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Part :2


So Brij without delay called .after finishing formalities ...Geet ...

and she shyly sweetly walked in...Maan was shocked to see her ..

That night just flashed in his mind... 


Geet did not see Maan's face .


How can Maan forget that night and that wet .. he never thought raindrops taste sweeter ..  He shivered goosebumps ... all his beutiful hairs in his arms stood in surprise and memories the sweat diamond formed below his nose above his perfect upperlips ..

he gulped .. Dev was so scared to have a look at the bride , he dont know how she looks ... and no idea it will be good to look , the stare.. straight ...It was his first ever Ladkee Dekhna ..

so he decided to see his brothers reaction ...and looked at Maan seeing Maan sweating profusely and behaving indifferently Dev thought he is just busy ..uncomfirtable ...for getting late to his works that he do through his phone ..and ..sadly ... he decided ..may be the bride may not be some breath taking beauty ...


or what if she ... he raised his head ..and ...( speechless ...)

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Edited by magicia - 23 October 2011 at 5:08am

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Part :3
dev saw a girl coming towards them. she was covering herself with the Dupatta and trying to adjust it in the most elegant way Smile she is beautiful he thought he was so mesmerized that he just wanted to kiss her on her cute chubby cheeks but because of his Shy nature he just drop his eyes and started staring the Carpet like  Pattern Bana'na seekhna hi os ka Maqsad ho Wink ...

dadi turned her head to see Dev he was looking down then she saw Maan he was looking Geet with his Mouth Open Shocked Dadi was shocked to see this Shocked Dadi touched Maan with her elbow and gestured him to shut his Mouth Embarrassed  ... [Magicia]

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Part 4

Then  Daadi had the second thought ...The girl Geet , she knew Geet before .she met Geet on Nayantharas wedding .  Thats how and why she send prposal to handas ...

She never thought , Geet could make Maan go breathless , yes ..it seems he cant breath or wink ..even he did not realize or seeing what Daadi is gesturing him ..

She cursed the moment that she decided to Dev get marry first ..no that decision is not wrong , but she should have took at least some hard steps toward to Maan getting Married ..

she thought , maan is right ..her silly mind ..thought seeing Dev get married with family ..may hopes or dreams ..may rise in Maans mind too..

yet the decision is not wrong , But Maan like this girl ..

Yes Maan like this girl and she asked Dev who was reluctant to marry first before his brother , to marry first , she sawed new dreams in his mind ...she convinced him just yesterday chanting Geet gun gan ..which she had less clue ..

She only met her ...

Nothing she knew ...

then yesterday whole night she was brainwashing Dev ,, how sweet beautiful and cute Geet is and .all ..and she stopped when she was able to saw the twinkle , she wished and she tried to bring in his eyes ...
sparkle of hope love ...

And ...here maan too seems like her ..Oh god ..

Maan like her ..and this may be the only opportunity for her to see Maan liking some girl ..She know Maan character very well ...

very very well ...how can she forget how come Maan hate Roses ...



Maan one day when he was 7 or 8 was sitting in terrace with daadi and daada ..then he saw a beautiful white rose in the garden ...he loved it ..he said his daadaji he is going to prick it and and he ran downstairs ..

 before he reach ...the butlur who dont had a clue that Maan is coming to pick it as usual as a part of his duty cut it and too to put in vase ...

and seeing his lovely flower cut by someone else ...maan did not say a word as usual went to his special room in attique ...

His dada and daasi mom dad everybody tried to convince him gave him the rose ..he nor touched neither looked at it ..

just said ..i hate roses ...i hate flowers 
and still he hates flowers..

Oh god what will happen now ..

Savitri got so confused ...

she dont know what to do ..she looked at her both grandsons/.

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Dev Decided to ask something seeing beautiful girl like Geet .. mano ki usme jaan aagaya ..LOL ..he cleared his throat ..

(speechless)


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Edited by magicia - 23 October 2011 at 5:09am

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Awesome parts 
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no pm today darling ...

we trying to have fun ..will try to complete it ..then ..may be pms ..ok

i just want these comment queens to write something ...


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Awesome parts 
love d it
pls cont 
pls pm me.
no pm today darling ...

we trying to have fun ..will try to complete it ..then ..may be pms ..ok

i just want these comment queens to write something ...


thanks ..very intersting ...loved it.

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Awesome parts 
love d it
pls cont 
pls pm me.
no pm today darling ...

we trying to have fun ..will try to complete it ..then ..may be pms ..ok

i just want these comment queens to write something ...


thanks ..very intersting ...loved it.

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