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Posted: 27 December 2011 at 2:18pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -KaJenAbhiya-

Originally posted by gupta.aditi20

hey medzi...
read the last three parts now...
umm.. they were nice...
part 33... i was so angry at armaan for doing that to ridz...  but glad ridz not letting him overpower her... bbut i would have loved it.. if u would have shown armaan's little bit guilt... i am not sayin exaggeratin... but i seriously felt armaan was too wrong at that time...
 in part 34.. whwn ridz started to take revenge... i felt lik thank god... parantha part was damn funny... i also loved AR moments a lot... but felt like how ridz so easily forgotten what happened last nite... but as the saying goes love is blind... so it felt okay...
n last part was somewhat mysterious.. .what is it abt christmas... that made armaan so  uneasy... hope ridz finds out soon.. and hep him... but seriously want armaan to realize what he is doing to ridz is completely wrong... firstly there was no mistake of ridz.. at all and then too if she suffers.. i'll really will feel bad for her...
and last bt not the least... that vivek guy sounded like a trouble.. i dont know felt like.. he is associated with ridz past... ab aisa thodi ho sakta hai saari problem sirf.. humaare hero ko ho... but hope so not agan that trying to rape situation.. i am kind of bored of it.. in every ff there's a same situation with a vivek guy... but thats only my opinion... in this ff i feel like ridz is strong enough to handle those kind of problems...bt thats my point... even if u are planning on this track.. i am so completely hooked onto it...
and yeah i forgot to mention abt maya... loved that part the most...
but all in all as ur story is named dangerous desire..i felt like the track completely suits it...
cont. supersoon
Hey!  Thanks!  I'm very glad you liked the parts and I'll definitely take your suggestions into consideration. :)  I'll continue very soon. :)
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Posted: 27 December 2011 at 2:19pm | IP Logged
Yes we are! Big smile
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Posted: 27 December 2011 at 2:22pm | IP Logged
Ab jaldi jaldi make a new thread 

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Posted: 27 December 2011 at 2:23pm | IP Logged
LOL!  I've made a new thread already! Big smile
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Posted: 27 December 2011 at 2:26pm | IP Logged

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Posted: 27 December 2011 at 11:22pm | IP Logged
awesome update, just loved it...
waiting for the next part...
do update soon...
thanks for the PM & TC...

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Posted: 28 December 2011 at 1:17am | IP Logged
hey Medzi!
amazing part girl!
loved AR hot moments! so passionate!
what happened 2 Armaan suddenly?
can't wait 4 next part!
plz cont soon
thnx 4 pm
luv...Sunita:)
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Posted: 28 December 2011 at 5:40am | IP Logged
I have still not started reading and you are on another thread...congrats :)

Edited by nandinii_goyal - 28 December 2011 at 5:40am

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