Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain


Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain
Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain

VIRIKA FF# Human Ties updt2 pg3 (Page 2)

shiksha_03 Goldie

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hey great to see you starting a ff here pls update soon

Prernarbofan IF-Dazzler

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-                        first part ( intro )                                                                                                               Di ! toh aap ab mujhe chood kar jaa rahe hoo !

Jeevika is sitting on her bed packing her bag

Manvi ! mein tujhe chood kar nahin jaa rahi dekh ab hum kitni deer tak beeji ke saath rahenge hum ab apni nai suruat karni hai ! mein toh bas thode dino ke liye jaa rahi hoon phir jab wahan sab kuch sambhal jayega toh tujhe bhi bulaon gi ! theek hai

Maanvi has watery eyes

Di ! mein rishikesh mein aapse ek din taak door nahin reh sakte aur aap Chandigarh ki baat kar rahi ho ! mein bhi aap ke saath aongi !

Maanvi picks up a bag and starts packing too

Maanvi ! baat samajh ! mein bhi nahin chahti ki too mujh se door jayee par kya karoon mereko naukri Chandigarh mein mili hai ! samajhne ki koshish kar

Nahin di mein aapke saath jaon gi !!!!!!!!!!!!!

Maanvi starts to pull jeevika arms all in tears

MAANVI ! yeh bachpanna chood de mein khush hoon aur mein bol rahi hoon na ki mein tujhe bulaongi !

Di ! aap mujh par chilayee theek hai aap jao  kisis ko meri chinta hi nahin hai yahan

Maanvi turns from there jeevika doesn't call her bbut after some time she feels that maanvi is very sad !

Maanvi ! maanvi !!!

She goes everywhere in rishikesh at last she finds her on the ghat

Maanvi ! dekh too mujhese gussa hai na

Maanvi shrugs

Ab kya farak padta hai di ! aap toh jaa rahe hoo

Maanvi ! theek hai tere ko bhi mere saath anna hai ! toh pohir chal

Maanvi's eyes glow

Saachi !


They both share a hug a tight one . They run  to the lakshman jhoola and flip a coin

I wish ki meri di mujhse kabhi alag na hoon !


Virat ! viren ko mere cabin mein bhejo

Okay dadaji ! waise kyun !

Tum zyada sawaal mat karo bas kaam karo!

OKIES ! itna gussa theek nahin hoota dadaji !

Tum chup raho

Virat runs from there saving his life and goes to virens room and knocks on the door

bhai kya kar rahe hoo !

Bhai ! soo gye kya !abhi toh 9 hi baaje hain

Viren opens the door

Haan shukla ji koi problem hi nahin hain ! haan aap unhe parson bhej dena ok !

Hi keeps his phone on the table!

Kya hai tujhe faaktu mein tang karta hai !

Virat smitks

Theek hai mein dadji ko bolta hoon bhai ne bollaa ki aap faltu hain !

Viren glares

Nainh tu aisa nahin bole ga !

Mein dadji ke paas abhi jaa raha hoon !

Tattaaa !

Dadaji ! apne bulaya !

haan who shukla ji ke  papers ka kya hua

who ! unka abhi phone aya tha keh rahe thee ki unki bhateeji jeevika parson ayigi toh papers uske paas hain toh who dede gi

theek hai par parson aa jane chahiye!

Theek hai dadaji !

He turns to move!

Acha ek minute apne bhai ko bolna mujhse mile mujhe use baat karni hai

Viren hopes its not about virat and what happened to him in London

Dada ji agar aap bura na manne toh kya mein puch sakta hoon ki bat kya ahi

Dada ji looks up from his desk 

woh hi ki uske future...

dadji please aap abhi baat mat kariye ga woh abhi sambhla nahin hai

viren turns from there he had never ordered dada ji but he loved his brothere and didnt want to spoil his mood 


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IrUmIBrAhIm Goldie

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Posted: 11 November 2011 at 10:28pm | IP Logged
Amazing cont soon :)
..tanya.. IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 11 November 2011 at 10:37pm | IP Logged
wow...awesome start...loved it
continue soon...
SaVni Goldie

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Posted: 12 November 2011 at 2:07am | IP Logged
Niiice continue soon :)
shiksha_03 Goldie

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Posted: 13 November 2011 at 2:31am | IP Logged
nice start pls continue soon
Prernarbofan IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 26 November 2011 at 2:08am | IP Logged

       Although its a virika FF but they r incomplete without their sibs so added them ! just for the title too !


Update 2 

                                                                                                                                     He just walked down the stairs as if he had lost somebody. It was alright for him to hear things from his family but now the person he respected the most . He too is about to do the same . He just wished that the problem was left and allowed to heal on its own.

"Hey virat "

"Hey bro . ….what happened why are you so down ?"

"No …. Its nothing   . "

" Now . I know you well bro . what did dadaji say?"

How could he tell virat  what the family wanted . They could not undersand that he needed time to settel .They justr thught it was a small thing . offcourse if anyone wold hear the story he would think that its just a small thing  but he knew what a great setback was it for virat .

" Bhai ! now will you say something

" virat . I said its nothing and why will dadaji say anything to me . Its just work "

" well who told you to take up a case just after coming from London . you coould have rested a bit  but now its your mistake "

" well virat I couldn't have sat idle like …."

He stopped . what was he going to say . It would hurt virat a lot . He just kept quiet .

"Well. I mean that dadaji told me and I did that "

" When will you stop following dadaji bro . dadaji and swaminni bua they just have take up your life . Dadaji with work and bua is just after your marriage . I mean an ARRANGED 

marriage . ugh . Atleast you must do a love marriage ! "

" you just shut up ok . Marriage . I have not thought about it "

" say this to bua one day and then I will know "   

                                                                                                                                                                   "virat please stop it . bua knows what is good for me OK . so you don't interfare "

    he feels bad his brother telling him not to interfere                                                                                                                                                                                   'me! I mean I am your brother not your neighbor  ."

Virat walks out from the room . He feels bad . ya he knew his brother didn't like someone talking about his marriage cause he didn't wanted to marry but the family they are always after him . what had viren done . just because he is 24 that doesn't mean he has to get marry there is no such rule .



"Di where will we stay in chandigarh"

" with chacha ji offcourse who else

. Now pack your clothes we have to catch the train tonight and mind it we have to share one bunck cause only one seat had been reserved !"

" di even if you had reserved two bunks I would have never slept alone"

They both look at each other with wet eyes. Jeevika wished this moment stayed forever . She wished to stay with ther sister forever but deep in her heart she knew this could not happen. There are laws and the law of the society will never let it happen and even if it happens they wil kill her and her family by their talks .

" di why are you going there"

" for some paper work chachaji left here so I have to return it to their lawyer. You know the case he is fighting for his land"

" ya I hope it is solved "

" well he says that the lawyer who is working on it has come from London and has never failed in few o his trials in London "

"wow ! well whats his name "

" mmm ……. Chachaji told me …...its …… viren … viren vadhera"

" Vadhera family ! wow it is the most respected family there right"

" we have nothing to do with that we just have to  go and give the papers"

" but couldn't chachu come "

" ya and leave chachi and dabbu there right !"

" that's also a problem . chichi ! if she is alone I don't know what will happen ."

" MAANVI ! she is not well and dabbu has his exams . "

" ok fine don't eat me up !"

At the station

"maanvi bye take care of yourself and don't create problems and stay at home when jeevika goes to give the papers"

" ok beeji ! like I always create problems"


 they all share a hearty laugh. The two girls touch beeji's and hug her. For the first time they were travelling on their own and it seemed fun.

" go now otherwise you will miss your train"

They share their last goodbyes and get into their compartment

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