FF:Despair(Arni IPKKND) last part 120 - Page 3

Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for the PM really like the start of your FF! Please continue soon
Posted: 12 years ago
its nice yaar..keep going...
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by -Murphy369-


haha, he is going to get a shock of his life when he sees that the kiddo is 23 years old. Oh what a creep the shyam is, feels like beating him black and blue!
Nice part Naddie, it is great that you started a FF in this forum!!
thx dear ...it was very close to my heart i just thought to rewrite with some more parts on Arnhi 
Posted: 12 years ago
that sound cool nad!plz update soon..
Posted: 12 years ago
Omfggg, This Is Damn Interestinggg . 😳 & He Think Khushi Is A Child ?! : O 😆 In A Way She Is & Need Extra Protection From Arnav  😍
Posted: 12 years ago
very niceee...add me to ur pm list...plzz pm me whn u updte
Posted: 12 years ago

Nani: as you wish beta.

Arnav: i will leave today it  will take a day to reach there

Nani: beta send telegram he will send her.

Arnav: dadi i go for camping it is not at all big deal for me...

Nani : as you wish beta.

Arnav: theek ha hum kal subha nikla ga.

Nani:theek ha..


at Khushi place:

Khushi: buaji where papa send you?

Buaji: beta i was gone to pray

khushi: buaji ..jhoot

Buaji : nai chand... kissed her forehead

Khushi: buaji why papa is again & again asking about postman

Buaji: beta koi important  letter aana ha un ka

Khushi: buaji tell me truth why you both are so frighten?

Buaji: kuch nai beta..chalo jao aaj tum khana pako

Mr Gupta: buaji come in my room

khushi: go phir dono raaz kai baat kara

Buaji smiled

Mr Gupta: buaji koi telegarm aaya

Buaji : nai

Mr Gupta: may be she is not at home

Buaji: sabar kara sub theek hoga

Mr Gupta: kaisa...

Buaji: woh ha... pointed up

Mr Gupta: han woh tou ha... acha  yeh box aap rakh la

Buaji: yeh kya ha 

Mr gupta : kuch jewelery...

Buaji: give it to Khushi

Mr gupta:  nahi abhi nai

Buaji:if they didn't reply then

Mr Gupta: take her to your village

Buaji: how she will stay there?

Mr gupta:it is better she stay then to marry that Shyam...

door bell rang:

Buaji:may be the telegram let me check. she open

shyam servant came with few gifts 

Buaji: what is this?

servant: for bhabi jee.. kept in their seating place

buaji: please take it back

Servant: we can't take it back

Buaji: ok i will throw it...

servant : do what every you want to do?

Khushi: what is this came out ?

Buaji: kuch nai you go in

Khushi: what are you both hiding from me?

Buaji: beta 

Mr Gupta: let me tell her

Khushi: kya papa

Mr gupta: yesterday brij mom came with his proposal

Khushi: what?

Mr gupta: they said we pay them or ...

Buaji: bas jee kyun parashan kar raha ha aap

Khushi: buaji i am not a kid i should know everything

Mr gupta: beta you pack your bags 

Khushi: why?

Mr gupta: you are going with Buaji

Khushi:where?

Mr gupta: to her village

Khushi: why papa?

Mr gupta: because i will not let you get married to shyam in my life..

Khushi: Papa i cannot leave you if he is in my faith i will get married to him... 

Mr Gupta: walk in...

Buaji: he is not 

Khushi: buaji how he is not ? 

Buaji: bas beta

Khushi: please buaji dont live in fantasy like you use to tell us stories in our child hood ..a prince charming will come to rescue you .

buaji : Khushi he will come

Khushi: buaji tell me why papa had attack?

Buaji: Khushi bas...

khushi: tell papa i am ready to get married to him he should not worry ...

Buaji: beta

Khushi: buaji like this he will forgive all his dues

Buai: but beta

Khushi: aik na aik din to karni ha ... phir  paused ran to her room... closed the door behind her 

Buaji: Khushi

Mr Gupta: bahot bari hogai ha 

Buaji:  aisa nahi hoga kabhi nai... brij kai aik biwi pehle bhi maar chuki ha ..


Khushi open her diary

lonely in the desert of sorrow 

waiting for you to come & take me... pen down few lines

 picked  her sketch pencil   draw  eyes


murmur 

" these eyes always follow me ... 

you never let me sleep...

why  you force me to see dreams?"

ok don't  ..closed her sketch pad wrap her arms around her knees

murmur chupka se koi aaga... mama why you left me like that... you always you to say, mera kismat bahot achi ha?

Buaji: khushi please open door

Khushi: buaji please can i stay alone for some time

Buaji: you papa is calling you.

Khushi: jee aati hoon.  splash water at her face... "Khushi will not cry ? she is brave..."Looked at herself walk to Mr gupta room

MR gupta: beta come here

Khushi: jee 

MR Gupta: beta i don't want you to get married to Shyam

Khushi: papa dekha if i will get married to him you can live peace fully in this home .

MR gupta: i can live on road but i will not

Khushi: hold her hand.. papa  i want you to go & have a by pass , if i will marry him , we will have money for your operation

MR Gupta: for my operation i can't ruin your life 

Khushi: my sweet papa... my life will not be ruin , you will be fine after operation & i will be ... her throat choke...she ran out of room  bang with shyam

shyam: oh jee aaram se... looked at her

Khushi: ran in

shyam : oh sharma gai

Mr Gupta what are you doing here?

Shyam: oh papa jee i came her to remind you

Mr gupta: what?

Shyam: about our marriage.. twisted his mustached 

Mr Gupta:  kal tak ka time ha mera paas..if i pay you all the money will you leave my daughter.

shyam: oh papa jee How you will pay ? why you are so stubborn? karlo shadi ..

Mr gupta: shadi nai engagement if i am  not able to pay you...

shyam ok jee  i will come day after  tomorrow with band baja...

Mr gupta: ok but not before that. 

Shyam:shyam ka promise jee

Mr gupta: if i pay you will leave my daughter

shyam: ha jee.. but you can't pay... 

Mr gupta: ok you sign here...

Shyam: lelo sign you can't pay , as you are short of money for last 2 years i know that..

Mr gupta: now you may go..

shyam: i will go but , don't trick me..

Mr Gupta : i will not i am not like you , who had increased zero in account

shyam: smiled

In Delhi 

Nani: where are you going?

Arnav: i am going today

:Nani why?

Arnav: i have a meeting day after tomorrow ... 

Nani: ok wait

Arnav: jee

Nani: give this to gupta..

Arnav what is this?

Nani: once his wife gave me some money to keep , he might be needing it for operation, and give my letter to him...

Arnav: nani arrange guest room next to mine ...please buy some dolls toys as she is kid must not feel home sick here...

Nani : sure beta...

Arnav: can i leave now?

Nani: yes sure...

to be cont 

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Edited by naddiya26 - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
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edit: I was haunting this thread lol!
You gotta update it very fast, since I guess you only need to edit it, this is freakin' awesome!
Oh! And I wish Prince Charming aka Arnav will defo come to her rescue soon for giving the money and the letter!
Lol, I am grinning for the last lines, doll😆? good news is that, her room will be next to his!!⭐️
ready to get the shock Arnav?😆
Do it fast!!
A humble request from one of your most die hard fans!😍
Edited by -Murphy369- - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
Very nice...waiting for the next part...
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by -Murphy369-


res

edit: I was haunting this thread lol!
You gotta update it very fast, since I guess you only need to edit it, this is freakin' awesome!
Oh! And I wish Prince Charming aka Arnav will defo come to her rescue soon for giving the money and the letter!
Lol, I am grinning for the last lines, doll😆? good news is that, her room will be next to his!!⭐️
ready to get the shock Arnav?😆
Do it fast!!
A humble request from one of your most die hard fans!😍
thx dear that you are liking it ... i am feeling as if i am writing this ff once again... you can read the story ahead at my blog but that will spoil ...as i am planing to change a bit from Maaneet version... 

love you your comment is very precious for me .. 


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