VIRIKA FF# Human Ties updt2 pg3

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                        Human Ties                                                                                                              well I planned to start this FF I will post the first part soon after I make the update of my other FF's 

here are the main characters-

Viren aka karan tacker

he is a mix of all feelings . he can be shy he can be bold he can just be anything . A lawyer he is an heartthrob

Virat aka kushal tandon

He is virens younger brother . He is a fun guy . He takes life lightly but cares a lot for his brother

Jeevika aka Krystel Dsouza

She is the quietest but the wisest girl around. Beautiful she can be the perfect girl. She loves her younger sibling a lot

Maanvi aka Nia Sharma

She is fun  and always tries to make her sis happy but things turn out wrong . She only loved her sister jeevika the most






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-                        first part ( intro )                                                                                                               Di ! toh aap ab mujhe chood kar jaa rahe hoo !

Jeevika is sitting on her bed packing her bag

Manvi ! mein tujhe chood kar nahin jaa rahi dekh ab hum kitni deer tak beeji ke saath rahenge hum ab apni nai suruat karni hai ! mein toh bas thode dino ke liye jaa rahi hoon phir jab wahan sab kuch sambhal jayega toh tujhe bhi bulaon gi ! theek hai

Maanvi has watery eyes

Di ! mein rishikesh mein aapse ek din taak door nahin reh sakte aur aap Chandigarh ki baat kar rahi ho ! mein bhi aap ke saath aongi !

Maanvi picks up a bag and starts packing too

Maanvi ! baat samajh ! mein bhi nahin chahti ki too mujh se door jayee par kya karoon mereko naukri Chandigarh mein mili hai ! samajhne ki koshish kar

Nahin di mein aapke saath jaon gi !!!!!!!!!!!!!

Maanvi starts to pull jeevika arms all in tears

MAANVI ! yeh bachpanna chood de mein khush hoon aur mein bol rahi hoon na ki mein tujhe bulaongi !

Di ! aap mujh par chilayee theek hai aap jao  kisis ko meri chinta hi nahin hai yahan

Maanvi turns from there jeevika doesn't call her bbut after some time she feels that maanvi is very sad !

Maanvi ! maanvi !!!

She goes everywhere in rishikesh at last she finds her on the ghat

Maanvi ! dekh too mujhese gussa hai na

Maanvi shrugs

Ab kya farak padta hai di ! aap toh jaa rahe hoo

Maanvi ! theek hai tere ko bhi mere saath anna hai ! toh pohir chal

Maanvi's eyes glow

Saachi !

Muchi

They both share a hug a tight one . They run  to the lakshman jhoola and flip a coin

I wish ki meri di mujhse kabhi alag na hoon !

 

Virat ! viren ko mere cabin mein bhejo

Okay dadaji ! waise kyun !

Tum zyada sawaal mat karo bas kaam karo!

OKIES ! itna gussa theek nahin hoota dadaji !

Tum chup raho

Virat runs from there saving his life and goes to virens room and knocks on the door

bhai kya kar rahe hoo !

Bhai ! soo gye kya !abhi toh 9 hi baaje hain

Viren opens the door

Haan shukla ji koi problem hi nahin hain ! haan aap unhe parson bhej dena ok !

Hi keeps his phone on the table!

Kya hai tujhe faaktu mein tang karta hai !

Virat smitks

Theek hai mein dadji ko bolta hoon bhai ne bollaa ki aap faltu hain !

Viren glares

Nainh tu aisa nahin bole ga !

Mein dadji ke paas abhi jaa raha hoon !

Tattaaa !

Dadaji ! apne bulaya !


haan who shukla ji ke  papers ka kya hua

who ! unka abhi phone aya tha keh rahe thee ki unki bhateeji jeevika parson ayigi toh papers uske paas hain toh who dede gi

theek hai par parson aa jane chahiye!

Theek hai dadaji !

He turns to move!

Acha ek minute apne bhai ko bolna mujhse mile mujhe use baat karni hai

Viren hopes its not about virat and what happened to him in London

Dada ji agar aap bura na manne toh kya mein puch sakta hoon ki bat kya ahi

Dada ji looks up from his desk 

woh hi ki uske future...

dadji please aap abhi baat mat kariye ga woh abhi sambhla nahin hai

viren turns from there he had never ordered dada ji but he loved his brothere and didnt want to spoil his mood 

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