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Posted: 10 November 2011 at 11:48pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Lily2011

continue plz. pm me wen will u update next part of it.

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Posted: 10 November 2011 at 11:49pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Kritianya

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Posted: 10 November 2011 at 11:50pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by pummelon

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Originally posted by meenaluma

continue soon plzzz pls add me 2 ur pm list pls pm me when u update next part


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Posted: 10 November 2011 at 11:56pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sweet1210

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Posted: 11 November 2011 at 12:00am | IP Logged
Thanks to everyone for their support. I really appreciate it. Here is the first part. Do comment and criticize. Looking forward to hearing from you 

Part 1

(Early Morning, Gupta House)

Payal: Khushi. Hurry up. We will be late. What are you doing?

Khushi: Nothing jiji. I am coming. Give me a couple minutes

(Khushi grabbed her iPod from her pocket and paused the song she was dancing to)

Khushi ( to herself): I can't tell anyone about this. Nobody will approve

(Every morning, Khush I got up early and danced. Dance was her passion but Law was the career that she was expected to pursue)

(Khushi put on a pair of jeans and a hoodie and rushed out of her room)

Garima (Khushi's Mom) : Eat something before you go bitiya

Khushi: No time Mom. Have to go.

Shashi (Khushi's Dad): Not a good idea. You have to eat something

(Khushi ran into the kitchen and grabbed an apple)

Khushi:  Happy? She  smiled at her parents

Payal: Khushi. Come on please.

Khushi: Okay. Bye Mom. By Dad

Shashi and Garima: Bye bitiya

(Raizada House)

Anjali: Chotey. Please get up and get ready. You have to go to college

Arnav: Ya. Di. Give me like 5 minutes. Did you wake up Akash?

Anjali: I did. He should be ready by now

(Arnav gets up from his bed, walks to the door of his room and opens it)

Anjali: Why do you look so tired?

Arnav( yawning): was studying all night Di

(Before Anjali could say anything, Akash walked up to them)

Akash: Bhai, Di. I am ready to go when you guys are

Anjali : look at me. I am ready

(Anjali was wearing black dress pants and a pink sweater)

Arnav: I am ready too (looking down at his clothes) Almost.

(Arnav rushes to the bathroom and gets ready in 5 minutes and then rushes down for breakfast. His Mom and Dad are sitting at the table and eating. He grabs a couple things off the table and starts stuffing them in his mouth)

Neena (Arnav's mother) : Slow down beta. Eat properly

Sameer (Arnav's father): Sit down immediately and eat properly or do not eat at all)

(Arnav sits down, but continues stuffing his mouth,  He finishes eating and gets up quickly)

Arnav: Bye Mom. Bye Dad.

Sameer and Neena: Bye

(Arnav grabs the keys from Akash)

Arnav: I will drive. We will reach there quicker

Akash: Fine

(Arnav drives the car at a fast speed and they all reach college with plenty of time to spare)

(On the other side Khushi pulls into a parking spot right in front of the school. She gets out and stretches)

Khushi: Jiji. How was my driving?

Payal : (laughing)  Better than I thought it would be

Khushi ( laughing) : Thanks

Payal : What class do you have first today?

Khushi: English and I have it with you so I am happy

Payal : Great. Let's go

(Payal and Khushi rush to class and Khushi sees someone after she has entered the class)

Khushi ( softly) :  What is he doing here?

 



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Posted: 11 November 2011 at 12:14am | IP Logged
Nice start!! Happy to see everyone as college students!!

Thanks for the PM!! Update soon..

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Great start. pls continue and do add me in ur pm list.

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