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SS "Sorrow"(ARHI) epilogue 52(21/11)updated (Page 15)

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Posted: 07 November 2011 at 9:28am | IP Logged

wow this is really nice and can't wait to read more :-)

i loved it :-)
pls update as soon as u can :-)

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Posted: 07 November 2011 at 9:52am | IP Logged

Knocked at the door woke Arnav up

Anjali: chota

Arnav: look at  Khushi she was in his arms sleeping on his chest .

Anjali: knocked again bit loud

Khushi : open eyes she look around and felt strong arms aronud her .. look up saw Arnav staring at her " aap"

Arnav: placed his finger on her lips "shhh "

Khushi: try to move his arm

Arnav: let her go" di utgaya "

Anjali: open door

Arnav: kya ha Di

Anjali: you open door

Arnav: just got up

Khushi: hold his and " aap kya kar raha ha "

Arnav: kya

Khushi: hum yahan .. she picked her duppta

Arnav: so

Khushi: gave him a help less look .

Arnav: shakes his head and open the door .stand in the middle of the door

Anjali: cup his face you are fine chota , Akash just saw your car

Arnav: ya i am fine

LA: ASR why you did not call me ?

Anjali : just peep in and saw Khushi getting out of bed ."Khushi ji"

LA:push Arnav a side " what are you doing here?"she just walk to her

Khushi: hum

LA: she turn to Arnav" what she is doing her ASR " she look at them

Arnav: nothing

LA: hold his arm" you think i am fool"

Arnav: LA 

LA: you thought we are not at home and you spend some quality time with her 

Arnav: Shut up

LA: you shut up ASR , you have insulted me alot , aik employ ka saath  ,i feel sick .

Arnav: you are taking it all wrong 

LA: HA HA HA  you told OP not to tell us because we might bother you both.

Khushi: look at them Anjali was too shocked to see all this 

LA: and you chamkile what  you think of your self  ha? if i wear clothes like you and do what all you taught me you will take my place.

Khushi: LA ji hum ko

Arnav: with eyes ask her to be quiet

Mami ji heard noise she came up .."kya huwa "

LA: mami ji you were right , chota log chota hota ha .

Mami ji: yes sub kya ha 

Arnav: LA shut up you are saying what all is coming in your mouth and not listening a single word . 

LA: what i have just saw does not need any explanation . does that ?

Arnav: ok think what you like to ? 

LA: ASR you are sick , disgusting 

Mami ji: hum ko tou bata tha yeh apna husan ka jadu ha

LA: pull khushi arm " get out of here at once " she was just about to  push her out of the door 

Arnav: placed his hand on hers " You can if you like she will not go "

LA: oh I see

Arnav: removed her hand off Khushi

LA:so you prefer her on me 

Arnav: take it as you want to .

LA: dekha aap na Anjali di how is your brother , last night in front of everyone he said he will marry me,with in half hour he changed his mind. and now he has spend a night with .. ASR you are sick

Khushi: La ji bus kara bus please , you want me to leave the house right  i will leave it , if you think he loves me , he does not he hate me he hate me so much that he had created this scene so that he can show how much he hate me . she just hold her head  and sat on the floor 

Arnav look at her  

LA: chamkali how much he paid to you for a night  , as you do every thing on payment .

Arnav: LA shut up slap her 

LA: why it hurt ASR? she placed hand on her face 

Arnav: get lost  

LA: go to hell you both , now i get why you stop me so you can have relation with ASR, if i had gone back to London you both  must not be getting so much time for merry making , you both are sick ..now you see ASR what i do with you . she just walk out .  

Anjali: chota aur khushi ji hum ko yeh aap dono se umeed nahi thi.. she just walk out 

Mami: gave a weird look and walk out .

Arnav walk to  the door and closed it . he  walk to her . he  offer her his hand to get up 

Khushi: look at him " you hate me so much "

Arnav: smiled  " hate"

Khushi: ab tou hum ko apna aap se nafrat horahi ha 

Arnav: kneel down .try to cup her face.

Khushi: dont touch me 

Arnav; stop  " if you are worried any thing happen between us last night i will not reply on that"

Khushi:just got up and started walking out of the door .

Arnav: hold her hand 

Khushi: aaj aap na hum ko 

Arnav:you just shut up and listen to me   you will not leave this home understand . 

Khushi: i cannot stay her like a ...  she paused as she La words ego in her ears ...how much he paid you? tears drop from her eyes "i never thought people will think i am a ...

Arnav: pull her along with him to down stairs where everyone was standing and stopping LA  Anjail was begging her  .she was saying what face they will show to the society . everyone look at Arnav coming with Khushi 

Mami : aagi pathi sari

Arnav: you want to hear who she is to me  

LA: ya i want to know 

Arnav:  Khushi do you to want to know ?

Khushi look at him 

Arnav pull her with him to the mandir picked up hand full of sindoor and fill her maang , khushi all fore head and face covered with red substance everyone in shocked  look at them

:"i hope everyone got answer to their question," 

Khushi: look at him

Arnav: pull her close to him from her arm " as a husband  i order you to stay here .  & hate me as much you want too as i hate you too"

walk back to his room and everyone heard a bang of  the door.

if you want pm leave a comment here 

after watching today's epi my mind got out and i type this hope you guys will like it your comments and like will tell me that 



Edited by naddiya26 - 07 November 2011 at 10:59am

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Posted: 07 November 2011 at 9:58am | IP Logged
Superb
loved it
la 's reactn was justified
pls upd more

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Posted: 07 November 2011 at 10:06am | IP Logged
This Is SOOO Interesting :) Embarrassed

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Posted: 07 November 2011 at 10:11am | IP Logged
Come on upate soon. Thanks for the PM.

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superb pls continue soon

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Intresting :D waiting for the next part

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