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Posted: 23 October 2011 at 2:07pm | IP Logged
Oh wow Faria .. you have a way with words .. you write so so well Clap 
 
It was so dark and eerie .. I was having chills .. especially when she stuck her hand in the fire Stern Smile 
 
 
Yes this was deeply sadistic LOL but I know that its coming from you so I wasn't surprised .. but wow .. such a short piece yet it was able to give me a variety of emotions .. I was getting freaked out actually :P
 
 
BUT this was an amazing OS !
 
 
 
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oh it was chilling feeling...I get goosebumps...

thanx for pm
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Lesson I learned today: You're better than you think you are.

That was short, but it still gave me goosebumps. Thanks for the PM! :)
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Posted: 23 October 2011 at 6:50pm | IP Logged

Faria Hug

I am confused whether to say "I hate you" in your language or "I hate you" in my language. LOL

Ms Boogleton, even though i am always prepared as to what to expect in your OS "shock and surprise", you always mange to go that step further. 

Now madam, please keep all these thoughts only to your writing which you seem to do very well and cause the exact effect that you want in your reader. Tongue

Beautiful flow of words and shocking as usual. Very very good. 

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ps - I should kill you for making me read this at 6.15 in the morning LOL


Edited by serialwatcher16 - 23 October 2011 at 6:50pm
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This left me totally chilled to the bone!! Loved it!!

Very well written Boogz. Why do you believe otherwise?

Fabulous writing!! 
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Gorgeous update Very well writtenClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClap

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