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VirMan - FF - A Cindrella Story (Index & Imp Note) (Page 2)

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Posted: 20 October 2011 at 3:17pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by phoenixgirl

nice one sana!!! I guess Virat will confuse mansi with manvi and end up picking her instead...

Yes kind of like that

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Posted: 20 October 2011 at 6:55pm | IP Logged
nice start... waiting for the next one..

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Posted: 21 October 2011 at 5:21am | IP Logged
Please continue, that was lovely! :) 

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Posted: 21 October 2011 at 11:19am | IP Logged

Hey Guys! Here's a short update, i couldnt write a bigger one because i have a test but will update more soon.

Chapter 2

Jeevika & Manvi are waiting for their baggage.

Jeevika: Yeh baggage aane mein kitna time lag raha hai

Manvi: Haan

Jeevika's phone rings

Jeevika: Hello

Servant: Madam woh aapki ma ki tabiyat aachanak kharaab ho gayi, aap ghar jaldi aa jayi yeh

Jeevika: (tensed) Theek hai, Main Abhi Pahunch Rahi Hoon

Manvi: Kya Hua?

Jeevika: Ma ki tabiyat kharaab ho gayi hai, humein jaldi nikalna hoga

Manvi: Par mujhe lagta hai ki baggage aane mein abhi kaafi time lag jayega…..Ek kaam karo, tum jao, main yehi wait karti hoon

Jeevika: Par Main Tumhe Yahaan Akeli kaise chod sakti hoon….

Manvi: Jeevika tum meri chinta mat karo aur jao. Main driver ke saath aa jaungi.

Jeevika hugs Manvi

Jeevika: Thank You! ( with tears )

Manvi: Aunty theek ho jayegi, Don't Worry!

Jeevika: Hmm

She leaves.

Virat reaches the airport & was walking towards the gate when he bumps into a man carrying a board too. Both of their boards fall & get exchanged. Virat goes and stands with the board having Manvi's name.

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Posted: 21 October 2011 at 11:58am | IP Logged
@Sana - awesome yaar. Thumbs Up

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Posted: 21 October 2011 at 12:47pm | IP Logged
That was excellent.!Seriously.!Continue soon and thanks for the pm Sana.!Embarrassed

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Posted: 21 October 2011 at 1:04pm | IP Logged
Thanks for the awesome FF ..! :D 
Will be waiting to here more .. (: <3 

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Posted: 21 October 2011 at 1:04pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by xxXSejalXxx

That was excellent.!Seriously.!Continue soon and thanks for the pm Sana.!Embarrassed
Thnx Sejal!Blushing

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