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Posted: 22 October 2011 at 12:01pm | IP Logged



hi  i am here with a Ff which i wrote at Geet forum , this FF was very close to my heart i feel like sharing with my Arnhi readers ... it contain 50 parts if you guys like it  i will continue i am adding the character sketch here. 

Introduction

Arnav:25 years old young business man,his whole world revolved  around his  nani.  He love to stay alone doesn't like any kind of disturbance  in his life. Very reserved person. a cool minded.. 

Khushi: 23 years old  daughter of Mr gupta  done  graduation. Her mother passed away in a road accident , she is very depressed  after  sudden death of her mother.

Mr Gupta: friend of Arnav Late father ' 


Shyam : land lord of Khushi and want to marry her  ...blackmailing Khushi father .


So far I am adding only this if you  like the theme  do tell me so I further proceed ..


Rest character will be added as story  will proceed 



Edited by naddiya26 - 18 January 2012 at 3:04am

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Posted: 22 October 2011 at 12:04pm | IP Logged
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Khushi was read book sitting in garden.. some one knocked

khushi: who is it ?

Shyam: it me your house owner

Khushi: papa is not at home

shyam: ok you open I will wait

khushi: why don't you come after some time

Shyam : you open gate

khushi: wait.. walk in bua ji ( geet nanny since child hood)

Buaji : jee beta

Khushi: house owner  is at gate please see

Buaji : ok beta . you go in..

Buaji : open gate' come in

Shyam: looked around.." you  were  talking from other side of gate"

Buaji: why  you are asking that?

shyam: who'

Mr gupta : enter..coughing

shyam: namasta ji

Mr gupta: namasta

shyam: look like you are sick

Mr gupta: yes

shyam: I came here to get my money which I gave to your wife

Mr gupta: come in

shyam: I don't have time

Mr gupta: I think I have paid you back all the money

shyam: no you didn't.. smiled cunningly

Mr gupta: I have checked the papers  my wife took fifty thousand from you ?

shyam: yes she took but she was unable to return that in time

Mr gupta: I have  return you more  I think

shyam: took out his diary  "check this you guys have not paid me rent for last 6 months"

Mr gupta: started coughing

Buaji : I think you come some other day he is not well

shyam: oh why jee ? if he die who will pay my bills I will sit here till he give me my money

Buai: chup karo' Khushi beta pani lao

Khushi: walk with a glass of water her payal made a melodious sound in tense atmosphere ..

"papa take it let me call dr"

Mr Gupta: nahi beta I am fine'he didn't liked the way brij stared at Khushi

shyam:  I will come in evening you rest uncle jee' walk out

Buaji:  what happen to him?

Mr Gupta: pata nai ..he cough badly kept his hand on his heart.

Khushi: papa kya huwa

Mr gupta: kuch nai beta

Khushi: did you get your reports ?

Mr Gupta: nai beta' I want to rest walk in his room ask buaji to come

Khushi: ok helped him to get up

Buaji  jee ..

Mr gupta : bee ji where is Khushi?

Buaji : in her room

Mr gupta: bee ji meri reports theek nai ha '

Buaji:  quiet

Mr gupta: bee ji please find a nice 'pasued

Buai: you rest  I got what you want to say' walked out' looked at Khushi she was sitting in bedroom reading her books

Khushi: buaji why you are looking me like that?

Buaji : nothing beta come have lunch.

Khushi: I am not feeling hungry.

Buaji: walk out pata nahi kya hogaya  ha iss larki ko..

In evening.

Door bell rang

Buaji : dekho to beta kon ha?

Khushi: was doing gardening.. jee she open'' shyam standing with his mom

shyam Mom: aaraya shyam yeh tou chand ka tokra ha' kissed Khushi face(  like icecream)

shyam:smiled

Khsuhi: jee try to stop her' please come in I will call papa

Shyam Mom: yes call him quickly

Khushi: looked at beeji' cleaning her face with her duppata.

Mr gupta: walked out of his room.. jee

Shyam Mom: bhai jee  how are you?

Mr Gupta : I am fine..surprised to see her getting so chummy .

Buaji: have a seat please

shyam Mom:  bhai jee  I don 't like to pull thing'..

Mr gupta: I didn't get you

shyam mom:I am her to ask you  for your daughter hand for my son shyam

Mr Gupta: what?

shyam mom: don't get excited bhai jee' I know my son has a lot of qualities . kissed shyam forehead  who was hiding his face from handkerchief.

Mr gupta: started coughing.. it is impossible

Shyam mom: why bhai jee?

Mr gupta: my daughter is educated , he had never ..paused

shyam mom: so what  who see that? Now days money count.

Mr gupta : I will never let that happen in my life.

Shyam: if you will not marry your daughter to me leave this home in next 48 hours .. lets go maaji

shyam mom: oh beta let me talk to him

Shyam: bas .. he is about to die,I don't know why he is not securing  his daughter future.

Buaji: get out from here'.

Shyam: I am going..i will come after 48 hours leave house or marry your daughter with me'

Slam the door..

Buaji:  what happen to you ? looked at Mr Gupta  pale face'.khushi call daughter'

Khushi: was inside unaware of what happen out side '. called DR

*************************************************************************************

Dr: checked Mr gupta.

Khushi: what happen?

Dr: a heart attack .

Khushi: should we take him to hospital

Dr: no I have given him injection.

Khushi: ok.. thanks

Dr: call me beta whenever you want.

Khushi: jee'

She walked in room buaji was sitting next to him'praying

Khushi: buaji come here

Buaji: kya baat ha

khushi: kya huwa tha

Buaji: kuch nai beta

Khushi: buaji  please sach bola

Buaji: mera chand kuch nai'walked in MR gupta room..

Khushi: sit next to his feet "papa don't leave me alone please"

 Khushi was in state of shocked since her mom & 2 younger sister had died ..she didnot cried  ,she just hide her pain inside her always carry a fake smile at her face '

next morning

Mr Gupta  : buaji  please go & telegram this on this address..

BuaJi: what is this ? she saw him taking out a paper under his pillow.

Mr gupta: looked at Khushi sleeping in  buaji  lap  "help from my friend of Raizada"'.removed geet curls from her face

Buaji: I will do it let me first give you something to eat.

Mr gupta: first this please ..

Buaji: ok  she wake her up

Khushi: kya huwa''

Buaji; see papa is fine  you sit here I will come in ten mins.

Khushi: hug him "papa you scared me"

Mr Gupta: sorry beta

Buaji  walked out'.

 

In Delhi at 11'

Nani:was going through her mails '.

Servant : a telegram for you

Arnav: who was going through some files "for me"

Servant: Nani

Nani: let me see'

 Namasta maaji I hope you are fine, maaji I am sick I have to go for by pass , I can't take Khushi alone with me to a unknown city ,If you don't mind can I send her to you' please maaji  you are my last hope.

Gupta

Nani read it loud'

Arnav: who is he?

Nani: he is your father school friend, last year his wife & 2 daughter died In road accident..

Arnav: so sad

Nani;Arnavif you don't mind can I ask him to send his daughter.

Arnav: how old she would be

Nani: his elder two daughter died , she might be 12 or 13 years old.

Arnav: oh poor child yes for sure ask him to send.

nani: you send telegram

Arnav: give me address' I will right away send'.

Nani: thank you  beta..

Arnav: Nani' bachai ha I will go & bring her myself how she will travel alone.bahot choti ha..just a child

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Posted: 22 October 2011 at 12:25pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by aquablue17

wow tht sounds rele good! do add me to ur pm list. Always hav high expectations from u
first part added Wink

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Posted: 22 October 2011 at 12:55pm | IP Logged
Thank you sooo much for the pm!!! i love this new ff! omg shyam is a nutcase here too! arnav you better go get khushi!
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Posted: 22 October 2011 at 1:22pm | IP Logged
Nice start!! lol...Nani & arnav think khushi is 12/13yr old! Would love to see their reaction soon! xxx

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new concept. liked it. Do PM me when you update. Big smile

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