OS : Confession scene - Page 3

You wrote so beautiful. You should submit to creatives, they obviously need help, they are taking such moments and subsituting it in the coming days with Shyam that cheater, he should be punished to the full extent of the law, he is a lawyer, he knows better. Thank you, it is really well written.

hailah!! that was so cute! this just might happen you know!!!

Goodness Gracious Me...

Hi , lovely os luv... Loved yr Khushi, bold and sure of the power she has over him... Plz Pm me if you update which i hope you'll do very soon.

It was a superb update.. Didnt really expect this way of confessing..!
It was damn good..!
Please continue writing it and PM me when u do so!

goood..whenever he will do he will confess in asr style like this,,liked it.

awesome job done!!!!!

Hey very good it was esp the taunting look and tone of Khushi and our ARnav ripped off of his mask!!!!!

Guys...thanks soo much for this encouragement ...I feel humbled, since its my first OS submission in any forum.

Thank you so much for your kind words, I ll surely continue and keep everyone posted

 

Originally posted by: sushi-la

this is so adorable!!! this is EXACTLY how I imagine the scene to be (whenever it rolls around...)😍

great job! love your writing!