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joliefille

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Posted: 31 October 2011 at 2:10am | IP Logged

Hey friendsSmile
how are u all?
missed you all and out dear Avita so muchCry
so m back to bore you all with another storyLOLLOL
i thought to make it an OS but my editor "Priya" want it to be a SS 'Short Story'
so here is the intro , as i have not decided the title yet so these lines's title is not the title for SS,
if you have some idea, your most welcome for itEmbarrassed

Stay With Me



I used to imagine my future;
When I will find you,
You the one who was made to love me,
You the one who will take me;
To the world of my dreams, my desires,
You will make me feel
How special I am,
For you,
And the day came;
You came in my life as a gentle wind
You were calm, silent; opposite to my dreams
I use to wonder was it you
For whom I was waiting,
But
You make me realize how foolish
I was, yes it was you,'
Always you, you never expressed it
But your touch, said it all,
Now I realize what you are for me,
When you are going away from me,
I know I never said that
But
Yes you were my dream
You are my love, you are my desire
And now I can do nothing except to
Get on my knees n beg
Plzz "Stay with me"
 
She got married to someone whom she never met while she was imagining her dream boy to come on white stallion and take her with him to his world of dreams and happiness, away from her harsh world of reality; the guy she got married was much older to her, just opposite to her wish, calm, composed, hardly share his feelings with her.
She manage herself in his way, she give him everything what he wants from her,
Now she wants only one thing from him, that is a word of assurance to stay with her,
That's her only desire, that's her "Tamanna"

Kyun hum kisi ki yaadon me kho jate hai,
Ek pal ki doori me yun to jaate hain
Koi humen itna bata do
Hum hi aise hain ya pyar karne ke baad
Sabhi aise ho jaate hain.

 Waiting for your replies guys,Embarrassed
Finally got the sutable Title for this one its
"Back In Your Arms"


 Part-III...Page-5
Part-VI...Page-7
 


Edited by joliefille - 30 December 2011 at 9:39pm

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Res Tongue

I am not going to comment further in this story...b'coz i have already read it Tongue

this is and always will be my fav story Clap


Edited by yoga23priya - 31 October 2011 at 2:34am

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Kyun hum kisi ki yaadon me kho jate hai,
Ek pal ki doori me yun to jaate hain
Koi humen itna bata do
Hum hi aise hain ya pyar karne ke baad
                                      Sabhi aise ho jaate hain.


I just fell in love with these lines...Awsome Darling...am eager to read this FF now...DO start ASAPThumbs Up

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Posted: 31 October 2011 at 8:55am | IP Logged
hey u Smile
exotic into yaar Star 
shayari both r 2 gud Clap
just wondering abt  ur  * SS * Day Dreaming
post it soon Big smile

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Posted: 31 October 2011 at 10:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by yoga23priya

Res Tongue

I am not going to comment further in this story...b'coz i have already read it Tongue

this is and always will be my fav story Clap

Dai i knw u read it already
but that doesn't mean u can escape from commenting okAngry
u didn't told me yet wat u think about each part separately Confused
btw Love ur Title suggestionWink

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Posted: 31 October 2011 at 10:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sunaha6

Kyun hum kisi ki yaadon me kho jate hai,
Ek pal ki doori me yun to jaate hain
Koi humen itna bata do
Hum hi aise hain ya pyar karne ke baad
                                      Sabhi aise ho jaate hain.


I just fell in love with these lines...Awsome Darling...am eager to read this FF now...DO start ASAPThumbs Up

Hey Anusha dear
than for liking it
vil try to do it as soon as my editor get well heheEmbarrassed

Btw when r u going to Update the super romantic One  my Damsel and our loving Gangster Tongue
m loving itEmbarrassed



Edited by joliefille - 31 October 2011 at 10:28am

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Posted: 31 October 2011 at 10:26am | IP Logged
Originally posted by MuktaJaiswal

hey u Smile
exotic into yaar Star 
shayari both r 2 gud Clap
just wondering abt  ur  * SS * Day Dreaming
post it soon Big smile


Hey Mukta diBig smile
Thanx di, n sply for liking my shayari heheEmbarrassed
i hope u will like the update too
will do it soonEmbarrassed

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Posted: 01 November 2011 at 12:38pm | IP Logged
Oyyee Hoyee...


u r back with new SS

start it soon swets..

The poem and those lines are just out of the world..


Staaarttt sooonnnWink

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