her hand from Arnav and ran to him he just open his arm and hug her"aap hum se naraz anhi ha "

Payal: " babuji bilkul bhi naraz nahi ha khushi"

Khushi: sach

Payal: babuji tou kal bhi yahan aai tha .tumhara intezar kiya .

Anjali: smiled dekha aaj hum na aap ko aap ki behan aur apni bhabi se mila diya

Arnav: : what 

Anjali: sorry chota hum na aur payal ji na plan kiya tha 

babuji look at anjali and try to ask who she is ?

Khushi: Di ha 

babuji just ask her to come to him he just hug anjali  cried 

Arnav : look at him why he is getting so emotional.

Anjali: just hug her back she thought he is happy i arranged the meeting.

babuji kissed her for head... 

Anjali: smiled " hum aap se pehle bhi mila ha "

babuji shake his head in yes 

Anjali : told them they have met twice , humara pati aap ka case lar raha ha 

Khushi: whisper "babuji ko pata ha "

Arnav: hmmm.

Payal: case?

Anjali: ha un na yeh bola tha.

Arnav: di chora na  

Anjali: chota aap babuji se nahi mila 

Arnav: just walk touch his feet and the kneel down" i married your daughter " 

babuji : just pat his cheek.

Arnav: ab koi kuch nahi kar sakta , aap bus dua kara ka Di  he look at Anjali who was talking to Khushi and payal. "di ka ghar "he kept his head in his lap and cried which he was controlling for few days , babuji placed his hand on his head .

Khushi was looking at him she just sob .. she knew why he is upset and how he is controlling himself.  

Anjali: turn back and saw Arnav crying "chota '

Arnav: just wipe his tears " Di khushi ka aaso ha"he just walk to the other side 

Khushi: aik min she walk behind him ... 

Arnav: chordo muhje ko akela please

Khushi: just sat with him 

Arnav: babuji ko pata ha , shayad woh iss leya bimar huai ha 

Khushi: hum dono ha saath hum milkar sub thek kar laga . she placed her hand on his hand 

Arnav: look at her for the first time she said hum ..

Khushi: iss tarah kya dekhe raha ha

Arnav: are you sure ?

Khushi: 24/7 saath ... but i still hate you.

Arnav: smiled 

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