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Father and daughter spend some quiet time together in the living room
Shining through the curtain is the sun
And outside is the glorious afternoon

Father reads to his daughter the poetry she loves
Father and daughter enjoy each other's company
Father takes his daughter by the hand
As they take a walk outside

Father cares for his daughter
And always wishes the very best to happen for her 



Edited by Jass.KN - 30 January 2012 at 12:05am

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                     Thread One
                Thread Two
                Thread Three
                       Thread Five


              Part 19 ~ Scroll down

                    Part 20 ~ Page 5
                    Part 21 ~ Page 10
                    Part 22 ~ Page 14

                    Part 23 ~ Page 18

              Part 24 ~ Page 24

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So after weeks I m her again to bore u..coz I was not getting ideas how Daddi gonna plan..But as my habit jst tow three lines made my flow n my think tank has ideas..                 

                 Part 19

 

So Daddi gonna take action on her plan.After Maan went office they all gathered in Daddi's room.

 

Nandini: Daddi Maa u called us all here…?

 

Daddi Maa: ya beta..b ready to  pack ur begs (she ordered)

 

Dev: Daddi Maa Nandini beg pack karle ..kuch samjh nahi aaya .( he was confused )

 

Daddi Maa: Beta let some things for me…our first action is to leave Maan Mannat alone...so Geet's turn first.

 

Geet: But why ..this ?

 

Daddi Maa: Beta hum sabke beech Maan shyad hesitate karte hai Mannat k kareeb aane se…or I can say..we all always remain around Mannat for her every need.

 

Nandini : Daddi Maa isse humko koi problem nahi hai…She is our kid.

 

Daddi Maa: Ya …but isse Mannat humse to ghul mil gayi hai..but she hesitate in presence of Maan..aur un donno k beech duriyon ki yahi wajah hai.

 

Dev: So Daddi by packing bags how can we help (placing his glasses)

 

Daddi Maa :We can help…for this we hav to leave both alone…unko akela kahi bhej nahi sakht n we hav no chance….so we hav to leave from here…

 

 

Geet: Ha Daddi Maa hum kaise jayegay Maan ko shakk ho gaya to..( dancing her hand in air ...Geet questioned )

 

Daddi Maa: Beta hum bhi kamm nahi…kaise karna hai I no ( she lifted her brows n smiled)

 

Dev: But Daddi…bro ll never let me go ….u know our project is gonna start.

 

Daddi Maa: Dev …calm down…pehle suniye to sahi…First Geet gonna go….

 

Geet: But where DaddI Maa.

 

Daddi Maa: Hoshiarpur...( she repeated)

 

Geet: Hoshiarpur but why .Arya ko le kar main akele kaise jau gi…

 

Daddi Maa: U know Geet how many times urMother Father has asked u..to visit them..woh he aate hai har baar..beta u should also visit them….aur agar sabi ek sath gaye..u know how clever Maan …kahegay  Mannat kyo nahi gayi sath

 

Nandini : But Daddi Maa Geet Didi akeli kaise jayegi…( making pitty face Nano thought )

 

Daddi Maa : Nandini  I hav told every thing to Geet's Mom..even she asked me ..if we need their help. So Geet ur Papa is coming tomorrow…u gonna go with him.

 

So  same happened .Geet went with Mohinder…her father..But sudden separation from Wife n son hurted Maan so much….Even Geet was upset..She was not able do any thing..this was for betterment of whole Khuraana's …

 

Daddi was so clever that she asked Dev to shift Rohtak for few days where KC new venture…gonna start.n reason they gav to Maan was daily updown …made Dev much tired so  he gonna stay at their Rohtak House for some days.

All this happened in two days..even Nandini went to Dev..n excuse made to Maan was ….Dev had high fever so Daddi asked Nandini to go there.Maan was much irritated 

scroll down plzzz>>>>>>>>




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Same part


At last Maan exploded 

Maan: Daddi Maa every one left such in two three days…samjh nahi aata what's happening..u r not in condition to handle every thing…challo manna Geet pehle gayi….Mannat ko dekhne k liye Nandini thi..but now Nandini she left atleast isko sath le jati..how u gonna handle this..(he shouted as expected by Daddi)

 

Daddi Maa: Maan betay don't b upset..I m here...Nandini Dev Ka khyal rakhti k Mannat ka…beta ..even it can effect Mannat's studies…I can handle ..( she was also ready to handle )

 

Maan: But Daddi Maan..aap to khud theek nahi rehti..

 

Daddi Maa: Beta aap ho na….why not u take ur office here…for some days..humme accha lagega ( she played her move)

 

Maan: But Daddi Maa

 

Daddi Maa: Beta I think u don't lov me…Nandini k mazboori hai.aur Geet itne dinno baad gayi hai…unke Maa Papa ko bhi khushi hogi k unki Beti aur Nati kuch din unke pass rahhe …unko abhi to nahi keh sakti aane ko..aap itna bhi nahi kar sakte hamare liye( final action emotional atyachaar)

 

Maan: Daddi Maa don't say this again I don't lov u…Ya I hav work per mere apno se jayada nahi waise bhi new venture Dev handle kar raha hai…aur ek dusri party ne request karke next week takk meeting postpone kar di hai…their boss had a attack…so I hav to wait .

 

 

Daddy : Thanx beta.

 

Now Daddi's plan was on track..She gonna stay here..coz even as a spectator…she wanna keep eye on Maan Mannat drama.Daddi always did this emotional blackmailing to Maan but always for his betterment..She was such a elegant n sweet lady 

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