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SS "Sorrow"(ARHI) epilogue 52(21/11)updated (Page 22)

naddiya26 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 09 November 2011 at 5:19am | IP Logged

 Arnav was wondering what she is doing and why no one called him  for Lunch and evening tea . he just waited for Khushi or Anjali to invite him . it was 6 he just got fed up of waiting " it is hell to wait for someone " he just slap his lappy  and walk down . the hall was empty  , "OP" 

Anjali: woh nahi ha ghar per

Arnav: Di Khushi se bola meri chai mera kamra mein la kar aai 

Anjali: Chota Khushi is not your servant , and it in not your room now.

Arnav: DI he just try to show he was angry ... 

Khushi: " your tea" she appear for kitchen wear a pick sari with her hairs open covering her back  to see sari click this 

Anjali: chota Khushi is giving you your tea .

Arnav was lost he was just staring at her" hmmm"

Khushi: tea 

Arnav: just took it from her 

Anjail : chal Khushi  hum dono  chalta ha 

Arnav: kahan la kar jarahi ha Khushi ko

Anjali: tum se duur   had a laughter .

Khushi smiled and walk with Anjali

Arnav: was look her going "turn " he was waiting for her to turn to look at him but she walk straight to Nani's room, he closed his eyes as she saw her entering ... khushi peep out of door and saw him standing with close eyes ..

Anjali: kya huwa , pinch her 

Khushi: woh hum 

Anjali: smiled hum dekhe raha ha  aap dono ko.

Khushi: hum na kya kiya 

Anjali: kuch nahi bus chota ko pagal kar diya ha ..they both heard Arnav shouting 

Arnav: khushi khushi  yeh koi chai ha  he walk in the room

Nani: chota 

Mami ji: gai phati saari 

Arnav: it is ice tea , i want hot .

Khushi per yeh tou garam thi  she took the cup from him  and touch it it was really cold ..

Arnav: am i telling lie

Khushi: sorry hum phir se banata ha  , she quickly walk to the kitchen and started making other tea she look at the counter there was a cube of ice .she just picked it up..

Arnav; you cannot do anything properly 

Khushi: yes if you will put ice in your tea your self then how can i do anything properly .. she show him ice cube .

Arnav: walk to her he just didnot left any gap between him and her she just could not move back as there was counter ,she just closed her eyes as he come close , he just wanted to touch her but hold him self" bring it to OUR room" he said and walk to the door

Khushi: just exhale as she was holding her breath . he just turn back and look at her." rakhas " she made tea and was going to give her she saw Akash 

Akash: bhabi where are you going?

Khushi: she just didnot reply

Akash: give me i will give him .you go Anjali di is calling you

Khushi:  smiled and quickly gave him the cup and walk to Nani room.

Arnav was waiting for her at pool side he was sitting with his closed eyes. he heard a sound ..." bring it here"

Akash: just walk to the pool .. " he kept it on the table he was about to go arnav grab his hand 

Arnav: felt the touch was not familiar , he open eyes  

Akash : bhabi nahi ha mein hoon

Arnav just left it .and didnot have answer to his smile " why you didnot knocked ?"

Akash: i knew you are alone that why. he smiled and left the room .

Arnav: i will see you Khushi . he just took the tea.

Arnav just walk down everyone was sitting in living room as they saw him Anjali and Akash started whispering and Khushi started blushing she was avoiding  eye contact with him.

Nani: bus kara aap don aap na bohot tang karliya ha Khushi ko.

OP: dinner is ready 

Anjali: chal chota bhi aaga ha khana khata ha .

Khushi got up she was try to walk next to Anjali to ignore him .

Arnav : look at her stand in the way, the main door open and shyam enter ...

Anjali: aap 

Shyam : aap hum ko bolai aur hum na aaiya ..he look at Khushi and stand still at the spot. she just quickly walk to Arnav side and slide her hand's in his 

Arnav just tangle his fingers with her's 

Anjali:  aap ka leya surprise ha , hum aap ko Mrs Khushi Arnav as milata ha  

Shyam: look at them standing together .

Arnav: DI yeh Khushi se pehla mil choka ha 

Anjali: kab 

Nani: beta pehla khana khala 

Arnav i am not hungry 

Anjali: chota aap na afternoon mein bhi nahi 

Arnav: di i will eat when i will be hungry .

Khushi: please mera saath to chala she just didnot left his hand 

Arnav:look at her 

Khushi Please Arnav 

Arnav just walk towards the dinning table

Nani: smiled as she saw them coming. 


Anajli: aap ka case ka kya bana .

Shyam: just didnot reply

Anjali: ab aap ko jana tou nahi ha 

Shyam: nahi

Arnav just smiled . " what is the punishment for a husband if he is betraying his wife ?"

Shyam: choked

Anajli: chota why you are asking?

Anrav: i want to know if i ever try betray Khushi

Nani: chota kya bolta rahata ha aap

Anjali kya huwa aap ko

Shyam; push his plate a side and walk out of the dinning room

Arnav: just started taking out dinner. 

After dinner everyone walk to their respective rooms. 

Khushi walk to the pool side and started looking at the sky .

Arnav walk in late  as he was talking to Anjali and trying to explain her he was mistaken about Khushi and Shyam meeting .he look around she was not in room he look out she was standing with her arms wrap around her as if she was feeling cold . 

Arnav: Khushi it is cold out side come in

Khushi : i am fine.

Arnav : just walk out and pull her from her arm" why you dont listen to me ? " he just turn her around .

Khushi: was crying " why you dont miss a chance to hurt me , cannot i have bit space "

Arnav: no you cannot he just pull her to him.

Khushi ' sub ka ghusa mujhe per na nikal kara " just free her arm from his hand and walk in . 

Arnav: just closed his eyes and try to control his anger 

Khushi : just walk to the sofa and fix the cushion as pillow .

Arnav walk in room " what are you doing?"

Khushi: can't you see i am sleeping 

Arnav: just walk and pick her you in his arms " i think bed is for sleeping " drop her on the bed. 

Khushi: just shocked at his reaction. 

Arnav: lay next to her  "dont dare try to get up " he closed the light ,

Khushi: aap na light kyun band kardi

Arnav: because i cannot sleep in light.

Khushi: hum ko daar lagta ha 

Arnav placed his hand on her " now you will not be scared " he closed his eyes ,as he wanted to think what to do next he was not expecting Shyam will come today . he was in shocked .Khushi was twisting and turning again and again. 

Arnav: khushi cannot you lay down straight.

Khushi: " aap ka saath to nahi"try to move his arm

Arnav: shut up pull her more close to him with a jerk she just landed on his chest .

Khushi : chora 

Arnav: if you say one word , or twist or turn i will paused 

Khushi just quickly closed her eyes .with in few mins she was asleep.

Arnav "pagal dont know what she want " he just closed his eyes. 

to be cont ...sorry just a so so part , thx for your loving comments 

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Posted: 09 November 2011 at 5:54am | IP Logged
hai  naddiya ,
    i just read the two parts .
the way Arnav instructing Khushi to eat breakfast was just like my papa instructing my younger sis(6yrs) during her meals
then to the second part ;I really don't understand the icetea thing.but asr holding aksahs hand was too funnyLOL
the entire update was too nice.
waiting for nxt updateSmile

Edited by FLORAGRACE - 09 November 2011 at 6:25am
aakriti120 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 09 November 2011 at 6:03am | IP Logged
aww such a sweet update...

loved the ending...too good...

thanks for the pm...:)
tinsel IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 09 November 2011 at 6:11am | IP Logged
Fab update! It makes it all the more interesting to read and looking forward to the next part.Thanks for the PM.Hug
maghalakshmi Senior Member

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Posted: 09 November 2011 at 6:32am | IP Logged
lovable one...enjoyed a lot...
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Posted: 09 November 2011 at 6:42am | IP Logged
really nice part. loved how arnav taunted shyam.
arhi-fan Goldie

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Posted: 09 November 2011 at 6:57am | IP Logged
Hey! It was a nice update. Arnav holding aakash 's hand was too funny. Just loved the ending.thanx for pm.
.Saraa. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 09 November 2011 at 6:59am | IP Logged
wow..amazing part.loved it

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