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ArHiLover-x

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Posted: 01 November 2011 at 4:28am | IP Logged
Heya guys! Well, I am a HUGE Bidaai fan but I wanna start with an ff with Ishaan-Suhana, Nivi-Viren and Navya-Anant first so see how it is. If it's good. I will move onto Bidaai. But this is my first FF so please don't yell but give some cool tips. And don't worry, it gets more romantic in like, the 3rd chapter and after.
HERE IS THE CHARACTER LIST:
BAJAPAI's:
Suhana: She is a lively sweet, smart girl and is younger than her brother. She is funny and a great friend. She is the same age as everyone and is almost ending college.
Anant: He is a lazy, clumsy guy but has a big heart. He is older than Suhana and cares for her alot. He is quirky and funny but a very strange guy.
 
MISHRA's:
Navya: She is the yongest and is a simple, girl-next-door. She is quiet and is a very charming girl and the baby of the family.
Nivedita: She is older than Navya and more responsible. She is stylish and tries to look her best everyday. She also loves Navya alot and is very supportive of her.
 
ISHAAN KASHYAP: He is a smart guy and is funny but when it comes to girls he is a bit shy and awkward. He has a sister, Lavanya, who is in her last year at University.
 
VIREN SOOD: A cool, laid-back guy with lots of attitude! He is cool, romatic, HOT and handsome and is an only child.
 
CHAPTER ONE WILL COME SOON!

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Posted: 01 November 2011 at 4:30am | IP Logged
A Bidaai fan but venturing elsewhere first...interesting...LOL
 
Well, I guess I'll read this. LOL And welcme to the forum. Smile

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Posted: 01 November 2011 at 4:32am | IP Logged
Heyya dear...
i love reading FFs..so i would suggest u to carry on writing and posting the parts here..
i will surely leave my comment hereWink

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Posted: 01 November 2011 at 4:48am | IP Logged
Thanks guys I will and
MadameX: Yeah i want the bidaai one to be perfect thats why. Do u get it kind off?
And sure i will MadRaginiFan

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Posted: 01 November 2011 at 4:50am | IP Logged

Not really...are you saying you're practicing the storyline you'll use for Bidaai in here or this will be different? Btw, I might just read your Bidaai one too...if you tell me beforehand what the plot will be. WinkLOL

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No, I am not praticing for Bidaai. I am doing this one first to practice doing good FFs but i don't think this will be good and also, I can have time for the Bidaai one. Please PM me some ideas, MadameX
Thanks, and enjoy

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Chapter 1

BAJPAI'S HOUSE:

Suhana: Anant Bhaiyya! Wake up you lazy idiot!

Anant: Suhana.. 5 minutes.. more..

Suhana: We are meeting Kareena Kapoor!

Anant: *gets up* Are we? Wait for me! *runs to bathrom*

Suhana: It always works.

SHARMA HOUSE

Nivedita: Where IS Navya? She takes forever!

Mr' Sharma: Dear, don't be so hard on her, Navya-

Navya: i'm here! Let's go to the party

Nivi: Come on. *they go out the house* You do know it's the party.

Navya: Which one? OMG am i dressed ok?

Nivi: You look fine. And it's the party for end of exams. They are giving our grades today

Navya: Oh yeah. OMG, what if i failed?

Nivi: You wont. Come on. I have had enough of school earlier. Party time!

Navya: Oh let's go then! *they both run*

AT THE PARTY

(Suhana and Anant arrive)

Mrs Braganza: Hello you two. Suhana you look divine! Here are your grades.

Suhana: *opens envelope* Ooh, A* in English, Math and Drama. A in Science and History and PE. Oooh, B in the others. Anant?

Anant: Math, Science, PE, RS. F. History and Art, D. I am dead.

Suhana: Mom will kill you!

Ms. Braganza: Anant is a lazy boy. Suhana, well done to you. Join the party!

(Suhana and Anant walk in)

Anant: Oh god, oh god.

Suhana: Chill-ax! You will be fine. Enjoy!

(NIVI AND NAVYA ENTER)

Navya: Where are you going?

Nivi: I will join you. Go in, Navya.

Navya: OK.

PARTY HOST: OK everyone! This is Rahul, your COOL host tonight and this is the lovely.. Komal!

Komal: Rahul, you tell everyone our first game!

Rahul: OK, I will choose a boy from the crowd and he will come up and start dancing and singing to a song and Komal will then

flash the Secret Spotlight on a girl and that girl will have to dance with the boy. Got it?

(Crowd cheers)

Navya: "Oh no, what if i am chosen and.. Nivi sees me?"

Rahul: OK! The boy i choose is... THAT ONE! Come here!

(a boy walks on stage with sunglasses and a cool style)

Rahul: What's your name?

Boy: Ishaan Kashyap.

Komal: Give it up for Ishaan Kashyap everyone! Music!

(Music starts)

Ishaan: *sings* Kudiyon ka nasha pyare
Nasha sabse nasheela hai
Jise dekhon yahan woh
Husan ki barish mein geela hai
Ishak ke namm pe karte
sabhi ab raas leela hai

Main karoon toh saala
Character dheela hai
Ho..
Main karoon toh saala
Character dheela hai

Komal: You! Come up! (the light in on Suhana)

Suhana: *runs up on stage* Ladkon ka nasha payare
Nasha sabse nasheela hai
Jise dekhon yahan woh
Husan ki barish mein geela hai
Ishak ke namm pe karte
sabhi ab raas leela hai

Main karoon toh saala
Character dheela hai
Ho..
Main karoon toh saala
Character dheela hai

(They both sing)

Hai simple sa yeh formula
Hai love ka funda khokla
Mujhe bus pyaas toh yeh dil
Cool cool cool cool rehta hai

Kisika haath thaam ke
Karein kyun waade naam ke
Ha love you forever koi
Fool fool fool fool kehta hai

Kise hai love se matlab
Yeh yovan santreela hai
Fark padta hai kya baahon mein
Munni hai ya sheela hai
Ishak ke namm pe karte
sabhi ab raas leela hai

Main karoon toh saala
Character dheela hai
Ho..
Main karoon toh saala
Character dheela hai

Yeh charcha facebook pe hai
Mazaa bus ek look mein hai
Haseen chere ka kaun deedar
baar baar baar karta hai

Jo dil ka photo frame ho
Wahan photo kyun same ho
Calendar ki tarah use
Roz roz roz change karta hai

Kamar patli ho jitni bhi
Mazaa utna nasheela hai
Chalega jo bhi hai aankhon rang
Kaala ya neela hai
Ishak ke namm pe karte
Sabhi ab raas leela hai

Main karoon toh saala
Character dheela hai
Ho..
Main karoon toh saala
Character dheela hai

Meanwhile:

(Nivi is outside, bored)

Nivi: I should leave now. I will go and tell Navya. *gets up, and bumps into someone* Oh! I am so sorry!

Person: I's OK

Nivi: No, I hurt you. Sorry. *picks up his phone andsunglasses, looks up*

Person: *looks at her and smiles* Viren. *holds out hand*

Nivi: Nivedita. Or Nivi. *shakes hand*

Viren: Hello, Nivi. Do you go to this school?

Nivi: Yes, do you?

Viren: I have just joined. Me and my friend, Ishaan. And my lame sister, Khusi.

Nivi: *smiles* That's cool. Well, see you.

Viren: See you soon. *smiles and walks away*

Nivi: "I'm in love" (goes inside to call Navya)

 

----------MEANWHILE:-------------

Navya: *staring at her grades* Oh god! Dad will KILL me!

Anant: (walks past and accidently spills Coke over her grades)

Navya: What did you do that for?

Anant: I'm sorry.. What's your name?

Navya: I am Navya. What about you?

Anant: I am Anant Bajpai. Sorry Navya.. Wait.. Aren't we in some classes together?

Navya: Oh yeah. You're the lazy one in Bio. , the annoying one in History and the clumsy one in Art!

Anant: Oh yeah! Well, we haven't spoken to eachother yet. So.. friends?

Navya: Yes, friends.

Nivi: Navya? Can we go home?

Navya: OK. See you Anant.

Anant: Bye, Navya. I will go home too now. Wait, its raining outside. Shall I drop you?

Nivi: Well, you can drop Navya. I will walk.

Navya: Really?

Nivi: Yeah.

-------LATER----------

Ishaan: Lavanya didi! I found the most perfect girl!

Lavanya: Really? What's her name?

Ishaan: Oh didi, we danced to Character Dheela, and she is so pretty. She is Suhana.

Lavanya: Nice name. That is cool.

Ishaan: But I don't know how to behave around girls.

Lavanya: I will give you tips. Don't worry.

 

TO BE CONTINUED...

HOPE U LIKED IT AND PLEASE GIVE TIPS

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