FF:Brewing Desires -Pt 31,pg 113 THE FINAL CHAPTER - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
👏Thanks for pm!

Loved the balm angle ! 

Oh, what will happen next with the clasped hands???


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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey shy!
It was an awesome update. Just loved it. Bechare arnav ke sar mein khushi ke karan dard ho raha h. Thanx for pm.
Posted: 12 years ago
Hai shy! O Rabba main tou mar gai ray!! So cute!!! I want u to continue so bad I think I'll pee my pants if u don't do it soon!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: minimuffin86

Hai shy! O Rabba main tou mar gai ray!! So cute!!! I want u to continue so bad I think I'll pee my pants if u don't do it soon!!


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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 2:

Arnav is holding Khushi's hand...and Khushi still has her eyes closed...

Arnav: Khushi...

Khushi slowly opens her eyes on hearing this...

Arnav: Tum...yahaan...tum kab aayi...

Khushi: Ji...woh hum yahaan Anjali ji ko balm dene aaye the...aur unhone ne hi kahaan humme aapke sir ko...

Arnav is still holding her hand...and Khushi feels very scared...

Khushi: Arnav ji...

Arnav: Kya hua Khushi...with a worried look...

Khushi: Aap...woh ..hamara haath chodiye...

Arnav just then realizes that he is still holding her hand...and is shocked...He slowly leaves her hand...and he looks embarrassed.

Khushi takes a step back and looks a little uncomfortable!

Arnav: I am sorry...

Khushi looked very surprise...

Khushi: Phir se sorry...(whispers to herself)

Arnav: Kuch kaha tumne...

Khushi: nahi...kuch nahi...hum chalte hai...humme neeche kaam hai...

Khushi runs away...and Arnav looks on...he turns around but guess what he sees Khushi's ring has fallen on the floor...He realizes that Khushi's ring fell on the floor while he was holding her hand and released his hand from her (Wah wah...so bollywood style lol)

He bends down to take it and looks at the ring...Arnav goes out of his room...he goes down to look for Khushi to give her ring to her...

He looks for Khushi...and then he asks OP

Arnav: Khushi ko dekha...

OP:Khushiji...woh toh kitchen mein hai...

Arnav: Kya sirf Khushi iss ghar mein kaam karti hai...tum log kya karte ho...(Oye hoye...Arnav ko kitna boora lag raha hai...khushi bahut kaam karti hai bechaari)

OP looks very confused...

OP: Ji...

Arnav: Jaao apna kaam karo

Arnav walks to the kitchen...and he sees Khushi...she is making pakodas...and has towel on her shoulder...Khushi hasn't seen him yet...

Arnav: Khushi...

Khushi gets a shock of her life '.and turns so quickly splashing all the besan atta on her hand to his shirt and face...

Arnav: What the...

Khushi: Sorry Arnavji...woh hum darr gaye the...achanak aap peeche se awaaz de rahe the toh...

Arnav wipes his shirt...but forgets to wipe his face...Khushi points out to his face and says.

Khushi: Chehre pe...bhi thoda hai...

Arnav wipes the wrong side of his face(obviously)

Khushi: abhi bhi hai...theriye...hum karte hai..

Khushi takes her dupatta and slowly wipes his cheeks...and ARHI have an eyelock session(rabba ve moment)

Khushi: Saaf ho gayi...and then she looks away...

Arnav: Khushi, tumhari aanghooti...

Khushi looks surprised and looks at her besan filled hand...

Khushi: arre , yeh aapko kahaan mili...

Arnav: woh mere kamre mein gir gayi thi...

Khushi goes to wear it but her hand is filled with besan...

Khushi: Aap yahaan rakh deejiye...hum lelenge...

Arnav: Yahaan rakhoonga toh waapas kho jaayegi...

Khushi is looking here and there...and keeps yapping and suddenly Arnav says...

Arnav: Chup raoho tum...doosra haath do...

Khushi: Ji...kya...

Arnav doesn't think twice...and takes her other hand and puts the ring on her finger...And Khushi's dhak dhak moment starts...and her heart is beating so fast...

Khushi...just looks on with surprise...Arnav is still holding her hand...(Rabba ve)

Arnav gently leaves her hand...and walks away...

Khushi looks at her hand...and says,

Khushi: yeh kya kiya aapne...Arnavji...

Khushi has tears in her eyes...

Evening at RM:

Everyone is having chai...and Arnav is also sitting down. Khushi comes in with hot hot pakodas and lovely ginger chai...Arnav is looking at her...

Anjali:Arre wah khushiji, kya khushboo aa rahi hai...aur badiyan chai...

Anjali looks at Arnav

Anjali: chote ab tumhara sir dird kaisa hai...

Arnav looks at Khushi and tells Anjali...

Arnav: ab theek hai di, shaayad aapke haathon ka hi jaadoo hoga...sir jo dabayya aapne mera...

Arnav looks at Khushi...and Khushi cant believe her ears that he said that...Khushi has a slight smile on her face...and looks away from Arnav shyly...

Khushi: hum abhi aate hai...Khushi goes away quickly from there...

Arnav just looks at Khushi leaving...



Edited by shybabe - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
AWw how cute!! me first!! yaya!
tht wuz an awesome update!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: aquablue17

AWw how cute!! me first!! yaya!
tht wuz an awesome update!


U SHOULD GET AN AWARD FOR BEING THE FIRST TO RESPOND...DARLING. SO HERE IS MY AWARD A BIG HUG TO YOU🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: shybabe


U SHOULD GET AN AWARD FOR BEING THE FIRST TO RESPOND...DARLING. SO HERE IS MY AWARD A BIG HUG TO YOU🤗



I replied even be4 I got the pm! tht is my stalker skills rite there!! Thanks hun!!! 😆😆 Luv this FF
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice one! Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
U have written khushi's parts really well. I can visualize putting
balm on Arnav,making pakodas ... her shyness and all. U've depicted it well.
Thanx for a sweet read.