Very detailed. ☺️ I even had problem reading certain parts because I have seriously vivid imagination and it was like watching a film. ☺️ But the OS is very well written Hetu.
Hi hetu dear u posted it here it's awesome, brilliant, beautiful, romantic, hot, passionate part loved it I loved this part and original one also both r my fav love u lots rakhi
P.S.: plz donn't copy paste my comments...me only make it 4 my frndz...if anyone do it again as me saw many of my comments r copied me'll report it...u guys plz make comment urself...u can use my componets indevisual...but don't coppied it whole as my post...😡
P.S.S.: Plz guys also comment on my stuff...me tried to post comment in everyones...but my most of buddies didn't comment...if u not liked tell also...plz guys...😲😕me also want encougement & appreciation dears...
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guys...me sad...me PM ed almost 500 but comment only...17-18..increased 30 now...😕
me said u guys ealier if u don't like plz tell me...but it really hurts a lot...me try to reply each of u...many serials me don't watch but me read ur ff's ...checking out ur updated stuff's...n try to make a sweet comment which u guys liked...but u never check my any stuff...me really busy wid my studies...but also don't want to hurt my frndz...i try to comment ecah of u woh Pmed me...but only few of u ans my Pms...if don't want me to bother u...plz tell me...me never pm u...4 my any update...
but i updated 4 whom woh waited...me know just few..but me updated for them surely...but that surely me said..that me really hurt abut u guys...😭me uncontorled sob.sob..😭
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So as per rules ,we are extremely sorry but will hv to close this Fanfic ..hope u understand
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4 pm me dear..😃
4 ur new os...🥳
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updates...👏👏..
updates really... 
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