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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: maneetlover1

<font color="#009933">SUPERB UPDATE🤗
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Thanksss dear
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: raj_202

prolouge is too good then how will story cum out

will be waiting for parts



Thanks dear
i'm glad u r liking it...
Posted: 12 years ago


Thanks dr.
Posted: 12 years ago


Lol will update it today!!
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Maybe in an hour or so!!!
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: sam1234fly


hey nice ff ...plz add m 2 ur pm list...der is some prob with my account andi can't add any one 2 my buddy list...:( :(<div></div>



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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: anjy-1988v

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Will update it today dr...
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: -dia-

This is so interesting ...loved the concept ...wonderful ...cont. soon



Thanksss dia
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: HayaShazal

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Posted: 12 years ago

AUTHOR'S NOTE

OK frnds, so as you all know, there is not gonna be any more PMs after 26th November!!  So here's the link to the post where you can get the notifications!!

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Again a REMINDER: Its a DARK STORY!!!

Part 2

 

7 years later

 

 

A ray of light enters the room from the window, and falls on her face...

 

 

Her eyes still closed in sleep but moves a little feeling the sensation of the sunlight...

 

 

Her face glows in sunlight and makes it look more beautiful...

 

 

She slowly opens her eyes and a beautiful smile spreads across her face... She had a beautiful dream last night...

 

 

A dream in which she was with her parents... A dream which she sees every night... A dream which she wishes was real... A dream which she knows can never be true...

 

 

But she has no complaints from life... She is happy... She is contented... She has a loving family who she knows love her... She has amazing friends... She has a nice part time job which she hopes on making her career after college...

 

 

She gets up from the bed and opens her window to welcome another beautiful day of her life!!

 

 

The warm wind touches her face sending a ticklish sensation in her!!! The sunrays fall on her face making her pearl white skin to glow into goldenish white...

 

 

She folds her hands in a silent morning prayer to Babaji for giving another beautiful day and praying for peace for everybody...

 

 

"Geet!!" she heard her tayi ji calling her.

 

 

"Aayi tayi ji!!" she said instantly and goes out.

 

 

As she reached out, Rupinder Kaur, her tayi ji, kissed her forehead and said "Happy Birthday Geet!!"

 

 

Geet smiles and remembers that it's her birthday.

 

 

She hugs rupinder and said "Thankyou Tayi ji!"

 

 

Rupinder said "Close your eyes Geet!"

 

 

Geet does as told and Rupinder puts on a chain with a pendant in her neck...

 

 

Geet opens her eyes and looks at the pendant and says "This is beautiful Tayi ji!  Thank you!!"

 

 

Rupinder says proudly "This is not some ordinary pendant!" she opens the pendant and showed it to Geet "See?!"

 

 

In the pendant, there was a picture of Mohinder lal and Rano...

 

 

Geet's eyes gets moisten at seeing her parents picture and Rupinder said "Now they will always stay close to you...near to your heart!!"

 

 

Geet smiles weakly at Rupinder and hugs her...

 

 

Rupinder says knowingly "Bohat miss kar rahi thi na unhein??!!"

 

 

Geet wipes her tears and says with a smile "Miss to unhein kiya jaata hai na tayi ji, Jo humse door chale jaate hain!!  Magar mere Maa aur Dad to hamesha mere paas hain!!  Maine hamesha aap mein apni maa ko paya hai aur taya ji mein dad ko!!  Haan kabhi kabhi unki yaad to zaroor aati hai!  Lekin mujhe pata hai, ke woh jahaan kahin bhi honge, khush honge!!  And I know they are watching over us all the time!!!"

 

 

Rupinder was looking at Geet unbelievably!!  It was still a surprise for her that how can Geet remains so positive at such a young age...  Geet was so innocent and pure-hearted, that Rupinder sometimes felt bad that God has snatched her parents from her at such a tender age, but Geet had never complained about it!!

 

 

After Mohinderlal's death, Rupinder and Sorinderlal has taken Geet under their shelter... They have brought up her like their own daughter!  They have loved her like their own daughter, but she has given them much more love than has taken from them...  

 

 

Geet was like an ocean of love... She has love for everybody in her heart... As much as she takes love from everybody, she returns that love by multiplying it into million folds...

 

 

There was no one in the world who would come into her contact and wouldn't fall in love with her!!!  She was that sweet!!! 

 

 

She has never complained about anything...

 

 

If any other person would've been at Geet's place, she would've hated this day of the year... Because this was the day 7 years ago when she has lost her father...  But not Geet!!  She is not the kind of girl, who would cry over her parents!!  She always remembers them with a smile!!!  Because she has always believed that her parents have gone to God's home...and they are happy over there...and our tears in this world just makes them sad in the other world!!

 

 

Yes she still misses him...but she believes that everything happens according to God's will!!  And who is she to go against God or hold grudges against God!!!

 

 

Rupinder says to change the topic into something lighter "Chal jaldi se tayaar ho ja, warna college ke liye late ho jayegi!!"

 

 

Geet smiles and says rolling her eyes "What late tayi ji!  There is still 3 hours for college!!"

 

 

Rupinder says sarcastically "Yeah yeah I know I know!!  Par tere wo bachche bhi to tera intzaar kar rahe honge na?!"

 

 

"I know Tayi ji!" she said while tying her hair into a ponytail and starts going towards the washroom "I was just going!!"

 

 

When Geet was about to enter the washroom, Rupinder says "Geet, waise Kunal ka koi phone aaya??  When is he coming back??!!"

 

 

Geet makes a baby face and says disappointedly "Kahaan Tayi ji!!  Us ullu ke patthe ne phone kahaan kiya hai 3 din se!!  Aane do usse is baar!  I'm gonna kill him!!  Look at his guts!!  He hasn't called me even today!!" she said pouting adorably and enters the washroom..

 

 

Rupinder hides her smile as she perfectly knows why hasn't he called her!!  She knows that he's planning a surprise for Geet...a big surprise!!

 

 

Geet comes out wearing a pink suit and hurriedly brushes her hair and leaves them open on a side...

 

 

She looks at the time and she knows she has plenty of time...

 

 

She goes into the kitchen and eats her breakfast...

 

 

Rupinder says "Geet, come home early today!!  Actually Brij is also coming today!!"

 

 

Geet gets excited and says "What??!!  Brij veerji is coming today???" she hugs her and says "Oh tayi ji!  This is the best birthday ever!!!"

 

 

And she gets up in a rush and says in a hurry "Ok Tayi ji!!!  Now I have to rush!!  See you in the evening!!  Bye!  Love you!!" and she kissed on her cheek and leaves...

 

 

As she steps out of the door, she opens her locket with a smile and says while looking up into the sky "Love you Mom! Love you Dad!!" 

 

 

This was her everyday routine!  She always sends love to her parents before stepping out of the house!!

 

 

She goes to the orphanage then... It was her another routine... She goes to the orphanage everyday before going to college and spends time with the kids...

 

 

She tells them stories...plays games with them...do all masti with them...

 

 

Kids loved her (who wouldn't?!)... And for her, these kids were an important part of her life!!

 

 

As she enters the orphanage, the kids gets around her and pleads her to tell them a story...

 

 

Geet smiles and starts her story about a princess and her prince charming!!  It was a normal story in which a princess falls in love with her prince charming and after fighting with all the evils, they finally gets married and lived happily ever after!!!

 

 

In Geet's dreamland, that princess was Geet and she wished that someday, her prince charming will come on a white horse and takes her with him to the land of stars, where there will be just love and happiness everywhere...

 

 

She lives every day in her dreamland...

 

 

She looks at the world with just goodness and believed that's how the world is...full of goodness, hope, love, light...

 

 

'Every girl wishes 
for a fairytale scene
Of happily ever after
And the man of her dreams
Her knight riding in
Upon his mighty steed
To rescue his lady love
Whenever she is in need
A kiss from her prince
To awaken her from her sleep
Giving her heart completely
Forever for him to keep
Someone to stand beside her
No matter what life would bring
Her shelter in a storm
A rock for her to cling
But most never have 
their wishes come true
Because reality is no dreamland
Instead of prince charming
A monster is waiting for you!'

 


 
Alas!  She doesn't know that not all princesses gets their prince charmings!!!  She doesn't know that prince charmings just exist in the fairytales!!  They have nothing to do with the real world!!!  She doesn't know that the real world is not her dreamland!!  And the real world is not just about goodness!!!  There are people in this world who are evil, execrable and vicious beyond her imagination...who are evil than monsters... who would not think even once before turning her world upside down!!!  She doesn't know that she is the princess whose destiny has a demon in store for her!!! 

 

 

 x-x-x-x-x


 

6 black BMWs come on a halt someplace in Delhi...

 

 

From the 5 cars, 10 men dressed in black come out quickly and opens the door of the 6th car remaining...

 

 

A man in his middle twenties comes out of that car...  He is enough handsome to make any girl go gaga over him if he gives them just a look!!  As a matter of fact, they would still go gaga over him even if he doesn't give them a glance!!  But there's a saying that the evil is always charming in appearance!!!  Yes, there is an aura of darkness around him!!!  Anybody could feel the evil vibes coming out of him!!!

 

 

He has his hair combed back into a small ponytail... His jaw tightened in an evil sneer... He fixes his Versace glasses, and swiftly starts moving towards the building with all 10 men walking behind him...

 

 

He walks swiftly like a leopard... As he entered the office, a strange kind of fear ran through every person in the office... Their hands started shaking in fear as if they have seen a ghost as they saw him entering in the office...

 

 

But he didn't paid any attention to their condition and kept on walking towards his cabin when...

 

 

A file from one middle-aged employee slips from his hands in fear and fell on the ground...

 

 

He stops in his steps and everybody looks towards him with panic on their faces while holding their breaths in fear... They felt pity for Mr. Sharma who has dropped the file and probably has to face his wrath!!!  'God save Mr. Sharma!!'  was the only thought that crossed everybody's mind...

 

 

They didn't know when or what might make their boss angry??!!  His anger was so unpredictable!!!!  But they know that none of them has the capacity of facing Maan Singh Khurana's wrath!!!

 

 

Maan looks towards Mr. Sharma glaring at him while Mr. Sharma was trembling from head to toe in fear...

 

 

Maan takes a dangerous step towards him and Mr. Sharma stutters "I-I-I-I-I'm s-s-s-sorry s-s-s-sir!!!"

 

 

But Mr. Sharma knew that he is already doomed because everybody knows that Maan Singh Khurana never forgives!!  No matter how small the mistake is, his punishment is always king-sized!!!  Maan Singh Khurana never does anything small...not even the punishment!!!

 

 

Maan looks at the file that has fallen down with his eyebrows picked up evilly and looked back, or rather the word is glared back at him and said with an evil smirk

 

 

"I think you are not feeling well Mr. Sharma!" his voice did not held any anger, which gave a hope to Mr. Sharma that probably he's in a good mood, and he might... just might... overlook it!!  But who would tell him that he's hoping for impossible!!

 

 

Maan continued "So maybe you should take a leave!!  How about a life-long leave??" he said with an evil smirk.

 

 

Maan said loudly while still looking at Mr. Sharma "Adi!!  Give him his termination letter!!"

 

 

Mr. Sharma's eyes widens in fear as he knew that this would be just the beginning of his doom.  Anybody who gets fired from Khurana Industries, never gets a job anywhere else!!

 

 

That's a price that Maan Singh Khurana takes from those who dares to make him angry!!  Everybody knows that he make sure that once who gets fired from Khurana Industries, gets a job nowhere!!  For him, there's no fun in just firing someone!!  The real fun starts when a person has no grains to eat and no money to meet his needs... That's what Maan Singh Khurana enjoys the most!!!

 

 

Maan was about to go into his cabin when Mr. Sharma held onto his feet and begs while crying "I'm sorry sir!  I'm very very sorry!!!"

 

 

But Maan just smirks evilly and frees his leg from him in a jerk and goes into his cabin!!!

 

 

He enters his cabin and gets into his work...

 

 

After some time, he looks at the time...

 

 

He has a meeting scheduled in half an hour... Another take over on his way!!!

 

 

He is already the biggest business tycoon but his hunger for power is still not satiated!!!  

 

 

People call him merciless take-over king!!!  That was because he was never easy while taking over other's businesses!!  He just don't simply take-over other's means of earnings, he do it in a cruel way!!!  He loves seeing them breaking at his feet!!!

 

 

But inspite of having everything in his life, inspite of having control over so much power, inspite of being the crownless king of the world, he was not at peace!!!  There was no real challenge in his life!!!  Whatever he puts his finger on, becomes his without much effort on his part (not that he minds it)!!!  But still somewhere deep inside he wished that someone gives him a real fight!!!  Someone stands up to him...so that when he shatters that one, he could feel that sensation of real victory that he once felt at the age of 17-18!!!  He wants someone to stand up to him, so that he can break them more brutally!!!  But alas! The world has already capitulated in front of him!!!!

 

 

He gets up and gets ready for his meeting...

 

 

x-x-x-x-x-x

 

 

Maan's car is standing at the red light and he is working on his laptop...

 

 

When suddenly a little beggar kid knocks at his window... Before he could say anything, his driver shoos away the beggar kid...

 

 

Maan was about to look back into his laptop, when his eyes fell on something and it felt like the world stopped!!!

 

 

He saw a girl in her late teens playing blindfold with a bunch of kids... 

 

 

She is wearing a baby pink colour suit and has a blindfold on her eyes... Her silky black hair was flowing in the wind... Her cute little nose was visible at the bottom of the blindfold... And she has a pink lip-gloss on her luscious lips that were decorated with a beautiful smile...  The kids were touching her from here and there making her run towards the touch to catch them...

 

 

Maan was watching the girl while lost in a trance...

 

 

There was definitely something different in the girl!!  It wasn't like Maan hasn't seen a more prettier girl than her or she was out of this world, but she had a different kind of aura around her!!  There was a different innocence in her smile that was on her lips...Maan suddenly had a huge urge of tasting those lips... He wanted to taste the flavour of her lip-gloss...

 

 

His eyes travelled down on her body... She wasn't wearing any revealing clothes...it was just a simple suit but the colour was making her milky white skin to glow more... His eyes stopped on the neck-line of her suit... He could see the beginning of the deep valley and he craved to see her more...to see how it looks behind those clothes...to feel her under his mouth...

 

 

And then the girl catches one kid and takes off her blindfold...

 

 

And he saw her full face for the first time!!!

 

 

If he has thought even for a second, that she isn't that pretty, then he realised now how wrong he was!!!  She was truly very very pretty!!!  And most beautiful were her eyes...those deep hazel brown eyes that smiled from under those beautiful butterfly eyelashes...

 

 

He gulps down his saliva and realised how dry his throat has become by mere looking at the girl!!!

 

 

He was already getting hard by just looking at her...

 

 

He takes out his phone and dials a number...

 

 

Geet, who was playing with the orphan kids, was oblivious to the fact that the world's most dangerous, most powerful, and most vicious man has just laid his eyes on her!!!!!


NEXT: Part 3

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Edited by jazz07_dh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
so maan saw geet
continue soon dear