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..Winter_Soul..

@..Winter_Soul..

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey there :)

I really don't know what to say after reading this. It was so well written. Very well done :) Keep writing, hon!

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Asma

@anjaani07

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

Wow thanks for the awesome comments, i'm so glad u all seemed to enjoy it and sorry if some people cried or got teary - imagine me writing it!! ASR is such a complex guy, sab ko pagal kar ke chodega!

I'll try and write more when i can and will hopefully get all the PM's right, please add me as a buddy if you'd like a PM on any future scene, thanks🤗

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LX2FX2

@LX2FX2

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

you should write more often my friend...reading this...I can finally sleep🥱

Thanks

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Asma

@anjaani07

IF-Rockerz

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: LX2FX2
you should write more often my friend...reading this...I can finally sleep🥱
Thanks

Thank u, really appreciate it! Just wish i could have slept😉

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deepti

@deeps.

IF-Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

1000+like👏

wowww..so amazingly written.. so touching..loved it.. i hope this happens in today's epi. and your writing skills, i am speechless.. loved this part the most, esp the bold

He turned back and he was standing right where he'd almost kissed her... he could still feel her nervous breath on his face, feel the softness of her cheeks under his fingertips. He closed his eyes and wondered what would have happened if the phone hadn't rang and he hadn't flown into such a rage...? He leaned back against the glass doors and let out a breath; he saw her shattered face again as he made his announcement; why had he done it? He felt her eyes pierce him again with her questions but this time his anger didn't help him and he knew that nothing could help him now. He closed his eyes, leaned his head back and whispered the one word that gave him the most pain as well as the most relief, 'Khushi...'

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kiara

@Karan.G.king

IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 12 years ago

very well written and i am a big ASR fan

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zobsheh

@zobsheh

Goldie

Posted: 12 years ago

wonderful OS i so wish it happens this way😊

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Juicee Sushie

@Juicee_Sushie

Goldie

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

That was fantastic 👏👏👏, I loved it!!!

Very emotional and beautifully written...Please, Please turn it into a FF & update it...would love to read more of it & see how you develop the story!!!

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Ain

@OnepoundChic

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

ahhh!!! it was so painfull..tears filled my eyes while reading...m feeling khushi's pain and arnav's restlessness in my heart...superb,amazing,outstanding job...plzzz do cont... Edited by ainimonaya - 12 years ago

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639308

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

just loved ur scene it was as usual grt
have read ur work before also n just love ur ff 'tum se hi'😃
plz write more often😉

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