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Hi friends..

Sorry for the delay.Thot of updating on Monday but as always i couldn't Ouch

I tried a lot to write..but the thing is i feel i should not drag this beautiful mystique love story further...So i am goin to end it very soon... Embarrassed

If you have any ideas plzz share it...coz i want a mystique element to it...which i think is almost over...

THANK YOU all so much for your support...  Hug Hug


Ofcourse i will start a new one...either a historical or something like a thriller very soon...

Choice is yours...Wink


PART 31

Geet was sitting on the dining table staring at the omlette.
Geet(self-talk): Maan ne itni mehnat se banayi he. Lekin mujhe to egg se allergy he.Kaise kahu? Agar wo bura maan gaye to? Chal Geet,babaji ko yaad kar aur chup-chap kha le.





She took a bite and closed her eyes as if she would puke any moment.
Geet:isme to koi masala bhi nhe he. Ye kya aise hi cheez khate he? Tabhi..dekho kitney berang aur besur insaan he..nhe nhe..aisey nhe bolte..ache to he par..thode boring he.

She giggled blushing.Meanwhile Maan returned after the call.He lukd really worried.
Geet:kya hua Maan? Ap pareshan lag rhe ho.
Maan: nhe..umm kuch bhi to nhe(self-thot) agar mishty ko abhi bata diya to bewajah pareshan hogi!
Geet: matlab? Koi to baat he jo ap mujhe nhe batana chahte! Ap kahiye na me pareshan nhe hungi
Maan(startled):not again! Mishty can u hear watever i am thinking?
Geet: kya? Mene to wahi suna jo apney kaha.
Maan(self-thot) : God! Ab wo media wali baat isey pata hi chal jayega!
Geet:kya media?
Maan: nothing..umm.. Arey tumne to breakfast hi nhe kiya
Geet: ha wo me abhi kar rhe hu.
Maan:pehle finish karo phir baat karenge
Geet:ha..Maan..wo..
Maan: kya Maan?
Geet: kaash ye bhi mere mann ki awaz sun sakte!
Maan:tumhe ye pasand nhe?
Geet(excitd):babaji! Matlab apney mere mann ki baat sun li? Tabhi..apko ye bhi pata chal gaya hoga na ki mujhe egg se allergy he.
Maan(rolling his eyes): mishty! Jis tarah se tumney shakal(face) banayi he,koi bhi guess kar sakta he ki tumhe ye acha nhe laga.Aur ha,if u r allergic to something,u should tell me!
Geet:me kyu batau? Have you told me wat is irritating u?

Maan lukd at her innocent face amused.

Geet blushes as she read his thots.
Geet:ap bhi na kahi bhi shuru ho jatey ho..
Maan:ab maine kya kiya?
He came near her and took the plate away.
Geet: wo ap jo soch rhe the..
Maan(playfully):kya soch rha tha me? Batao na Mishty!
Geet(irritated):chaddo apsey baat nhe karni! Waise bhi bhuk lagi he mujhe.
 Maan(self-thot): thank God,Geet ka dhyan hat gaya warna najaney me kaise sambhalta.

Geet: Maan baat kya he?
Maan(startled): nothing. First of all lets eat something.

As they had their sandwitch,


Maan: tum chup kyu ho?
Geet: apko to mujse kuch nhe kehna na..
Maan:nhe mishty..wo..umm..(slf-tot)kaise batau ki kal office se bahar nikalte waqt jo CCTV footage tha wo kisi tarah leak ho gaya!

Geet got up and switched on the TV.Many channels were repeating the scenes where she was in his arms both lost in each other. And finally the reporter concluded,' So thats the hot news about the hottest bachelor of the city. Waise hum apko yaad dilaye ki ye wahi Geet Handa he jisko bachane ke liye Maan Singh Khurana ne apney bhai ko jail karwaya.

Maan couldn't meet his eyes with her.He had hurt her again! Now she will be worried all the time. But Mishty has some other plans.
Geet: Ap kitne cute lag rhe he na!
Maan:kya?
Geet:hmm...choo chweet!
Maan sighed.
Maan: Mishty! Tumhe mazak suj rha he?
Geet:to? Ab ek na ek din sabko pata chal jata na,to aj hi sahi
Maan:lekin dadima ko hum kya jawab denge?
Geet:ap fikar mat kariye, me hu na?
Maan(st): Thats why i am worried
Geet:acha?
Maan:nhe..wo..me keh rha tha ki hume ghar jaana chahiye
Geet:ok
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KC:
Dadi was sitting on the couch worried.
As she saw Maaneet,
Dadi: Geet, Maan! Ye sab kya he? Hume apse ye umeed nhe thi! You are two grown-ups. How could u let this happen!

Geet sat on her knees beside dadi and held her hand.
Geet: dadima, apney aur Maan ne mujhe pyar diya he.mujhe apnakar is pariwar me shaamil kiya he.Aur is ghar ki izzat mujhe apni jaan se bhi zyada pyaari he! Aur hamesha rahega. Ye mera apse waada he. Waise mujhe lagta he ki mediawalo ka muh band karne ka ek hi tareeka he ab.
Dadi:kya he wo beta?
Geet:wo..dadima..(lukin at Maan) humari shaadi.
Dadi's eyes filled with joy as she heard that.

Dadi:lekin bete,itni jaldi kaise?
Maan:dadima..court marriage karenge
Dadima:ok Maan,jaise ap theek samje.

After dadima left,


 Geet was about to go when he held her dupatta. She stopped there..her heart-beats rising.Maan came near her holding her dupatta.He rested his chin on her nape.




Maan(in his seductive tone): kyu Mishty? Apne Maan ke bina ek pal bhi reh nhe paa rhe,huh?(kissing her) Isiliye to shaadi ki itni jaldi ho rhe thi..
Geet nudged him,'aahaha..ye jo khushiyo ke ladoo apke mann me phut rhe he na uspar thoda lagam dijiye!
Maan turned her around and wrapped his hands around her waist bringing her closer to him.
Maan: kyu du? Aur specially jab kal meri Mishty hamesha ke liye meri ho jayegi

Geet(lukin at his eyes): I am always yours!

Maan gave a faint smile and slowly eyed at her lips.As a reflex she parted her lips and that was enough for him to seal them.They were almost eating out each other..when there was a knock on the door.
Geet: Maan..
Maan(still kissing):umm..
Geet: let me go..
Maan: cant they wait?
Again,knock knock!
'Geet bete...'

Maan(startled): dadima?

Geet couldn't hide her smile when she saw MSK scared! Maan glared at her.
Maan: Mishtyy...
Geet:shhh..Maan jaldi se jakey kahi chup jaiyie
Maan: tumhe to me baad me dekh lunga.

Finally she opened the door.Dadi:kya hua bete? Itni der laga di apney door open karne me?
Geet: wo..umm..haa dadima wo me so rhe thi na..isliye..
Dadima (smiled): bete hum to bas ye jewels apko dene aye the.(handing her the jewel box)
Geet:dadima ye sab..
Dadi:naa..mana mat karna Geet. Ye khandani zevar(jewel) he. Humara bada armaan tha apni bahu ko dhum dham se ghar lane ka..lekin kya kare. Haalat hi aise he. Anyways if you wear these 2mrw i will be very happy!
Geet:sure dadima.
Dadi: gud nite Geet
Geet: gud nite dadima

After dadi left, Maan came out of the washroom.
Maan: thank God! Dadima ko pata nhe chala..
Geet: kya pata nhe chala? Pata he wo kya soch rhe thi?
Maan:ab..mujhe kaise pata hoga mishty? I dont eavesdrop others mind!
Geet stared at him jaw-dropped. She was so deadly angry! Maan had no escape but he changd the topic wisely,
Maan: waise mishty...dadima kya soch rhe thi?
Geet(complaining): yehi ki..ye aj kal ke bache! Zara za bhi intezaar nhe hota..
Maan pulled Geet closer who was oblivous to his actions thinking about dadima.
Geet:babaji! How will i face her 2mrw!
Maan:Mishty..
Geet: sab apke wajah se hua he Maan..
Maan: meri baat to suno
Geet:na ap mere kamre me ate
Maan:arey lekin..
Geet:na ap chupne me time lagate aur na..
Maan:shhh..CHUP bilkul CHUP!
Geet lukd at him startled with her deep brown eyes.
Maan: Aj ki raat wo akhri raat hogi jab tumhe dadima ya kisi ke barey me sochkar pareshan hogi.Kyuki kal subah jab tum dadima ko milogi(meet dadi) to tum 'Maan ki dulhan' bankar milogi...Kal se sari duniya ko me garv se bataunga ki Geet Maan ki he..sirf Maan ki..
Geet:lekin me to apki Mishty hu..(blushing)mera matlab he..wo..ap..

Maan (smiles): hmm..(eyeing her lips) tum to meri apni mishty ho!
Geet shoved him away.
Geet: go Maan! Raat bohat ho gayi he...

Maan left unwillingly.

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PRECAP:
Maan ki Dulhan.. (probably last part!)

Hope u like this! I know i am ending it a bit early but i think thats good to retain the beauty of the storyline.
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Posted: 07 January 2012 at 4:46am | IP Logged

maan and geet are going to get married :O :O

maan and geet are going to get marrieedd :O :O :O

yayyy :D :D 


parttyyy .. :P 

lol .. 

btw it was a gr888888888888888888888 part.. 

update sooon


take care :) :)

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