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(Ipkknd)ArHi FF - Forever Mine -NOTE pg 53 8/11/12 (Page 5)

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Posted: 24 October 2011 at 12:02pm | IP Logged
Really nice..
Please continue Embarrassed
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Posted: 24 October 2011 at 12:07pm | IP Logged
Add Me To PM List : D Embarrassed
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Posted: 24 October 2011 at 12:14pm | IP Logged
Loved it. Do continue soon.
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Posted: 24 October 2011 at 12:24pm | IP Logged
wow di that was sooo awesome...
it was really beautiful...
He would be Arnav. Her Arnav.  i loved this line...
and the poem you wrote at the end...it was amazing di...really beautiful...
you have to continue this...i know you will make it awesome...
and do pm me when you update...

-mah


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Posted: 24 October 2011 at 1:21pm | IP Logged
Hey, I really liked this first part. Please do continue and PM me when you do. You write really well and I feel you capture the characters as they are. Great job :)
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Posted: 24 October 2011 at 1:35pm | IP Logged
Herrrsheee!!

Great going and there's nothing wrong with your stuff! Keepo it coming. Btw, ''This girl will definitely drive me crazy'' reminds me of Maan Singh Khurana. I thought that was his patented dialogue but I guess Arnav Singh Raizada managed to get the rights...lol!
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Posted: 24 October 2011 at 1:57pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by aquablue17

YAYA!! it worked Hershi!! Me 1st!!! Kay now that I have totally failed at stalking skills since it took me forever to reserve a post AngryAngry IF kept saying I was spammingShocked

Well I will read and comment more 2morrow I promise!! Right now I am SleepySleepy So nite!!!

RES <-- ya! me 1st! whoop Big smile


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OMG!!! HERSHI I AM GONNA HUNT YOU I SWEAR. ShockedOuch
N you were thinking of not posting that!! ShockedShockedHow dare you even think that? You are such a good writer!!!!!!SmileClapClap

Tht wuz just amazing!!! I loved how he said "her Arnav" <-- AWWW see his heart already knows where it belongs!!! but the stubborn mule refuses to say so himself AngryAngry

Dude that wuz just brilliant! Keep writing and I am sure every1 can see that this is a SS material plot!!LOLWink

Soumi Heart


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soumi!!!!  woohooo ur 1st!!!

dont worry hun...i will guide u with my stalker skills! and then u shall become as good as me ROFL ROFL ROFL

AND HAHHAHAHHA!!! u cant hunt me down -___- cause then u won't get an update...hmph! heheheeh thank so much hun! im glad u liked it =D and psht..i cant ever be as good as u!

and yeahhh...he is a bit of a mule no? men -_- but dont worry i shall set him straight...maybe...hmm =P 

im shocked at the response i got...people actually like this...everyone is so sweet <33

LMAO some people PMed me and demanded to turn it into a FF and not an SS hahaaha...im like uhhh i dont even have anything planned yet...but we will see lol!

sigh everyone on this forum is so nice =)

thanks again soumi loveee <33333

xox
hershi




Edited by Smileyface - 24 October 2011 at 1:58pm

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Posted: 24 October 2011 at 2:00pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by littlemoi

loved the first part!!!
awesome job on describing arnav's thoughts and feelings!!
you've got skills!!
plzz continue and update soon!!
o and plzzz add me to your pm list!!
would love to read more!
 
 

awww thank you soo much!! this is such a sweet comment! im glad u liked it =) yeah i tried to show his confusion as well as his denial and then finally his pain. Im glad everyone liked it =D thank u so much once again! it really means a lot =D will definitely add u to the PM list =)


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