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Posted: 15 December 2011 at 11:22am | IP Logged
Heyyy samosa..

I didnt comment yetCryCry sryyyCryCryCry

Ok... here I go...

Arpi stood for herself nd baby!! yayyy!!

I agree.. Avi should support their baby.. how can he tell to abort the child..OuchOuch He has to support her and specially the baby...

If avi dsnt love her and wants to live with Simple..thn she should let him do itSmile

when u r updatin next?? story is becoming interesting as everWinkWinkWink

Love ya sweets.. update soonWink

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Posted: 18 December 2011 at 8:01am | IP Logged
Originally posted by suvarnaawt

awww avi aisa kyu kar rahe hoCry awsm updateThumbs Upplzzz gkd jaisi sad ending mat karnaUnhappy waiting for next updateSmile

Thanks for your comment Embarrassed

Avi loves his sweetheart like any obsessive lover but due to some circumstances he got married to Arpita Smile

Dnt worry hun this will be NOT ending as our beloved show Embarrassed

Take care

love ya 

Neha n Priya 

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Posted: 18 December 2011 at 10:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jes_jade

Neha dear !!!!!!!!!!!Hug

I am so sorry dat I didn't reply earlier...OuchOuch

Ur 1st update made me think abt a Silent type hero & Chulbuli heroine..

But frm 2nd part..omg...hw can AST be so cruel & heartless..& he is in love with someone else..Cry

Feeling so pity for Arpi..

Plzz...Cont soon..Smile

Saku-chan Hug

Missed Ya Cry

NO need to say sorry...My heart bleeds when you say those words CryCry

As far as Story concern " Wait Panne unnaku story tanale puriyo "

luv ya 

Syao-Kun n JB

PS i love you more than her Blushing 

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Posted: 18 December 2011 at 10:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by coolguy3

really sad Cry ... poor Arpi ... why did Avi marry her if he luvd Simple n also if he actually luvd Simple then hw cud he even consumate wid Arpi ... smth is amiss  ... there has 2 b a reason ... How can Avi b so cruel ...

hey hun 

thanks for commenting 

hun due to circumstances Avi n Arpi got married and as far as their consumate Avi was drank also Arpi still loves RV her ex-lover who his Avi best friend Ouch

stay tuned for Updates

love ya

Priya n Neha 




Edited by yoga23priya - 18 December 2011 at 11:03am

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Posted: 18 December 2011 at 11:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by MuktaJaiswal

SmileHey Neha Hug
Finally got tm 2 commentParty
I kn I m late fr commenting bt hd a valid reason yaar,Smile
Job , ghar ka kamm, n lotsss of pwr cuttsssUnhappy
Well enough of excuses by m,Smile


hey di Hug

long list for commenting late ha LOL

No probs di we understand Embarrassed


After reading intro m knw ur SS will be very emotional n a bit on darker side.Smile
Bt nvr thgt ths Story.Shocked
I myself was thinking a FF or SS like ths bt ths is beyond my imaginationSmile
U thought n hv written very well dr.ClapClap
 
M confusedConfused, 1st make m clear bth Simple n Arpi r preg naConfused


thanks di Embarrassed

both simple n Arpi are preg Embarrassed

 
@BIYA 'Part III

Appreciated Arpi fr standing fr her baby,Clap Clapits nt Avi Angry2 decide has he hd already relinquish them both.Ouch
Bt confused abt her marriage,Confused yes she suld stand 2 sv marriage also,Smile bt avi dsnt lv her Broken Heartmaybe nvr lved herBroken Heart n he lves simple thn shuld she continue the marriage.Confused

Bt if she leaves him she should definitely mk him feel abt wt he is loosing n hw wrng is he in leaving her n their baby.Approve


Arpi will fight for her child n husband for sure but due to some mistakes in past Avi couldn't accept her Ouch

Avi is only one who suffers most here Ouch

 
Nw fr the other 2 parts. Don't know wt I thgt is wt u wrote, reading both parts the first thg I felt ws, (as describe by Nida Fazli)
 
@BIYA 'Part I : (spec the 1st  n 4th para- highlighted)
 
kabhi kisi ko mukammal jahaan nahin milataa
kahin zamin to kahin aasamaan nahin milataa
 
jise bhi dekhiye vo apane aap men gum hai
zubaan mili hai magar hamazubaan nahin milataa
kabhii kisi ko mukammal...
 
bujhaa sakaa hai bhalaa kaun vaqt ke shole
ye aisi aag hai jisame dhuaan nahin milataa
kabhi kisi ko mukammal...
 
tere jahaan men aisaa nahin ki pyaar na ho
jahaan ummid ho isaki, vahaan nahin milataa
kabhi kisi ko mukammal...
 
 
@BIYA 'Part II :

maanaa teri nazar men teraa pyaar ham nahin
kaise kahen ke tere talabagaar ham nahin
 
sinchaa thaa jisako hamane tamannaa ke khoon se
chaman men us bahaar ke haqadaar ham nahin
maanaa teri nazar men teraa pyaar ham nahin
kaise kahen ke tere talabagaar ham nahin 


Neha is a poet when ever she has time... LOL
 
bored dr.Sleepy very long comment naWink
hehehe LOLbhout zyada ho gaya naLOL. truth is I lk ths type of emotional stories so''.Embarrassedfelt very sad Unhappy n emotionalUnhappy
N  gt tm nw, so hd 2 comment fr all the 3 updates.Embarrassed


No matter how long or short the comment dnt matter...you guys take your precious time for us and we love you also appreciate it very much Embarrassed 

 
HeheheLOL dnt woory next comment will nt b boring, Smile as ths 
(well it depends on ur next UD)Wink
 
Waiting eagerly fr next UD.Day Dreaming

N Don't forget 2 PM me.Angry

she will pm you di Embarrassed

love ya

Neha n Priya

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Posted: 18 December 2011 at 11:10am | IP Logged
Originally posted by prash_t

Heyyy samosa..

GJ 

I didnt comment yetCryCry sryyyCryCryCry

No probs hun Embarrassed

Ok... here I go...


Arpi stood for herself nd baby!! yayyy!!

I agree.. Avi should support their baby.. how can he tell to abort the child..OuchOuch He has to support her and specially the baby...

If avi dsnt love her and wants to live with Simple..thn she should let him do itSmile

i think you are correct from your POV but wait until story unfolds Wink

when u r updatin next?? story is becoming interesting as everWinkWinkWink

Love ya sweets.. update soonWink

Love ya too GJ

JB n CIC 

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Posted: 18 December 2011 at 2:34pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by yoga23priya

Originally posted by coolguy3

really sad Cry ... poor Arpi ... why did Avi marry her if he luvd Simple n also if he actually luvd Simple then hw cud he even consumate wid Arpi ... smth is amiss  ... there has 2 b a reason ... How can Avi b so cruel ...

hey hun 

thanks for commenting 

hun due to circumstances Avi n Arpi got married and as far as their consumate Avi was drank also Arpi still loves RV her ex-lover who his Avi best friend Ouch

stay tuned for Updates

love ya

Priya n Neha 




Dats a sad part Cry

@bold - bt till nw it does nt luk like it...its like she luvs Avi only ... well hope dey dont separate n r 2gether wid their child

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Posted: 19 December 2011 at 2:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by yoga23priya

Originally posted by jes_jade

Neha dear !!!!!!!!!!!Hug

I am so sorry dat I didn't reply earlier...OuchOuch

Ur 1st update made me think abt a Silent type hero & Chulbuli heroine..

But frm 2nd part..omg...hw can AST be so cruel & heartless..& he is in love with someone else..Cry

Feeling so pity for Arpi..

Plzz...Cont soon..Smile

Saku-chan Hug

Missed Ya Cry

NO need to say sorry...My heart bleeds when you say those words CryCry

As far as Story concern " Wait Panne unnaku story tanale puriyo "

luv ya 

Syao-Kun n JB

PS i love you more than her Blushing 



Ye lo ye love birds yahan bhi start ho gai LOLLOLLOL
"My hearts bleeds when you say those words"Day Dreaming hailaaa kitna love hai naa is couple me Wink
btw Love yaa for replying all comments CD Embarrassed

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