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SIRF MERE LIYE


part 3



geet was fuming in anger, and she was so much hungry that she could eat maan alive,,and that time maan enters her room with empty hand...(oops abb kya hog maan ka)

maan;
geet tumhe kya khana hain batado main order kar deta hu,, mujhe tumhari pasand na pasand pata nahi..

geet;
iska matlab itne der se aapne mere liye kuch nahi banaya,, to itne time tak kya kar rahe the? dandiya khel rahe the kya she ask sarcatiestly...

maan
; ek to main tumhare liye khana order kar raha hu upar se tum mujhe anab sanab bol rahi ho, attitude dikha rahi ho,, aur ye kya aap aap, kuch der pehle tak to tum pe agayi fir aap pe,, uff tum ladkiya na, kab kya bolti ho khud tumhe nahi pata...god v soch rahe honge kya piece banaya...a small smile crept on maan's face but he quickly hide it, but there was someone else who has noticed it...or ha main dandiya nahi khelta... abb batao kya khana hain warna bhooki marogi main kuch nahi order karne wala...

geet;
huh to mat kariye... aur ha maine wo 'tum' gusse me bola tha.. aapne meri itni madad ki,, aur main aise,,,,,,,,,,,,, ok lets forget everything and can u brought me some grocery,, wo aap k ghar me to kuch v nahi,,,,, but to see the angry look n maan's face she has quickly changed her word matlab mujhe kuch pakana hain,, main bahar ka khana nahi khati...

maan just noded her head and walked out of the room... but he was thinking yeh ladki hain kya cheese?
ek pal me ghabrati hain, ek pal me gussa hoti hain fir dusre pal me galti manti v hain aur respect v dikhati hain... uff yeh ladki mujhe pagal kar degi...
but there was someone who was watching the whole scenariyo and observing both of them,, he was aadi...

aadi; (self thought)
maan singh khurana aur has raha hain,, wah geet tumne to ek hi din me jadu kar diya,,, beta maan tu jitna v chahe, apne dil ko aur mujhe dhoka nahi de sakta,,, jo insan kisike liye ek glass pani tak nahi uthata wo ek mamuli ladki k liye itna kar raha hain,, itni parwa kar raha hain,, grocery lane ko taiyar hogaya wahh wahh.... but aadi's happiness did not last... maan was calling him...


maan;
aadi geet se punch le usse kya chahiye aur paise and car leja aur jaldi sab saman k aaja... aadi's face become dull...

aadi;
mai mai main? (typicle aadi style) mujhe laga tu jayega and bite his tounge,,,

maan;
main jaunga? maan singh khurana saman lene jayega? ye tune socha v kaise (tich wonder aadi tujhe ho kya gaya hain? MSK and work for home shopping :p) and by the way tujhe kaise pata hamari kya baat huyi? tu waha tha saale?

aadi;
nahi nahi to main nahi tha,, tu kya baat kar raha hain,, main jata hu, geet ko jo chahiye main le aayunga, tu gussa mat ho mere bhai... aadi rushed out from there...
aadi enters geet room and said; hii geet, to kya chahiye tumhe, batado main le ayunga...

geet
; jii aadi bhai, ye lo maine list bana di... aadi was dumbfounded by her exclaimed 'BHAI' he was over whelmed,, he never had a sister...

aadi
; kya kaha tumne geet? 'BHAI'?

Geet;
oh sorry maine aapko bhai keh diya,, wo mujhe aisa laga k main apko bhai bula sakti hu,, sorry... main dubara nahi kahungi...

aadi was emotional
nahi geet tum mujhe bhai bula sakti ho wo meri koi bahen nahi hain na so i... chalo chodo ye sab and tell tumhe kya chahiye,,

geet gave the list to aadi...and aadi happily went out for it... maan notice it that aadi was very happy and think
ye sayad geet ki wajah se hi huya hoga...




IN DHADIWAAL,, SOME WHERE...


ye maan singh khurana apne aapko samajh ta kya hain, jaha chahta hain ghuss jata hain,, ek din mere hath lag jaye akele main,,,,,,,,,,,,,but he was cut middway by someone...
kuch nahi bigad sakte tum uska brij, humne dekha tha tum apni bahen ko v usse nahi la sake, bacha liya na usse uss kamine ne,, he is one man army... usse takat se nahi dimaag se harana hoga...


another person came,,


aabe saalo tum logo se kuch nahi hoga, abb hume hi kuch karna padega,, is umar me v hum ko hi sab dekhna padhta hain,,, wo bindiya kaha hain re ranjeet??

ranneet;
pitaji wo upar wale kamre me hi hain jaha aapne usse rakhne ko kaha tha aur bahar do admi khare hain... jab tak case thanda na ho usse waha rakhna to padega,,,


thakur;
abbe saale hamri hi baate humko hi samjha raha hain,, baap tu hain k hum?

ranjeet
; ha ha janta hu, lekin kya hum usse maar nahi sakte, na rahega bans na bajegi bansuri...ek jhatke me khatam...

thakur;
tumrhi pass sakal to acchi hain nahi kam se kam akkal ki baat to kar liya kar thodi...agar abhi bindiya maregi to firse bawal hoga... aur ye acp bohot khatarnaak hain,, iske admi v yaha faila huya hain, tujhe kya lagta hain bindiya ko kuch hoga to usse pata nahi chalega? uss sasure ko sab pata haoin aur firak me ghum raha hain kab hume daboje... to apna dimag mat chala, jo hum kehte hain bas wohi kar...

brij; tauji kya hum is acp ko hi nahi marwa sakte?

thakur give a slap to brij on his face...

thakur;
bola, aur ek saala bola... tu to chup hi rahe to accha hain... ek loundiya ko to tu sambhal nahi sakta aur chala sher ka shikar karne... wo acp akela hi khafi hain tum logo ko maarne k liye,,, aur agar usse kuch hogaya to pura delli hil jayega... aur tum logoki raam raam sattya...
abb isko harane k liye kuch na kuch to soch na padega...


(nt; sorry for the language, but their was some vllage as well as some town where they use more bad language, but i m not so comfatable with that so use these but if u found it bad plss sorry)



MAAN'S COTTAGE

aadi
;kya yummyy biriyani banayi hain geet tumne ufff maja hi agaya... itne din tak wo past aur packet food khate khate meri muh ki suyaad hi bigad gayi thi,,,

geet giggle but maan was fuming and the look on his face can blow aadi...

aadi;
wo maan main to bas wo,, ha mera dinner hogaya main chalta hu... geet tumhe kuch v chahiye mujhe phn karna,, tumhare pass number hain na...

geet;
jee aadi bhai... but aap rehte kaha ho..

aadi;
bas pass hi me do cottage chod k...

maan who was listening all tha convo was happy to hear BHAI (uff possissive) but he was generally happy cz he knew everything about aadi and his craving for a sister...
aadi goes to his cottage and maaneet goes their respective rooms...
morning...
aadi came to maan...maan was in his study doing something in his laptop...

aadi;
maan bindiya thakur k ghar me hain, upar k right saide me 2nd room.. aur bahar 2admi gaurd kar rahe hain..

maan;
very good aadi, aaj raat ko hum waha jayenge...

aadi just noded his head in acceptence,,,, aadi indeed sometime fears maan, but that is his love,,, he is a very brave person,, and when come to duty he can do anything for his country but when come to maan he can go ant extent to anything, he can sacrifies his life over him...

maan;
aadi tu abb ja, mujhse hamari place pe milna in at 6pm...

aadi leaves from there and geet comes there...

geet;
wo mere pass kuch pahenne ko nahi hain,

maan
; pehni to ho, to ye kya hain..

geet was pissed of now, ye kal se maine pehna hain, mujhe change k liye kapre chahiye,,

maan;
dekho mere pass abhi time nahi hain k main tumhe kuch khareed ne lejayu aur ye place khatarnak hain to tum akele nahi jaogi...

geet;
but main pehnungi kya?

maan;
tum apne kamre me jao main kuch lata hu, mere pass kuch expire trouser and kurta hain tumhe fit ajayegi...

geet made a cute face and leave from there mumbling something...



geet;
khota, ullu da pattha, das sar wala ravan,,,, dusat danav... samajhta kya hain apne aapko... uska expire kurta pahenna padega,, babjiii madada karo,, but geet tere pass aur koi option v to nahi hain... chal dekhte hain kya lata hain...


to be continue...

precap; maan and aadi's mission to rescue bindiya... what his ranjeet's deed? maan safal hoga? what do u think? maaneet encounter with trouser and kurta :/ kon jitega? actlly jitega kya? tich thinking...


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Originally posted by monika1992

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