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ArHi FF - Uncontrollable Attraction Part 19 pg 72 (Page 19)

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Posted: 05 March 2012 at 12:39pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sweetygirl28

Short and sweet update...payash as usual love at first sight ROFL 
 
loving it!! thanks for pm :)

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Posted: 05 March 2012 at 12:45pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by alice54

Great Update!!!!
 
continue soon...

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Posted: 05 March 2012 at 12:47pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by icegurl789

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Posted: 05 March 2012 at 12:51pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by meenaluma

awesome pls continue soon

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Posted: 05 March 2012 at 12:52pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Jalebibaby

Hey lovd it yaar.
Bt sme wat short update.
Payash likd each othr nd i thnk bcas of thm arhi come close.
Anyway cont soon .nd thanks 4 pm.

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Posted: 05 March 2012 at 12:55pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Honkytonk

So cute..am loving it so far.

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Posted: 05 March 2012 at 1:06pm | IP Logged
Thanks for all the likes and comments. It means a lot to me. Hope you like the next part. Sorry it is short 

Part 5

"Today is the day"' Akash said to himself. " I am going to ask her out"

It was the day after Akash and Payal had met. He had already decided to ask Payal out. He waited near his seat and saved the one next to him

Class was about to start and he suddenly realized that the sit next to him was now occupied.  He saw Payal come in and sit far away from him.

I won't give up. I will talk to her after class.

Akash literally sprinted from his seat when class ended and rushed to where Payal was gathering her books.  He stared at her again at a loss for words. She was dressed in a ruffled purple top and was wearing black skinny jeans and had let her hair down.

Payal smiled to herself after seeing Akash's reaction.

"Akash". Payal waved her hand in front of his face. He grabbed her hand and held it in his. Payal blushed red again and Akash smiled.

"Will you go out with me for a movie tonight" he asked trying to sound confident.

"Yes. I will" said Payal shyly

"Cool" said Akash

"I  will pick you up at 7pm tonight"

"That's perfect. Can my sister come too?"

What? Akash asked himself. Why does she want to bring Khushi on our date?

"My parents won't let me go out with you alone" said Payal

Oh. That's why thought Akash to himself

"Yea. Sure. You can bring Khushi and I will bring Arnav Bhai. We can have a double date"

"Sounds good to me" said Payal

"Great. See you tonight Payal" said Akash as he walked away

"See you" said Payal with a big smile on her face

Now I just have to convince Khushi for tonight, Payal said to herself


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