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Hatz off to dadi and her plans!!!!

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wow kya planning hai

congo for the new thread

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                            Part 20


Next Morning

 

Daddi was waiting Maan to come out of his room so to start.In sitting area she could observe him coming out of room

Ya Maan was out …he had to stay here so not in formals.

 

Daddi: Preeto ( maid) dekho Mannat uthin k nahi …

 

Preeto: Daddi Maa Mannat baby to so rahhi hai..I went to her room…per wo uthi nahi ( made pitty fac)

 

Maan came downstairs..n he overheard

 

Dadd Maa: per hum aab kya karre…I hav lil pain in my back..acha hota Nandini ya Geet ek janna hota yahan ( she was jst saying to put in Maan's ears.

 

Maan: Daddi Maan don't worry main usko utha detha hu …

 

Daddi Maa: sure betay ..aap utha pye gay Mannat ko …its really tough job

 

Maan: don't worry Dadd Maa I manage (he said ok)

 

Dadd Maa's : Per Maan she is  lil child…pyar se uthaea…jabrdasti mat kejiye..

 

Maan: Ji

 

n Maan moved toward Mannat's room..where she was sleeping on stomach.

 

Maan looked at her..an  a his inner happiness was visible at his face.

 

He sat on her bed..n put his hand on her back head

 

Maan: Mannat get up ( he wishpered near her ear)

 

But no response..he repeated twice..thrice…but Mannat…jst rubbed her legs on bed sheet.

 

So Maan put his hands around her arms n turned her ..She started to cry aloud..

 

Maan  was too puzzed how to handle.Coz he had experience to handle Arya ..but he was too small ..n when Geet fed him he stopped crying

 

Now what about her.Maan looked at her….irrtation came on his face..but Daddi's words made him calm.

 

 

Maan: Mannat its morning get up… b a good girl.

 

But Mannat rubbed her eyes n she again start to doze in same positin..so Maan had to adopt ..other way

 

Maan: If u get up now….I ll take u out for ice cream..N  new toys also..other wise..sotti rahho fir main nahi le kar jayuga…( he adopted trick )

 

This worked.She got up..She folded her legs but both albows on keens n interlocked both hands under chin…after thinking for some time

 

Mannt: Aap Mannat ko ice cream k liye bahar le kar jayegay…n for toys also.( she questioned) 

Maan: ya

 

Mannat: But I hav toys ….so many look..kaise toys hum legay..humko nahi patta ..Manna k pass to har typ k toys hai

 

Maan: ok I ll take to u toy shop..jis tarah k jitney tumhara dil karre u can take.

 

Maanat: really ..n  ice cream kon se place se lengay…hmko chocolate ice cream.. tutti fruity ice cream donno khygay…

 

Maan: okey koi aur hai to woh bhi count karlo ( he taunted)

 

N he took her up …from bed n called preeto…to take her for shower.



lo this part is out...check it ...comment n hit lik plzzz



Edited by Jass.KN - 05 November 2011 at 7:49pm

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Posted: 05 November 2011 at 8:31pm | IP Logged
part 20
nice part...
Mannat is so sweet...
cont soon...

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Posted: 05 November 2011 at 9:22pm | IP Logged
maanat is sooo much like geettt
awesomeee

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Posted: 05 November 2011 at 9:32pm | IP Logged
Nice part
Loved it

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Posted: 05 November 2011 at 9:55pm | IP Logged
Both the parts were simply awesome, love the way dadi planned to plot maan and his daughter. gret job dadi.

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Posted: 05 November 2011 at 10:10pm | IP Logged
Thanks for the PM ...
lovely update .
so Dadi's plan worked out ...
waiting for the next update ...
continue soon

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