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ArHi FF - Uncontrollable Attraction Part 19 pg 72 (Page 30)

desisweetheart9 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 29 April 2012 at 9:06pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by shivu124

awww sweet storyy loll bt akash and pyal as always lovey dovey loll its funny we cant imagine thm diff thy have to be in lovey dovey characters thy look cute together =) 
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Posted: 29 April 2012 at 11:02pm | IP Logged
Thanks for all the likes and comments. They mean a lot to me. Hope you enjoy the next part. Leave likes and comments   Big smile

Part 6

"Jiji. I don't think I should I come "

"Why Khushi?"

"It would be weird and I don't know Arnav that well. Did Akash even ask him?"

"Not yet"

"I knew it. I will come only if he is coming too. I do not want to be caught in the middle of you and Akash"  said Khushi laughing .

"Bhai.. Please come. Please."

"Akash. What will I do there?  It's weird and I have better things to do" 

"What else is more important than coming on my date with me?" said Akash looking confused.

"You are kidding right? Do you know how strange what you just said sounds?"

"Yes. I do. But you know I am strange so it's ok " said Akash

"True my dear brother" said Arnav with a smile on his face

"You have to come Bhai. Khushi is coming too"

Khushi is coming too ? Arnav thought to himself.

"Why is Khushi coming?" asked Arnav confused

"Her parents will not let Payal come with me alone" explained Akash

"Oh" said Arnav

"Fine Akash. I will come, only for you"

"Thanks Bhai. You are awesome"

"So are you Akash" said Arnav.

"Come on Khushi. Get ready fast" said an excited Payal

"What should I wear jiji?"

Payal rushed to Khushi's room and saw the condition of the room. It looked like the closet had thrown up. There were dresses, jeans and shirts strewn all over the room.

"Khushi. What on earth?" asked Payal shocked at the condition of the room

Khushi smiled, "I did not know what to wear" , "What are you wearing?"

Payal took Khushi by the hand and took her to her own room and pointed at a lovely sky blue dress and a pair of sparkling silver heels

"Wow jiji. Good choice. Looks like you are ready to impress Akash" teased Khushi.

"Shut up and get ready" said Payal playfully

"What get ready. You still did not tell me what I should wear"

"Wear something that you are comfortable in" suggested Payal.

"Like jeans and a sweatshirt?" asked Khushi innocently

Knowing that Khushi would not wear something so simple to a date Payal played along and said "Sure. Why not?"

"Ok" said Khushi and she ran to get ready.

After about five minutes Khushi emerged from her room dressed in a faded blue sweatshirt and jeans and Payal's jaw hit the floor

"Khushi. What are you wearing?"

"A pair of jeans and a sweatshirt jiji" answered Khushi

"I was kidding Khushi" explained Payal

"I know but I still took your advice, so be happy and let's go.

Payal shook her head at the actions of her crazy sister.

A car horn sounded from outside and Payal literally ran to the door dragging Khushi with her. They both got out of their house and Khushi locked the door.

"Wow. Payal looks amazing" said Akash aloud

Arnav had still not seen Khushi. He turned around when he heard Akash speak.

The second Arnav saw Khushi he smiled.

"She is not like all the other girls. She has the guts to wear jeans and a sweatshirt  on a date"

Both Arnav and Akash got out of the cars to help the ladies into the car.

"You look amazing" said Akash to Payal

"Thank you" said Payal as she blushed

" You look very  nice" said Arnav to Khushi

Khushi looked at Arnav like he had lost his mind. She was about to ask him if he was okay.

"No girl has the guts to wear a sweatshirt and jeans on a date" explained Arnav

Khushi did not know why but she felt her skin getting warm as Arnav spoke. Seeing Khushi's condition Arnav gave her a reassuring smile. 

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dumas IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 29 April 2012 at 11:15pm | IP Logged
 loved the update  only khushi would wear jeans and t shirt on a date loved it so cute and arnav reaction to her was very sweet awesome update loved it thanks for the pm

Edited by dumas - 30 April 2012 at 12:05pm

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batgirl67 Goldie

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Posted: 29 April 2012 at 11:26pm | IP Logged
im the first one to like and i totally liked the update! the story is really cute ! update soon!

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frenzyy IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 29 April 2012 at 11:27pm | IP Logged
only khushi can wear smtn like dat on a dateWink gr8 updateLOL

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purplekid IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 29 April 2012 at 11:32pm | IP Logged
Yay! Someone other than me, albeit fictional, wears jeans and sweatshirts to dates! Add a pair of TOMS, and you have a petite, prettier me! Aside from appearances, loved the update, so please continue soon!

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Chocoangel IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 29 April 2012 at 11:33pm | IP Logged
loved d update.. !

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velangini IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 29 April 2012 at 11:47pm | IP Logged
nice update
hmm arnav is already smittenWink
continue soon

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