Fan Fictions


Fan Fictions
Fan Fictions

FF:Brewing Desires -Pt 31,pg 113 THE FINAL CHAPTER (Page 3)

shybabe IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 05 June 2006
Posts: 13314

Posted: 23 October 2011 at 8:21am | IP Logged
Thank u for ur comments...I will keep posting but can't promise it will be regular...I am just too busy...But will do whenever I get the time...Smile

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


pooh_91 Senior Member

Joined: 22 September 2011
Posts: 970

Posted: 23 October 2011 at 10:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shybabe

Thank u for ur comments...I will keep posting but can't promise it will be regular...I am just too busy...But will do whenever I get the time...Smile
 we shall be waiting Smile
pri12 IF-Rockerz

Joined: 15 April 2011
Posts: 6782

Posted: 23 October 2011 at 11:53am | IP Logged
veryyy niceee...thnxxx for pm me...continue sooon :)
SilverBell IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 05 September 2009
Posts: 40771

Posted: 23 October 2011 at 12:45pm | IP Logged
Go For It. (:
AquaBluez17 IF-Rockerz

Joined: 23 June 2011
Posts: 7570

Posted: 23 October 2011 at 2:00pm | IP Logged
Shy you better continue this. after tht awesome prologue, I would be very angry if you didn't! Big smile

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


shybabe IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 05 June 2006
Posts: 13314

Posted: 23 October 2011 at 2:10pm | IP Logged


Same setting: The night when Khushi gets entangled and he prince charming Arnav comes and saves her again...

Khushi reaches home and is compelled by her buaji and amma to get married to Shyam Jha. Her heart does not agree to this...There is something missing...

Khushi changes into her night dress and lays down on her bed and is in deep thoughts. She stares at the wall, closes her eyes and the image of his eyes just flashes in her mind...She quickly opens her eyes again and sits straight on her bed...

Khushi feels her heart pounding so fast and loud like its going to skip her chest...

Khushi: Unhe aaj dekh kar kuch hua humme...ek ehsaas khushi ka...unki aankhon mein...Kuch toh hai joh hum samajh nahi pa rahe hai...ek aisa ehsaas joh hum poori zindagi mehsoos nahi kar sake...joh unki aankhon mein aaj dekhkhar mehsoos hua hai...hey devi maiyya

Kyon soch rahe hum unke baare mein...woh toh hume dekhna bhi pasand nahi karte...aur hum unhike baare mein soch rahe...Buaji sahi kehte hai ki hum sanka devi hai...

At RM:

Arnav is in his bed...and is in deep thoughts of remembering how he unwrapped those wires from her...he remembers every touch...the way he held her hands and didn't want to let go...and how his eyes were just on her...

Arnav: yeh kya ho gaya hai mujhe...jisse mein itna pareshaan tha...ussi ke baare mein soch rahaan hoon...Khushi mujhse nazre kyon chura rahi thi...

Arnav wakes up and he is unable to sleep at all...he closes his eyes and says, "Khushi".

Next Morning at RM:

Arnav comes down and has a headache...Anjali sees him...

Anjali: Kya hua chote...tabiyad theek nahi hai?

Arnav: Kuch nahi di...bas so nahi paaya...just restless tha raat ko...

Anjali: toh office kaise jaaoge...

Arnav looks at the door and says,

Arnav: Nahi di aaj office nahi jaa raha hoon...mein ghar se kam kar loonga...

Anjali: Ghar se...tumhe disturb to nahi ho ga na...

Arnav: Kyon?

Anjali: Nahi, diwali aa rahi hai toh ghar mein bahut saare log hai '...kaam hai thodi awaaz toh aayegi na...

Arnav: Its fine di...

He walks away...

Bell rings...Khushi is there...She looks tired too

Anjali: Arre Khushiji...aap theek ho? Aaapka chehra itna uttara kyon hai...

Khushi: Woh ...hum raat ko theek se so nahi paaye...kuch pareshaan the...

Anjali: pataa nahi kya ho gaya sab ko...chote bhi raat ko theek se nahi soye...

Khushi looks surprised...and keeps thinking of Arnav.

Khushi is working in the kitchen and she hears Arnav calling Om prakash is not there and no one she decides to go to Arnav's room...But Anjali comes...

Anjali: yeh chote chila kyon rahe hai...? hum jaake dekhte hai...

Anjali goes to Arnav...

Anjali: kya hua chote...chila kyon rahe ho...

Arnav: kuch nahi di...sir mein dard kar raha hai...isliye balm chahiye tha...jab zaroorat hoti hai toh koi nahi hota...Arnav is very restless and mad...

Anjali: hum leke aate hai theek hai...

Arnav is looking the other way and is sitting on the bed and has his fingers on his head trying to rub it...

Anjali turns to walk out and Khushi just brings in the balm...

Khushi heard Arnav asking for she brings it...isn't that sweet...awww

Anjali: Lijiye hum balm leke aa gaye hai...

Arnav puts his hand back and ask her to give it...

Anjali: hum lagaa de...

Arnav: Fine...

Anjali is rubbing his head from behind...but she gets a she silently asks Khushi to come forward and rub Arnav's head...

Khushi is scared and she nods her head she cant..., but Anjali nods and says its ok...

Khushi slowly comes and stands behind Arnav and quickly takes Anjali's place and slowly keeps her fingers on Arnav's forehead from behind...(ARHI music playing at the back..)

Arnav suddenly feels something and opens his eyes...he feels Khushi's presence...and Khushi is still massaging his head...He closed his eyes again and and suddenly opens it again...and then he quickly grabs Khushi's hand...Khushi is shocked and very scared...and has her eyes closed...he his still holding her hand and he gets up and turns and looks to see that its Khushi...

Arnav keeps looking at Khushi who has her eyes still closed and has a scared look on her face and Arnav just looks at her...while holding her hand...(Rabba ve moment)...

Edited by shybabe - 23 October 2011 at 2:14pm

The following 122 member(s) liked the above post:


AquaBluez17 IF-Rockerz

Joined: 23 June 2011
Posts: 7570

Posted: 23 October 2011 at 2:19pm | IP Logged
me first!

~~~ Edit~~~~

kay here goes! Heyy Shy!! tht wuz awesome girl!Big smile

Poor Arnav having a headacheCry Well now that our Khushiji is helping him, it will all be better!!!Embarrassed
I hope Buaji goes n takes a hike n while there gets eaten by a junlee bhalo. She is so horrible to our poor KhushiOuch

loved it! Thanks for the pm!

Edited by aquablue17 - 23 October 2011 at 2:21pm

The following 3 member(s) liked the above post:


_mahi_ IF-Dazzler

Joined: 11 November 2007
Posts: 4567

Posted: 23 October 2011 at 2:20pm | IP Logged


yeh masakali masakaliSilly.. yeh matakali matakali Party.. hehe.. LOL
so random lolLOL
so yeah.. coming back to your sweet updateWink.. it was amazing shyClap.. i loved it completelyEmbarrassed.. how sweetTongue... khushi and arnav thinking about eachother all night and being restlessEmbarrassedEmbarrassed.. so sweetWink.. i so not want bhua to be the intruder hereDead.. cant wait for the next update alreadyLOL.. holding handsDay Dreaming.. awww...Tongue
please update soon sweetheartBig smile
n thnks for the pm...Hug

Edited by _mahi_ - 23 October 2011 at 2:28pm

Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Author Replies Views Last Post
Immortal Desires ArSh FF|PROMOPG54|21.11.11 (;

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 65 66

Author: FleetingWishes.   Replies: 522   Views: 47832

FleetingWishes. 522 47832 02 October 2013 at 3:10am by Monstuholic4evr
MAYUR ff - desires not known#2 pg 9

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 11 12

Author: jeniluvmayur   Replies: 95   Views: 10465

jeniluvmayur 95 10465 29 November 2012 at 4:35am by kiran_rati

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 36 37

Author: luvabbybaby   Replies: 289   Views: 74966

luvabbybaby 289 74966 12 October 2012 at 7:55pm by PoojaSheth
MG ff:strange desires 2,link to thread 3

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 152 153

Author: kathie_berns   Replies: 1219   Views: 177197

kathie_berns 1219 177197 29 March 2012 at 7:57am by -Mishu-
Maneet ff: strange desires, updated part24,page142

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 156 157

Author: kathie_berns   Replies: 1252   Views: 249452

kathie_berns 1252 249452 28 March 2012 at 3:41am by 286pearl

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category / Channels

Fan Fictions Topic Index

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.

Popular Channels :
Star Plus | Zee TV | Sony TV | Colors TV | SAB TV | Life OK

Quick Links :
Top 100 TV Celebrities | Top 100 Bollywood Celebs | About Us | Contact Us | Advertise | Forum Index